Name

Huy Thai
Rob Linden
Oct 21, 2017
Technical Writing and Research – COMM 1000- MET2

Analytical Essay Outline

Title: Everlast multi-purpose bar

Purpose: To inform/gain knowledge

1.0 Introduction
1.1. Hook
In everyone’s busy day, not everyone has much time to go to gym and work
out. Also, in some case, the gym you usually come to work out is closed for
maintenance or weather does not allow you to go to the gym. In stead of
going to gym, is there any back-up option?
1.2. Thesis statement
Comparing between go to gym and working out at home with simple
mechanical design like multi-purpose bar, working out at gym allow you to
access to multiple machines and exercises. However, in some
circumstances, you could not go to the gym and in that case Everlast multi-
purpose bar can bring the gym to your house
1.3. How you’re going to prove the thesis
Describe some different parts of the Everlast multi-purpose bar, how it
was taken apart, put it together and how it works
2.0 Body Paragraph:
2.1. Topic Sentence: What are supported parts for the whole system of the
multi-purpose bar?
2.1.1. Door Hanging Bar
 Dimensions, materials and how does it fit to the door frame?
2.1.2. Curved Hanging bar
 Dimensions, materials and how does it connect to the door
hanging bar
2.1.3. Supporting Bar
 Dimensions, what are bolts included in attachment?

3.0 Body Paragraph

3.1. Topic Sentence: How does the multi-purposed bar work?
3.1.1. Force analysis
 Most of important forces distribute along the Door Hanging Bar
and focus through two bolts which are connected with two curved
hanging bar
 On the supporting bar, forces will be shown at two out of four
handle positions as the bar is being used
3.1.2. Door frame variations
  Depending on door frame’s dimensions, materials’ limitation
3.1.3. Installation
 Setting the bar up until the door hanging bar is sat on top of the
upper door frame. Also, adjust the bar so users can workout
without hitting the side of the door frame.

4.0 Body Paragraph

4.1. Topic Sentence: Types of Multi-purpose bar
4.1.1. Claim: Types of exercises
 For pull-up/chin-up, hanging door way bars are popular as they
can be attached easy to door frame.
 For dipping/push-up/core, parallel bar or dipping station are
used.
4.1.2. Claim: Diversity choice in multi-purpose bars’ designs
 Every design based on the users’ purposes.
 Also, choosing what body part to be worked on is very important
in choosing what multi-purpose bars to use.

5.0 Conclusions and recommendations (if necessary): working out with multi-
purpose bar is very easy and convenient. The whole gym can be wrapped up in
a simple mechanical system which can help you focus what muscles you want.