SKEMA

Section A
1 between
2 which
3 users
4 hers
5 is
6 under
7 an
8 senses
9 allows
10 chatting

among
who
user
her
are
on
a
sense
allow
chat

11. False
12. True
13. False
14. True
15. True
16. He thinks Fogg is the bank robber.
17. He rides on the backs of an elephant (Kiouni)
18.
a) not accustomed to
b) without a doubt
19. A faulty broiler
20.
BAND

Excellent

MARK
RANGE
9 10

Requirements of task fulfilled.

Ideas and details well-developed, well-organised with evidence from text.
Varied sentence structures (simple and compound).
Wide and apt vocabulary.
Accurate use of language.
Accurate mechanics of writing.

7 8

Requirements of task fulfilled.

Ideas and details largely developed, organised and supported with evidence
from text.
Varied sentence structures (simple and compound).
Vocabulary wide enough.
Largely accurate use of language.
Largely accurate mechanics of writing.

5-6

Requirements of task fulfilled.

Ideas and details sufficiently developed with some organisation and supported
with evidence from text.
Sentence structures lack variety (simple structures dominate.
Adequate vocabulary used.
Sufficiently accurate use of language.
Fairly accurate mechanics of writing.

Credit

Achievement

Weak

BAND DESCRIPTOR

3-4

Requirements of task hardly fulfilled.

Ideas lack development and organisation with minimal textual support.
Sentence structures mostly simple with errors that hamper reading.
Vocabulary limited.
Language is barely accurate with errors that hamper reading.
Inconsistent mechanics of writing.
Requirements of task not fulfilled.
No development of relevant ideas or

Very weak

1-2

textual support.

High density of errors; blurring evident, lacks cohesion.

Vocabulary very limited.
Mechanics of writing numerous errors.

*Based on the novel Around the World in 80 Days

21. December
22. Tips on how to prepare for examination
23. Learn to help each other overcome their weakness
24. Call Najihah
25.
a. just around the corner
b. fortnight
c. eleventh hour
26.

# a and c = donts
Spend hours on facebook
Online chatting
Online games
#b,c and d = dos
Pace her revision
Drink plenty of water
Get sufficient sleep
Take down short notes
Borrow books

27. Any logical and acceptable answers. ( 1 mark each)

Section D Part 1 (15 marks)
Format

Content :

BAND

Excellent

: Dear Madam Aida

1 mark

From (students name)

1 mark

Apologise/ sorry

1 mark

Reasons 2 or more

3 marks

Help teacher

1 marks

MARK
RANGE
7-8

Requirements of task fulfilled.

Ideas and details well-developed, well-organised with evidence from text.
Varied sentence structures (simple and compound).
Wide and apt vocabulary.
Accurate use of language.
Accurate mechanics of writing.
Requirements of task fulfilled.
Ideas and details largely developed, organised and supported with evidence
from text.

Credit

5-6

Achievement
3-4

Weak

BAND DESCRIPTOR

1-2

Varied sentence structures (simple and compound).

Vocabulary wide enough.
Largely accurate use of language.
Largely accurate mechanics of writing.
Requirements of task hardly fulfilled.
Ideas and details sufficiently developed with some organisation and supported
with evidence from text.
Sentence structures lack variety (simple structures dominate.
Adequate vocabulary used.
Sufficiently accurate use of language.
Fairly accurate mechanics of writing.
Requirements of task not fulfilled.
Ideas lack development and organisation with minimal textual support.
Sentence structures mostly simple with errors that hamper reading.
Vocabulary limited.
Language is barely accurate with errors that hamper reading.
Inconsistent mechanics of writing.

Part II - 30 marks
Format :

Name of campaign
Date

Content :
Reasons
Benefits

2 or more
2 or more

1 mark
1 mark
= 4 marks
= 4 marks

BAND

MARK
RANGE

Excellent

16 20

Task fulfilled with ideas and details well-developed and wellorganised.

Language is accurate with first draft slips.
Varied sentence structures are used effectively to convey meaning.
Vocabulary is apt and widely used.
Accurate use of mechanics of writing.
Interest of the reader is aroused and sustained.

11 - 15

Task fulfilled with ideas and details developed and organised.

Language is largely accurate with few minor errors.
Simple and compound sentence structures are accurate.
Vocabulary is wide enough but lack precision.
Almost always accurate use of spelling, punctuation and
paragraphing.
Interest of the reader is aroused but not sustained.

Credit

Achievement

Weak

6-10

1-5

BAND DESCRIPTORS

Task fulfilled with ability to develop some ideas but lacks details;
ideas adequately organised.
Language is sufficiently accurate with frequent serious errors.
Simple and compound sentence structures are attempted.
Vocabulary is sufficient to convey meaning.
Some errors in spelling, punctuation and paragraphing.

Task partially fulfilled with ideas less developed;ideas lacking

organization/ no organisation.
Language is barely accurate with frequent serious errors that hamper
reading..
Vocabulary is limited.
Serious errors in spelling, punctuation and paragraphing.