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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in order to give my point of view to improve the information website for new
students on our college because I feel our website has lots of factual information about courses.
However, our website can be improved If we include some information for new students in our
college.

To begin with, new students need to be well organized. So that, I would like to give some advice
in order to plan their time and to know whom ask for help.

Secondly, lots of students are from different countries so it could be useful to find a tourist guide
at website college in order to find interesting or helpful places to visit and the cost of going to
that place. For instance, they can find from the best hospitals to go in case of illness to the
cheapest disco for having fun. Moreover, it would be really helpful to inform the different
scholarships and educational credits in Peru and how to apply to them. What is more, it could
be helpful to include some information about health insurance or other plans which will
cover their medical expenses.
In addition, I would suggest to publish more information about students clubs and associations
representing different interests and cultures in order to have lots of great ways to get involved
and make friends.

I hope my advice can be useful for you. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully

Luis Bravo

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