Feedback on my Mock up

The main criticism for my mock up was simply that it didn't look enough like a real magazine. This is a
completely valid evaluation and I agree completely. In order to improve this I will need to use a better
software that is designed more for this sort of task. Most of the feedback was constructive criticism in
ways that it could be improved. One thing that was pointed out to me was that it wasnt very easy on the
eye. Another criticism was that there wasnt much to look at. I will work on this by using, like I said a
different and better software and add more detail to it. I was however praised on my photography for the
magazine, it was said that the pictures I took and used for the magazine looked quite professional and
looked quite good on the magazine. My Contents was similar to my front page, not enough going whilst
looking not enough like a real magazine.