Name:EmilyDawson

Task

Response

T+/T

AgoodstartyouranalysisisgoodbutIwould
likeyoutofocusoneachpictureindividually.
YourfirstsetofobservationaregoodsI
particularlyliketheimagewiththeumbrella.
Howeverthesecondsetarefartoosmallyou
mustmakesuretoputupyoureditsaswell
asthecontactsheetsyourfinaledits.

Youdemonstrateaverygoodunderstanding
oftheprocessbothvisuallyandinwritten
form.Howeverasabovepleaseputyouredits
alongsideyourcontactsheets.Your
photoshopworkisexcellentand
demonstratesastrongunderstandingofthe
process.

Longexposure
FrancescaWoodmanArtistpage
1stresponse
2ndresponse
Photoshopghostimage

Excellentworkwelldoneboththepractical
andanalyticalworkshowgreatunderstanding
oftheprocessandtheArtist.
Whereisyourphotoshopghostimage.

Lightpainting
MichealBosankoArtistpage
1stresponse
2ndresponse
Photoshopresponce

Yourclassworkimagesaregoodandshowa
goodunderstandingofthetechnique.To
improvethemyoucouldtrydarkeningthe
backgroundtobringoutthelightHoweveri
wouldliketoseemoreimages.The
homeworkimageslookgoodbutasabove
aretosmallandneedtobeenlarged.The
photoshoppieceisgoodbutIfeelitlacksa
bitoftheglowrequiredaroundthering.

Whereareyourfinalpiecesthereshouldbea
seriesof6imagesthatrepresentthedifferent
sectionsoftheproject

Levitation
YowaYowaArtistpage
1stresponce
2ndresponse

Zoomblur
Artistpage
1stresponse
2ndresponse
Photoshopresponse

FinalPiece

WAG:B

Target:B

FinalComment:
WelldoneMillieonthewholeaverygoodprojectpleasereadthecommentsaboveandmakethenecessary
changestoyourwork.