One side

The importance/effect of "topic", which was always debatable, has

now become more controversial. The substantial influence of
"cause" has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of
this trend on "result" in recent years. In my opinion, it can be
agreed that "topic" can have positive/negative sides, while others
might disagree about/reject this contention. This essay will
further elaborate on how "idea 1&2" and thus will lead to/reach a
logical conclusion.

At the outset, there are numerous/myriad reasons why "topic"

is/are advantageous/ beneficial/detrimental to (our day-to-day life),
but the most conspicuous/preponderant one lies in the fact that
"idea 1 ". According to a startling new research,for
example,"specific example" ~ . For this reason,"Topic" can play a
vital role in/to (in enriching one's life)

Another key justification for uploading this notion is that

"idea2".For instance,"specific example"By this way, "topic" can play a
critical role in ~ing/ment or to V

In a nutshell, it can be concluded that taking into account the

foregoing of impact of the"topic", its advantages would far
outweigh disadvantages.
Two-sides

The importance/effect of "topic", which was always debatable, has

now become more controversial. The substantial influence of
"cause" has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of
this trend on"result" in recent years. In my opinion, it can be
agreed that "topic" has/have both positive and negative sides,
while others might disagree with this contention. This essay will
further elaborate on how "idea 1 & 2" and thus will lead to/reach a
logical conclusion.

At the outset, there are numerous/myriad reasons why "topic"

is/are beneficial/detrimental to (our day-to-day life), but the most
conspicuous/preponderant one lies in the fact that "idea1"
~~~ .For instance, "specific examples". For this reason, "topic" can
play a vital role in/to ~~.

Nevertheless, there remain some benefits/drawbacks of "topic",

which can certainly overwhelm the aforementioned
aspects/impacts/effects, but the most advantageous / alarming /
preponderant one stems from the fact that "idea 2".For
instance,"specific examples". By this way, "topic" can play a critical
role in/to~.

In the light of the foregoing discussion, it can be concluded that

the advantages of the "topic" are prominent, although it can have a
number of problems that should be well handled.
Problem & Solution

The importance/effect of "topic", which was always debatable, has

now become more controversial. The substantial influence of
"cause" has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of
the trend on "result"(society) in recent years. In my opinion, it can
be agreed that "topic" can have certain problems. This essay will
further elaborate on how "problem" and "solution" and thus will lead
to/reach a logical conclusion.

At the outset, there are numerous/myriad of reasons why "topic"

is/are detrimental to (modern world/society..), but the most
conspicuous/preponderant one lies in the fact that "idea1-
problems"(2~3 lines).For example, (2~3 lines).

Approaches to deal with the aforementioned problems of the

"topic"are innumerable, but the most effective one is that "idea2-
solution", which is not unattainable and impractical, but feasible
and comprehensible. As an illustration, research in this area
invariably reveals that___

In the light of the foregoing discussion, it can be concluded that

the problems of "topic" are prominent, although it can have a
number of solutions that can address/tackle/redress this issue.
One side.

Consumer/shoppers/end-users should avoid buying over packed product

1) producer/supplier would follow the needs/trend

2) more environment-friendly / cheap / hassle free /

The effect of over packed products, which was always debatable, has now
become more controversial. The substantial influence of extra packaging of
merchandise has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this
trend on natural environment in recent years. In my opinion, it can be agreed
that end-users should consider buying less packaged products, while others
might disagree with this contention. This essay will elaborate on how
(supplier will follow the needs of consumers and it will likely to lead to better
environment)consumers can protect our environment by opting for less packaging
products and also make suppliers to follow this trend and thus will lead to a
logical conclusion.

At the outset, there are numerous reasons for why denying goods with a
great amount of packaging when people shop is beneficial to our environment,
but the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that people are likely to produce
less waste or garbage with this shopping habit, because they would not throw away
useless Styrofoam or plastic rubbish on the street or at their house after unpacking
products. For example, a recent survey, which was carried out in Korea, revealed
that a majority of citizens prefer to choose less packaging goods to lessen
unnecessary waste from packaging.

Another key justification for uploading this notion is that customers can put
pressure on manufacturers in order to change the methods of packaging of their
products by avoiding over packed products. For instance, most manufacturing
companies would probably try to reduce unnecessary packaging if this kind of
tendency of clever shoppers continued unabatedly in an effort to prevent
environmental pollution.

In a nutshell, it can be concluded that taking into account the foregoing

impact, the consumer’s right shopping patterns opting for less packaging products
would outweigh that of producers’ responsibility.
 In education system, assessment through formal written examination still
valid?
Two sides

1) positive : hand writing / essential skills /

2) negative : take a long time / old-fashion compared to computer-based exam / online /

easy and reliable

The effect of conventional paper-based test for academic evaluation system,

which was always debatable, had now become more controversial. In my
opinion, formal written examination for evaluation can have both positive and
negative sides, while others might disagree with this contention. This
essay will elaborate not only formal paper-based examination, but also, and thus
will lead to a logical conclusion. (This essay will elaborate on how written
assessment not only enhances the essential skills of students, but also requires more
time to deliver results)

At the outset, there are numerous reasons why official paper-based

examination are beneficial for the evaluation in school, but the most conspicuous
one lies in the fact that this kind of traditional means would be useful for
students' university life, because hand writing is one of the essential skills in college
which requires a more complicated knowledge. For example, high school students,
in Korea, should take the paper-based college entrance exam and the test has been
proven as the most effective way to prepare for the life of university.

Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks of the formal written test, which
can certainly overwhelm the aforementioned effects, but the most
alarming one stems from the fact that conventional written evaluation usually
take more time to get results compared to computer-based exams, because they can
be set up online in real time. For instance, some language tests tend to replace
with computer-based exams: TOFEL and PTE Academic, which are regarded as
innovative programs to assess language skills.

In the light of the foregoing discussion, it can be concluded that the

advantages of formal written examination are prominent, although it can have
a number of problems that should be well handled.
The environment we live in is in danger due to various problems. What are the underlying
causes? Who is responsible to combat this? What measures?

1. causes : exhaust fumes from factory & vehicles -> air pollution & greenhouse
effect : raising sea level / climate change

2. solutions: Government & individuals should take measure to reduce harmful gases
by adopting eco-friendly means / policy

The effect of our environmental problems, which make our life in hazardous
because of the several reasons, has now become more controversial. The
substantial influence of air pollution triggered by humans has sparked
controversy over the potential impact of this trend on environmental in
recent years. In my opinion, it can be agreed that our nature can have certain
problems; however, there are some solutions as well. This essay will
elaborate on how air pollutions-> factory and vehicles can contribute to danger in
nature/ air pollutions and it can be tackled by governments’ policy and thus will
lead to a logical conclusion.

At the outset, there are numerous reasons why air pollution is detrimental
to our environment, but the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that air
pollution triggered by exhaust fumes would threaten people's day-to-day life,
because atmosphere is circulated throughout all over the world; in the worst case
scenario, this could lead to severe negative impacts on citizens' life. For example,
citizens in Beijing, China, are suffering from smog, which could result in respiratory
ailments such as lung cancer and asthma.

Approaches to deal with the aforementioned problems of the environmental

risks are innumerable, but the most effective one is that governments should
take actions to limit air pollutions by introducing much stricter laws to lessen harmful
gases and exhaust fumes, which is not unattainable and impractical but
feasible and comprehensible. For example, if a strong requirement against
exhaust fumes from fossil fuels is introduced by a government, industries and
individuals would certainly try to use environmentally-friendly and renewable energy
such as wind and solar, which have no polluted substance.

In the light of the foregoing discussion, it can be concluded that the

problems of environmental danger are prominent, although it can have a
number of solutions that can address this issue.
 Example of accomplished person (bad neighbour

Soccer player (Christian)

1. exposed to criminal activities (but overcome-> make a great effort)

2. Family support (-> helped him to concentrate on his training only)