The document provides feedback on a proposal from Samuel Painter. Joseph Birch notes that while the objectives and qualifications sections are clear, the proposal is missing statements of the problem, solution, and method. Birch also suggests expanding on costs by explaining where they will be generated rather than just totaling costs for each phase. Overall, the feedback aims to strengthen the proposal by adding missing elements and providing more details in the costs section.
The document provides feedback on a proposal from Samuel Painter. Joseph Birch notes that while the objectives and qualifications sections are clear, the proposal is missing statements of the problem, solution, and method. Birch also suggests expanding on costs by explaining where they will be generated rather than just totaling costs for each phase. Overall, the feedback aims to strengthen the proposal by adding missing elements and providing more details in the costs section.
The document provides feedback on a proposal from Samuel Painter. Joseph Birch notes that while the objectives and qualifications sections are clear, the proposal is missing statements of the problem, solution, and method. Birch also suggests expanding on costs by explaining where they will be generated rather than just totaling costs for each phase. Overall, the feedback aims to strengthen the proposal by adding missing elements and providing more details in the costs section.
Introduction: Necessary : Mostly good, could forecast rest of proposal
Problem: Not Stated. : Should have Objectives: Necessary: Gave some questions that are not objectives. If the objective is to answer those questions then your Problem or goal are not sufficiently developed Solution: Not Stated. : Should have Method: Not Stated : Not too important in our case. not a requirement Resources: Not Stated : Fine Schedule : Necessary : No time estimation Qualifications: Necessary : good explanation Management : Not Stated : Fine Costs: Necessary: Should be expanded to display some reasoning.
By: Joseph Birch
Great formatting Objectives are clear and concise. Your Qualifications are great for this project. I would make Solutions its own section. There is no Conclusion section for this memo. Your Schedule is well written. Instead of totaling up the costs of Phase 1, 2, 3, explain in a Cost section as to where costs are being generated.