Name: Grace

Unit: 1.4 Landscape

Task:

Teachers comments:

Ao1:

3 selected photographers (9 photos)

Analysis

John Divola (3 photos)

Your analysis is excellent and uses key photographic terms.

Continue working at this level and try and use the formal
elements knowledge that you have gained when analysing
future photographs. You should consider adding other relevant
photographers that you have researched, and adding them
under a new subheading. This will demonstrate exceptional
critical awareness to the examiner. There are a few minor
spelling errors, also don not abbreviate (eg: use do not instead
of dont)
All of the tasks have been complete using the techniques
successfully. You have demonstrated excellent progression
from first to second response. Although you express your
boredom of some of the tasks, they could be the ones that
are most successful. Your challenge is to make the tasks work
well for you through experimenting with lighting, objects and
general composition.

David Hockney (3 photos)

Ao2:

School environment

Progression
from fist to
second
response

Framing the environment

Techniques

The Formal Elements

Definitions
WWW, EBI

Panographies / Photo joiners

My London

Ao3:

Application of technique

Quality of the
photographs

Composition
Other success criteria

Your My London works are your best, showing your creativity

and interests. I am impressed by your locations and that you
are being adventurous.
As mentioned above, both technique and compositions are
progressing well. Are you experimenting with a tripod? This
could help to shoot a series of shots from the same position
whilst focusing on zooming in and out to produce a series of
image.

You have started to use the sub heading Refining my

techniques, continue to do this for all tasks in the next unit.
Ao4:
Final Piece

Grade: A-

Present 6 photographs

A good range of photos that you have taken in the landscape

unit. Continue to consider different viewpoints and being
experimental in your compositions to make the photos unique.
You could consider editing some of your images in Photoshop
and explaining this using EBI WWW.

T-

Target: A

Final Comment: Excellent presentation on Weebly. You are working very well, continue to refine your work and discuss
ideas with me that develop your interests outside the set tasks. These will be what will get you the highest marks.

Ao1

Develop their ideas through investigations informed by

contextual and other sources, demonstrating
analytical and cultural understanding

Ao2

Refine their ideas through experimenting and

selecting appropriate resources, media, materials, techniques and
processes

Ao3

Record ideas, observations and insights relevant to

their intentions in visual and/or other forms

Ao4

Present a personal, informed and meaningful response

Demonstrating analytical and critical understanding,
realising intentions and, where appropriate,
making connections between visual, written, oral or
other elements.