Name: Myriam

Task: Movement

Response:

T+/T-

Ao1
- Mind map
- Analysis of Natsumi Hayashi (YowaYowa)
- Analysis of Francesca Woodman
- Analysis of 3 selected photographers

Good work. Well done. Both the practical and

analytical work show great understanding of the
process and the Artist. Please finish analysing final
Woodman image, use the analysis for key words.
Complete Michael Bossanko artist analysis, see
Weebly or me.

T-

Ao2
Explanation of techniques. Annotations of WWW and EBI.
Progress from 1st to 2nd response.
- Levitation
- Zoom blur
- Movement of a figure
- Light painting

You have explained the techniques using all the

camera setting that shows me your understanding.
However you need to show your progression from 1st
to 2nd response. Next time include all 1st responses. I
like the way you have combined techniques in your
work. Do you have a tripod? This would help to
control your techniques more for light painting and
create even more creative responses from different
angles.

Ao3
Quality of the photographs taken:
- Application of technique
- Composition
- Other success criteria (e.g. Amount of photos)

The compositions are developing well and the

subject has been recorded well in a suitable location.
Think about the angles, viewpoints and the
backgrounds of all of your photos. I like the way you
have showed your Photoshop process using screen
grabs, well done, this is what AS level do!

Ao4
Final response:
- Present 6 selected photographs
- Evaluation of WWW, EBI. Why did you choose your 6
selected photo

Please present your final images asap and evaluate

WWW EBI. Great light painting images here; these
are your most creative photos and use the technique
well.

WAG: B+

Target: A

Final Comment: You have only just missed your target; your work is very good and shows great progress from first to
second response and creativity.

Ao1

Develop their ideas through investigations informed by

contextual and other sources, demonstrating
analytical and cultural understanding

Ao2

Refine their ideas through experimenting and

selecting appropriate resources, media, materials, techniques
and processes

Ao3

Record ideas, observations and insights relevant to

their intentions in visual and/or other forms

Ao4

Present a personal, informed and meaningful response

Demonstrating analytical and critical understanding,
realising intentions and, where appropriate,
making connections between visual, written, oral or
other elements.