Name: Edward

Unit: 1.4 Landscape

Task:

Teachers comments:

Ao1:

3 selected photographers (9 photos)

Analysis

John Divola (3 photos)

Your analysis is progressing well and uses key photographic

terms. In the next unit, use the formal elements knowledge
that you have gained when analysing future photographs.
As an extension, you could consider adding other relevant
photographers that you have researched, and adding them
under a new subheading.
Avoid copy and pasting sentences, this will not gain you any
extra marks.
All of the tasks have been complete using the techniques
successfully. You have demonstrated excellent progression
from first to second response. Well done.

T+

David Hockney (3 photos)

Ao2:

School environment

Progression
from fist to
second
response

Framing the environment

Techniques

The Formal Elements

Definitions
WWW, EBI

Panographies / Photo joiners

Your My London photos and others where you have chosen

unique locations demonstrate your creativity and interests.
Second response to photo-joiners at the garages is a good
picture.

My London

Ao3:

Application of technique

Quality of the
photographs

Composition
Other success criteria

Most of the tasks have been complete using the techniques

successfully. You need to make sure that you are controlling
the exposure levels. For the next unit you should experiment
by reducing your exposure levels. Continue to visit interesting
locations in London that you have a connection to that will
inspire your photos.

T+

Some images seem slightly blurry due to lack of a tripod.

Either use a high ISO or a tripod. I am impressed by your
locations and that you are being adventurous.
Ao4:
Final Piece

Grade: B

Present 6 photographs

Please use enlargement images, some cannot be enlarged

which is a disappointing.
I am happy with your final images, they have been composed
well. In order to progress with your work, try to find something
that connects your photos from each task so that when they
are presented as a final set of 6 the examiner can see a
connection in your style and technique.

T+

Target: C

Final Comment: Good presentation on Weebly. You are working well, continue to refine your work and discuss ideas with
me that develop your interests outside the set tasks. A great improvement on this unit, well done.

Ao1

Develop their ideas through investigations informed by

contextual and other sources, demonstrating
analytical and cultural understanding

Ao2

Refine their ideas through experimenting and

selecting appropriate resources, media, materials, techniques and processes

Ao3

Record ideas, observations and insights relevant to

their intentions in visual and/or other forms

Ao4

Present a personal, informed and meaningful response

Demonstrating analytical and critical understanding,
realising intentions and, where appropriate,
making connections between visual, written, oral or
other elements.