Jeffrey Le

9/9/14
Response to First Essay
After writing my first essay, I learned that I need to pay attention to my grammar issues.
My paper had so many mistakes and it seemed like it was made last minute. I also realized that I
have to prepared for class, since the paper was last minute. The writing process of this paper
made me realized that I have to manage my time efficiently. Also, when I write I need to
elaborate more when I make a statement. I have to cite my sources effectively and I need to
make my essay more personal in my opinion because it is a paper on what you believe in. I
ended up making it a research paper and I didnt bother on elaborating on facts.