Professional Documents
Culture Documents
15 Oct 2015
15 Oct 2015
Assignment Descriptor
Due Date
Class
Lecturer/Tutor
Mr Javihn Chan
Declaration
I hereby declare that no part of this attached assignment has been copied from any other
person's work except where acknowledged in the text, and that no part of this assignment
has been written for me by any other person.
Student Number
Note: If the above declaration is found to be false, no marks will be awarded for this
assignment. Plagiarism and collusion are serious offences.
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Lecturers Comments
Poor
Satisfactory
AverageBelow
Accuracies &
Comprehensivene
ss (40%)
Comparisons &
Analysis (50%)
Organization of
Essay (10%)
Grade Awarded
Good
(Tick only)
Excellent
MARKS
40
50
10
Lecturers Name and Signature
Mr Javihn Chan
Grade Scale:
A+ & A
B+ & B
C+ & C
D+ & D
F
Lecturers Comments:
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: Excellent
: Very good
: Good
: Pass
: Fail
Formatting
Documents to be submitted
Due Date
15 Oct 2015
Marking Criteria:
Criterion
Accuracies and
Comprehensivenes
s (40%)
Excellent
>= 80
Student is able to
accurately present an
insightful and
comprehensive
understanding of the
welfare approach of
both the countries
and the needs of the
chosen vulnerable
group.
Good
70 79
Student presents
accurate and good
understanding of the
welfare approach of
both the countries
and the needs of the
chosen vulnerable
group.
Satisfactory
60 69
Student is able to
present some
understanding of the
welfare approach and
the needs of the
chosen vulnerable
group of both the
countries with some
inaccuracies.
Below Average
50 59
Student is able to
present a satisfactory
understanding of the
welfare approach of
both the countries
and the needs of the
chosen vulnerable
group with many
inaccuracies.
Poor
< 50
Student lacks
understanding of the
welfare approach of
both the countries
and the needs of the
chosen vulnerable
group and is mostly
inaccurate.
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Criterion
Comparison and
Analysis
(50%)
Excellent
>= 80
Excellent coverage of
all the 4 areas of the
welfare approach with
relevant examples to
support research.
Good
70 79
Good coverage of all
the 4 areas of the
welfare approach with
relevant examples to
support research.
Satisfactory
60 69
Satisfactory coverage
of 4 areas of the
welfare approach with
relevant examples to
support research.
Analysis
Able to correctly
identify the
differences/similaritie
s in the 4 areas of the
Welfare approach in
both the countries.
Analysis
Able to correctly
identify the
differences/similaritie
s in the 4 areas of the
Welfare approach in
both the countries.
Analysis
Unable to correctly
identify the
differences/similaritie
s in the 4 areas of the
Welfare approach in
both the countries.
Satisfactory coverage
of the 4 areas of
analysis with relevant
examples to support
claims.
Below Average
50 59
Insufficient coverage
of all the 4 areas of
the welfare approach
with relevant
examples to support
research.
Poor
< 50
Poor coverage of all
the 4 areas of the
NPO areas of the
welfare approach with
relevant examples to
support research.
Analysis
Unable to correctly
identify the
differences/similaritie
s in the 4 areas of the
Welfare approach in
both the countries.
Analysis
Unable to correctly
identify the
differences/similarities
in the 4 areas of the
Welfare approach in
both the countries.
Insufficient coverage
of the 4 areas of
analysis with relevant
examples to support
claims.
Failed to clearly
analyse the 4 areas
with no or few
relevant examples to
support claims.
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Criterion
Excellent
>= 80
Strong introduction
and conclusion
Good
70 79
Clear introduction and
conclusion
Consistent and
coherent logical
progression.
Illustrates some
consistency and
shows some logical
progression
Written in a formal
language
Paper written in
students own words
Organisation of
Essay (10%)
Superior editing.
Rarely makes errors
in spellings, language
usage and grammar.
Appropriate &
accurate APA
referencing at the end
of the document as
well as in-text
citations
Majority of paper
written in formal
language.
Majority of paper
written in students
own words.
Careful editing.
Makes few errors in
spelling, language
usage and grammar
Some missing or
inaccurate APA
referencing either intext or at the end of
the document.
Satisfactory
60 69
Introduction and
conclusion is present
but not clear
Shows some attempt
of consistency and
order
Some use of formal
language recognized.
Some parts of paper
written in students
own words.
Below Average
Poor
50 59
< 50
Unable to identify introduction and conclusion
Lack of consistency and order
Inappropriate use of language.
Most of the paper is plagiarised.
Poor editing with spelling and grammar errors
making it difficult to read.
Referencing is inaccurate with many missing
areas.
Some evidence of
editing. Extensive
spelling, language
usage and grammar
errors.
Many missing or
inaccurate APA
referencing either intext or at the end of
the document.
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