Name: Anna

Unit: 1.2
Movement

Target Grade

Task:

AO1:
Development and
Analysis

Links to and analysis of:

Levitation: Yowa Yowa
Blur: Francesca
Woodman and / or
Dominic Harris
GIF (Romain Laurent)
Light painting (Michael
Bossanko)

AO2:
Progression in the
quality of ideas,
techniques and skill.
How have the photos
been refined?
Annotation: WWW
&EBI
Techniques
Definition and subject
specific vocab.

Levitation

Zoom Blur
Movement Gifs
Light painting (& strobe
if appropriate.

AO3:
Quality of the
photographs and
technical ability in the
photographing and
manipulation of an
image.
Control of the formal
elements and
composition
techniques.

Application of technique

Ao4:
Final Piece- this should
be a culmination of
your development and
the experimentation
you have done.

Light painting GiF

Grade:

Composition
Location and subject
matter
Organisation of Weebly

Teachers comments:

Excellent analysis and I like how you draw the

understanding you have of the photographers you
discuss into your annotation.
Well researched intentions and technique. Could you
have looked into her life more and drawn parallels
between the context to Woodman and her themes /
images?
Suggested photographers to analyse when we
revisit this project.

T
(-/
+)
T

Your annotation is always fluid and incorporates

appropriate language. How could you have
improved the composition of the Levitation images?
You clearly developed your understanding regarding
exposure but was the drinking fountain the right
choice?
Clear description of the two processes. The
comparison helps illustrate your point.
A great first attempt at a GiF/ The secret is in not
moving the camera.
Great idea to have friends spelling out words. The
outcomes are great. Clear description of the process
however, I do feel that you could have
experimented further with the strobe in photoshop.
You needed to alter the levels to counteract the fact
that the images are slightly over exposed.

Clear description of the process however, I do feel

you could have persevered a little more with the
quality and composition of some of your imagesLevitation for example.
In order to reach your target grade you must
consider the location and composition more
consistently across all tasks. Reflect on what you
have done during your shoot and consider how you
could make it even better.
Well organised weebly making good visual
connections with photographer.

T-

Great prep piece but unfortunately I cannot open

the final one as your youtube account is private.