Student Error Log

Name: Liyuan Yu

Sentences with Errors Description of Error/ Explanation and Remarks Correction

Correction Symbol
example: after the thief transitive vs. intransitive 'to rob' takes an object After the thief robbed the
robbed, he ran himself away verbs woman,
quickly 'to run' in intransitive- no
object he ran away quickly.
He argued that those Wrong verb tense argues He argues that those students
students who would be who are disciplined in the
disciplined in the Harvard Harvard cheating scandal by
cheating scandal by Harvard Harvard should be rewarded,
should be rewarded, for the because collaboration is
reason that collaboration is allowed in students test-
allowed in students test- taking.
taking.
sentence structure- Capitalize the first letters of A course titled Introduction to
a course called introduction major words in the title. Congress
to congress punctuation, confusing

grammar, or word order

problem

noun ending/ singular or Answers should match Some students exam answers
some students exam answer with are are similar in the open-book
is similar in the open-book plural error final exam.
final exam

On one hand, students will Wrong tense Use the same tense On one hand, students share
share lecture notes with each lecture notes with each other
other and reading materials and reading materials together.
together.
Collaboration make it Verb wrong Collaboration should match Collaboration makes it
difficult to assess individual with makes difficult to assess individual
performance, so it is better performance, so it is better to
to assess by group work. assess by group work.

On the other hand, the sentence structure- On the other hand, the teaching
teaching fellows encouraged punctuation, confusing fellows encouraged
collaboration, and even grammar, or word order collaboration, and even
worked with students and problem worked with students and
helped them with the helped them with problems
problem certain test similar to text questions during
questions during the final the final exam.
exam.

Word from error Praising should be changed It is should be praised

into praised
 It is should be
praising that
students worked
together to figure
out how to answer
the question of the
final exam which
the answer have not
covered in the
course.
Finally, the internet was
allowed to students in the
exam, so it is probably to
find the same answer in the
exam.
after the thief robbed, he ran
himself away quickly
Author Manjoo argues that
those students who are
disciplined in the Harvard
cheating scandal by Harvard
should be rewarded, because
collaboration is allowed in
students test-taking and the
tests design should be
criticized.
Secondly, our expectation
about those students who
will graduate from school is
let them work efficiently
instead of force students to
find the answer by
themselves.
sentence structure Probably should be changed
into probable
transitive vs. 'to rob' takes an object
intransitive verbs 'to run' in intransitive- no
object
verb tense remember that youre talking
about past events here so the
verb needs to be in past
tense.
Collation To be should be
with to do
Of should be with
doing
that students worked
together to figure out
how to answer the
final exam questions
whose answers were
not covered in class.
Finally, the internet was
allowed to students in the
exam, so it is probable to find
the same answer in the exam.
After the thief robbed the
woman,
he ran away quickly.
Manjoo argues that those
students who were disciplined
in the Harvard cheating
scandal by Harvard should be
rewarded, because
collaboration is allowed in
students test-taking and the
tests design should be
criticized.
Secondly, our expectation for
those students who will
graduate from school is to let
them work efficiently instead
of forcing students to find the
answer by themselves.