Outline Template

Introduction

Hook: Do you know baby box?

Connecting details: Baby box is a box where people can anonymously bring
unwanted infants and leave them to be found and cared for.

II

Thesis: Baby Box has a lot of negative problems.

Body paragraph 1

Topic sentence: Because of baby box, there are social problems.

Supporting detail: It makes social atmosphere to give up their babies.

Illustration/example: People would take throwing their babies away for

granted. For example, we can find a lot of articles about the exposure of a
baby.

Supporting detail: It is hard to adopt babies from baby box.

Illustration/example: When we adopt babies, we should have memorandums

of custody abandonment which is hard to be found from babies at baby box.

III

Body paragraph 2

Topic sentence: Because of baby box, there can be problems about parents.

Supporting detail: Parents who throw their babies away at baby box lose
sense of guilt.

Illustration/example: People might think that baby box is a legal equipment to

give up their babies. So they can feel comfortable even at the moment they
throw their babies away at baby box.
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Supporting detail: Parents can shift their responsibilities on others easily.

Illustration/example: They rely on baby box because baby box can replace
their responsibilities.

IV

Body paragraph 3
Counterargument: Advocators of baby box program claim that baby box can
protect babies from being deprived of their right to live as human being.

Refutation: Baby box is useful just in the short run. It just functions as a
temporary residence for abandoned babies.

VI

Conclusion
Restated thesis: To solve the problems of baby box, we have to amending
current rules and have to change our awareness.

Opinion: With all that reasons, I against with baby box.