Landscape - Millie Dawson

AO

AO1:
Develop

Task

Comment

Initial artist research

John divola research
Initial framing task
David hockney research
My London Artist selection

Research into other photographers which

informs the development of personal
ideas.
Development of personal theme.
Breadth of ideas supported by
research throughout.

Your artist analysis is good but you

need to make sure that you are
consistent with the level of detail
you put into your writing. John
divola
and
your
London
photographers
need
to
be
expanded. You must also make it
clear how the work you are looking
at has influenced your own visual
practise.

Mark

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Artist and me sections are good for

this (see example below

Independent approach.

AO2:
Refine

Second framing tasks

Photo joiners
My london response 1
My london response 2
My London response 3

AO3:
Record

Formal Elements- understanding

Formal Elements- application

Formal elements walk

Control of exposure etc when

taking a photograph

Your work again at times shows

some refinement but as with your
analysis it is not consistent
throughout the project. Each class
task has a homework attached to
demonstrate your understanding
and how you have improved on
the technique learnt in class. You
are missing a homework joiner
and your divola h/w is to short.

This is a good section that

demonstrates strong
understanding of the process and
theory behind it.
The images are interesting but
which element did you choose to
look at for this section please
make it clear which one you have
chosen

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AO4:
Present

Final piece
Connections made to the work of
others.

WAG:C+

TARGET:B

No final piece at this stage.

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