Name: Monty

Unit: 1.2
Movement

Target Grade

Task:

AO1:
Development and
Analysis

Links to and analysis of:

Levitation: Yowa Yowa
Blur: Francesca
Woodman and / or
Dominic Harris
GIF (Romain Laurent)
Light painting (Michael
Bossanko)

AO2:
Progression in the
quality of ideas,
techniques and skill.
How have the photos
been refined?
Annotation: WWW
&EBI
Techniques
Definition and subject
specific vocab.

Levitation

Zoom Blur

Movement Gifs
Light painting (& strobe
if appropriate.

Teachers comments:

Too brief. Your analysis describes the images but

lacks depth of research.
Still need research into Woodman, particularly her
intentions. How do the events of her life affect
how you feel about the work?
Suggested photographers to analyse when we
revisit this project

You need to be more consistent in your annotation

and completion of tasks. Each task must have the
process described and examples.
In order to surpass your target grade you must
consider the location and composition more
consistently across all tasks.

Application of technique

Organisation of Weebly

Try to have a more uniform approach to the

presentation of your images on your weebly. They
can be bigger! The order seems a little strange but
maybe this is merely because you reused some
early images for different tasks.

Ao4:
Final Piece- this should
be a culmination of
your development and
the experimentation
you have done.

Light painting GiF

A great final outcome that builds on well from your

initial experiment. I particularly like the parts where
it becomes more abstract.

Grade:

Location and subject

matter

T-

You clearly developed your understanding regarding

exposure and achieved many good examples. I am
really pleased you had another go at home. You
have learnt from your initial experiments and
produced an effective outcome.
You must still concern yourself with the correct
exposure when using this technique. Your
explanation of the process is good and I know you
understand it however, how could you improve your
images in Photoshop? Consider contrast and
composition.
A phenomenal GiF!
Plenty of ambitious experiments- I know how
difficult effects like the orb are to do.

AO3:
Quality of the
photographs and
technical ability in the
photographing and
manipulation of an
image.
Control of the formal
elements and
composition
techniques.

Composition

T
(-/
+)

T+

A-