Louis Irvin

AO

AO1:
Develop

Task

Comment

Initial artist research

John divola research
Initial framing task
David hockney research
My London Artist selection

Your artist analysis needs to be in

depth. At present you are not using
the analysis sheet that describes
key words to use when talking
about photographs. It is key that
you expand your written work
throughout the unit moving away
from
simple
describing
your
thoughts on the images. You must
also make it clear how the work you
are looking at has influenced your
own visual practise.

Mark

As mentioned above there is no

analysis about Hockneys work you
must add text to the images.

AO2:
Refine

Second framing tasks

Photo joiners
My london response 1
My london response 2
My London response 3

Your john divola classwork

responses are good and show a
good understanding of the
process but you must explain
what you are doing when using
the framing technique.

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Where are your joiners

The London responses are
excellent the move into looking at
markets works really well and
could definitely be developed
further.
AO3:
Record

Formal Elements- understanding

Formal Elements- application
Formal elements walk

This is a good section that

demonstrates strong
understanding of the process and
the theory behind it. I really like
the images of the classic cars
where were these taken? can you
put in a copy of the route you took
on a map and upload it to your
weebly.

T-

AO4:
Present

WAG - C

Final piece

What and where are your final set

of observations

TARGET - C

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