Name: Male

Unit: 1.2
Movement

Target Grade

Task:

AO1:
Development and
Analysis

Links to and analysis of:

Levitation: Yowa Yowa
Blur: Francesca
Woodman and / or
Dominic Harris
GIF (Romain Laurent)
Light painting (Michael
Bossanko)

AO2:
Progression in the
quality of ideas,
techniques and skill.
How have the photos
been refined?
Annotation: WWW
&EBI
Techniques

Levitation
Zoom Blur
Movement Gifs
Light painting (& strobe
if appropriate.

Definition and subject

specific vocab.
AO3:
Quality of the
photographs and
technical ability in the
photographing and
manipulation of an
image.
Control of the formal
elements and
composition
techniques.

Application of technique

Ao4:
Final Piece- this should
be a culmination of
your development and
the experimentation
you have done.

Light painting GiF

Grade:

Composition
Location and subject
matter
Organisation of Weebly

Teachers comments:

Good visual connection to Yowa Yowa but no

analysis. You could at least talk about her
technique.
Woodman research is better but could you
discover more about her intentions. How do the
events of her life affect how you feel about the
work?
Suggested photographers to analyse when we
revisit this project

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A brief description but why are the images so small.

Enlarge at least one.
The photos for this task are really strong but the
description is a little confused. I cant believe you
did not enlarge some of the great shots you took!
A strong GiF. You have really persevered with this
technique. How could you have made the
movement more fluid?
Annotation is a little better in terms of discussing
exposure but the images are a little simple.

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You need to be more consistent in your annotation

and completion of tasks. Each task must have the
process described and examples.
Technique does improve however, there are too
many missing tasks to achieve your target grade.
Make sure you use the appropriate language when
talking about exposure etc.
Presentation of images really sells you short. Make
sure you have best images uploaded to the full
width on your weebly.

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Where is this?

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