Descriptive ​Essay

----- by psycho-physiological issues, as ​“insomnia”

--cause by ​depression.

--AVOID eating too close to bedtime.

​ ating too close to bedtime can disrupt your sleep because it gets your stomach acids going,
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and lying down can cause those acids to creep up into your throat.
--activate the ​digestive ​system ​and keep you up.

I. SPECIFIC TOPIC: ​How to avoid bad sleep

Thesis statement : The easy way to avoid a bad sleep is to avoid
eating before going to sleep.

I. Introduction
A. ​Question statement
II. Body
A. Explain about insomnia
B. Solution for having a bad sleep
C. How does activates the digestive system work
III. Conclusion
A. Fact
--It's important to know that symptoms of depression (such as low energy, loss
of interest or motivation, feelings of sadness or hopelessness) and insomnia
can be linked, and one can make the other worse. The good news is that both
are treatable regardless of which came first.
Insomnia has many possible causes, including ​stress​, anxiety, depression,
poor sleep habits, circadian rhythm disorders (such as​jet lag​), and taking
certain ​medications​.

Eating too close to bedtime can disrupt your sleep, mostly because it gets your stomach acids
going, and lying down can cause those acids to creep up into your throat. If you're really craving
a ​late night snack​,

try a bowl of cereal with milk or cheese and crackers. These types of foods are rich in minerals,
such as tryptophan and calcium, which help promote sleep.

Eating a late dinner or snacking before going to bed can activate the
digestive system​ and keep you up. If you suffer from gastroesophageal
reflux (​GERD​) or​heartburn​, it is even more important to avoid eating and
drinking right before bed since this can make your symptoms worse. In
addition, drinking a lot of fluids prior to bed can

overwhelm the ​bladder​, requiring frequent visits to the bathroom that

disturb your sleep.
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(1)​ Football is one of America’s favorite sports. Many people enjoy watching football
during football season; however, fans do not realize how much hard work and preparation
football players dedicate months before the season begins. Before the season starts,
football players have thorough physicals, excruciating work out sessions, and extensive
practice sessions all day long at training camps or OTA’s, off the field training activities.
Football players study playbooks and film of their opponents for several hours a day and
play in four pre-season games before the regular season begins, which they are not paid for.
These are just some of the things that football players endure to make the team and be a
valuable asset for their team during a grueling 16 football game season.
 Many people enjoy watching football during the season but fans didn’t know that
football player have to prepared there physical health, excruciating work out, and extensive
practice for a month before the match, they also study playbooks and film of their opponent
played in four pre-season games, doing all of this they didn’t get paid but they’re doing it
for their team to be a valuable asset during their 16 football game season.

I. SPECIFIC TOPIC: (2 points):​MY BEST FRIEND’S MAKEUP

2. THESIS STATEMENT: (2 points)​ ​”Are you one of them who’s
interesting in makeup too?” (This is NOT a thesis statement) ​Punpun’s
makeup looks amazing .
3. OUTLINE:(2 points)
I. Introduction
A. Interesting fact/questions statement
II. Body
A.Relationship between me and her
B.first experience of putting it on ​(best friend) ​What’s my best
friend look like when she’s putting makeup on for the first time.
​ ​C. ​Her improve in make up skill
III. Conclusion
A.Using own opinion
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4. ESSAY: (4 points)
MY BEST FRIEND’S MAKEUP
​ very ​people have​ a best friend​,​ ​a​s a teenager growing up we wanted to
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try out new thing​s, ​as a girl one of them is makeup. Makeup is a very interesting
thing to try on because it’s ​full all​ colors, to​nn​e, shading, and glitter that make you
shining when you put it on.​ (where is your thesis statement?)
One of the people who’s very interested in makeup is one of my best frien​d​ her
name is PunPun​, me and he​r are best friend for 6 years, so we’re very cl​ose, we​ tell
everything to each other so there’s no secret between us.
She’s the one who taught me what makeup really is. ​Not all of us success for the first
time and that’s including her, me as her best friend, I knew what’s her mistake about
make up, even though I had only a little knowledge about it but I can see it from her
face because she looks like a magical colorful frog and so I told her that it doesn’t
look right but she has a lot of her self-confident as much as she wouldn’t believe
what I’d said​. ​(long sentence)​ She’s wearing it to school eve​ry day but ​one day her
crush came to her and said ​“What kind of power you’re sticking on to your face?​” and
that’s the moment where she lost all of her self-confident but she won’t give up
because makeup is what she loves so she did some research and keep practicing
until she finds the right look she wanted, the final look of her happiness.
For me in my experience, I believe all women are pretty without makeup
but with the right makeup​ can be ​pretty powerful but be your own kind of beautiful
because makeup is art beauty is spirit.

- LEARN to write simple sentences (review: how to write a sentence)

- Use a FULL STOP at the end of each sentence (This is your common error in
writing; and I always see THE SAME problem in your writing)
- Do not add quotes
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​ very ​person has​ ​a best friend​. A​s a teenager growing ​up. We​ wanted
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to try out news thing. As a girl one of them is makeup. Makeup is a very
interesting thing to try on because it’s ​full of ​colors, to​n​e, shading, and
glitter that make you shining when you put it on.​ ​Punpun’s makeup looks
amazing.
One of the people who are very interested in makeup is one of
my best frien​ds. ​Her name is PunPun​.​ ​We’re ​best friends for six years,
so we’re very cl​ose. We​ tell everything to each other so there’s no secret
between us. She’s the one who taught me what makeup really is.
Punpun’s a short little sassy teenage girl who’s like to try out new thing.
​She​ ​has the prettiest long curl​ eyelash​. Her ​eyebrow ​are perfectly
perfect, they’re always on fleek. Her hair is long shining thin black hair
and she’s always has a small piece of hair that covered half of her
forehead down to her chin making her face look more v-shape. Her body
might not be perfect so her face has to be. That’s why she started to
wear makeup. When she started wearing it, it’s not perfect ​but she‘s
confident about her look.​ She’s wearing it to school eve​ryday​ ​until​ ​her
crush came to her and said ​mean ​things​ about her face making​ she lost
all of her confide​nt ​but she won’t give up because makeup is what she
loves so she did some research and keep practicing until she finds the
right look she wanted, the final look of her happiness.
For me in my experience, I believe all women are pretty without
makeup but with the ri​ght makeup you could be​ ​pretty powerful but be
your own kind of beautiful because makeup is art beauty is spirit.

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