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Joel P Sawyer

Professor Debbie Jizi


UWRT 1101-76
September 20, 2015

Literacy Narrative Changes


I really didn't change much from my draft, I didn't see any problem with what I
had written. I didn't think that the reader responses were of much help because I did
answer a lot of the questions they had about my paper before i got their responses. I
guess you could say that the main changes that I made were to add more details and
made it more personal as well. The thing that I liked was that what my readers said
about their feelings was pretty much what i was going for while writing this assignment.

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