Name: Grace

Task: Movement

Response:

T+/T-

Ao1
- Mind map
- Analysis of Natsumi Hayashi (YowaYowa)
- Analysis of Francesca Woodman
- Analysis of 3 selected photographers

Excellent work. Well done. Both the practical and

analytical work show great understanding of the
process and the Artist. Always use the analysis hand
out to help you and make use of new relevant
vocabulary.

Ao2
Explanation of techniques. Annotations of WWW and EBI.
Progress from 1st to 2nd response.
- Levitation
- Zoom blur
- Movement of a figure
- Light painting

You have explained the techniques using all the

camera setting that shows me your understanding.
Good progression from 1st to 2nd response. Please
separate 1st and 2nd (h/w images) response for
levitation, in the same way that you did for zoom blur.
Great to see you making use of a tripod, that will
improve the quality of your photos. I am impressed
with your third responses for movement of a figure
(Woodman), these use the technique well.

Ao3
Quality of the photographs taken:
- Application of technique
- Composition
- Other success criteria (e.g. Amount of photos)

The compositions are developing well and the

subject has been recorded well in a suitable location.
For future photos, aim to refine your compositions
and avoid unnecessary objects or background
appearing in your photos. Keep the shots clean and
simple, use a blank wall as a backdrop where
relevant.

Ao4
Final response:
- Present 6 selected photographs
- Evaluation of WWW, EBI. Why did you choose your 6
selected photo

A good selection of final images, demonstrating your

understanding of this project. Your compositions are
developing and becoming more refined. The light
painting images work well. Be creative and ask me
for any help.

WAG: B+

Target: A

Final Comment: Very good analytical work here. You have only just missed your target level. Be creative and experiment
with your homework photos and you will surely get your target.

Ao1

Develop their ideas through investigations informed by

contextual and other sources, demonstrating
analytical and cultural understanding

Ao2

Refine their ideas through experimenting and

selecting appropriate resources, media, materials, techniques
and processes

Ao3

Record ideas, observations and insights relevant to

their intentions in visual and/or other forms

Ao4

Present a personal, informed and meaningful response

Demonstrating analytical and critical understanding,
realising intentions and, where appropriate,
making connections between visual, written, oral or
other elements.