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JulieKim

Feb.12.15
Period3
CloseReadingAssignment
Tome,theHailshamsoundsmorelikeajuvenileprison.IntheNeverLetMeGo,Foreachthing
youputin,youwerepaidinExchangeTokenstheguardiansdecidedhowmanyyourparticular
masterpiecemeritedandthenonthedayoftheExchangeyouwentalongwithyourtokensand
boughtthestuffyouliked.(12).Sofar,thestorydidntincludeanythingaboutKathysfamilynorany
ofthestudentsparents.ItisquiteweirdhowKathydoesntthinkaboutherparentsalthoughsheisin
boardingschool.Ithinkitsnormalforastudentstillyoungtothinkabouthisorherparentsandget
homesickwhenshelivesapartfromthem.Also,thebookonlyfeaturedfewadultswhoworkfor
Hailsham.Usually,mostofthebooksintroducethesettingsandbackgroundsattheearlierchapters.
BecauseIshigurodidntmentionanythingaboutKathysfamily,Iinferthattheressomethingabout
Kathysparents.
Attheearlierage,youtendtolearnfaster.Lookingbacknow,IcanseewhytheExchanges
becamesoimportanttous.(13).Childrenlearnfasterandtheyarelikeapieceofblankpaper.Theyare
notsophisticatedandmostobedient.Theyareeasilyinfluencedmorelikeabrainwashbyadults.
Learningatearlierstagesetsupthefundamentalinsightsforchildrentomingleinthesociety.However,
itseemslikeHailshamispreventingthekidstogetexposedinanysortofoutsideresources.Insteadof
preparingthemtosurviveandliveinthesociety,theschoolisconstantlymakingstudentsmake
artworks,andcollectthoseartworks.Bypracticingconstantly,studentsartskillswillenhance;as
studentsgrowolder,theirvalueofartworkswillincreasebecausetheyhaveimproved.Ifeellike
Hailshamistakingadvantageofthestudentstobenefitthemselvestheadultswhoruntheschool.

IshiguroemphasizeswordslikeExchangesandSales.Inchaptertwo,Ishigurostates,theSales
weresomethingelse,whichIllcometolaterofbuildingupacollectionofpersonalpossessions.(13).
WordslikeSalesandExchangesinvokereaderscuriosity.Ishiguroexplainswhatthoseeventsareand
whattheydo.Butdoesntexplainfurtheraboutthereasonbehindthoseevents.Itisalsounnaturalhow
theseeventsbecamesuchabigpartinstudentslife.Itsalmostasifthatstheonlyentertainmentthey
got.Throughtheseevents,Inoticedthatthestudentshadlimitedfreedom.Theschoolsinfluencingthe
studentstoadapttosuchlifeatyoungagesothattheywouldntfindanythingweirdandhowoutof
placetheHailshamis.Also,wasitnecessarytomentionabouttheSales?Evenifhedidincludedit,he
doesntexplainanythingaboutit.Itslikeheiswarningaboutthebigwavethatsaheadofyou.

Exceeds(4)
Providesseveral
significantexamples
fromthetext.
Analysisisdetailed,
insightful,and
nuanced,looking
wellbeyond
summary,focusing
oncraft,structure,
andauthorial
choice.

Meets(3.4)
Providessignificant
examplesfromthe
text.Analysisis
detailedand
insightful,looking
beyondsummary,
focusingoncraft,
structure,and
authorialchoice.

Approaches(3)
Providessome
examplesfromthe
text.Whileanalysis
ispresent,itmay
lackdetailand
insight.Mayfocus
moreonsummary
thanfocusingon
craft,structure,and
authorialchoice.

Beginning(3>)
Analysislooking
beyondsummary
mayormaynotbe
present.Overall
lackingindetailand
insightintocraft,
structure,and
authorialchoice.

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