I really didn't change much from my draft, I didn't see any problem with what I had written. I guess you could say that the main changes that I made were to add more details and made it more personal as well. The thing that I liked was that what my readers said about their feelings was pretty much what I was going for while writing this paper.
I really didn't change much from my draft, I didn't see any problem with what I had written. I guess you could say that the main changes that I made were to add more details and made it more personal as well. The thing that I liked was that what my readers said about their feelings was pretty much what I was going for while writing this paper.
I really didn't change much from my draft, I didn't see any problem with what I had written. I guess you could say that the main changes that I made were to add more details and made it more personal as well. The thing that I liked was that what my readers said about their feelings was pretty much what I was going for while writing this paper.
I really didn't change much from my draft, I didn't see any problem with what I had written. I didn't think that the reader responses were of much help because I did answer a lot of the questions they had about my paper before i got their responses. I guess you could say that the main changes that I made were to add more details and made it more personal as well. The thing that I liked was that what my readers said about their feelings was pretty much what i was going for while writing this assignment.