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Online Greenlight Review 1 Unit 5 Animation

Anita Gill

Logline, Premise, Step Outline & Script

Logline A fastidious, pompous blimp becomes increasingly frustrated by a squawking little bird.

Premise An pesky bird annoys a fastidious blimp. Can the blimp outwit the bird?

Step Outline The blimp is at the airship hanger. He takes off Gliding through the sky, suddenly he feels something drop on him. Noticing bird droppings on him, he sees a bird above. He flies off The bird is next to him, copying his demeanour The bird jumps on the blimp. He shakes the bird off The bird flies towards the blimp. The blimp flicks his tail sending the bird flying. The blimp is covered in birds. He flies off with his head held high.

Script Act 1: EXT. AIRSHIP HANGER The blimp is at the air hanger. Taking off, he has a look of self-importance. EXT. SKY Gliding effortlessly, the pompous blimp feels something drop on him. Looking across he sees bird droppings. Looking up, a bird is hovering around him. Groaning in frustration the blimp flies off. ACT 2: EXT. SKY Flying through the sky, the blimp spots something from the corner of his eye. Quickly looking round, he sees the

same bird flying/gliding in a pompous manner, copying the blimp. The blimp looks frustrated. Jumping up and down on the blimp, the blimp shakes the bird off. Seeing the bird flying towards him, the blimp gets an idea. Getting ready, he flicks his tail when the bird is near, sending him flying. Rid of the bird, the blimp smirks.

Act 3: TIME PASSED The same shot of his face is shown however, he looks as if he has given up. Zooming out, we see the blimp covered in birds. One squawks. With his head held high, the blimp flies off.

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