Hannah Syed - landscape

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Task

Comment

AO1:

Initial artist research

Your artist analysis is to brief and must

Develop

John divola research

be expanded to improve your grade.

Initial framing task

Use the analysis sheet to go more

David hockney

indepth and improve your analyse

research

further.

Mark

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My London Artist
selection

Your John Divola analysis is again too

short and needs to be expanded
Hockney work must be completed and
expanded to improve the mark in this
section.
Where are your London artists

AO2:

Second framing tasks

Your john divola classwork responses

Refine

Photo joiners

are good and show a good

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understanding of the process but you

My london response 1

must explain what you are doing

My london response 2

when using the framing technique and

My London response 3

how you have refined the technique

from classwork to homework.
Your joiners are good but there should
be three from class and then a further
three from home
The London responses are good but
there should be three responses a
final set of photographs needs to be
taken.

AO3:
Record

Formal Elementsunderstanding

This is a good section that displays a

good photographic eye and an
understanding of the technique, well

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done. I particularly like the images

taken in the car park they have a real
Formal Elements-

sense of atmosphere and mood.

application
Formal elements walk
AO4:

Final piece

What and where are your final pieces.

Present

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TARGET - B

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