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☐ Page 3 Remove “main objective” and rephrase paragraph

☐ Page 4:

Objective #1 only include development of the device (those that are tangible)

Objective #2 Indicate in what design the prototype will be fabricated

Objective #3 include the software/application system objectives

Objective #4 should coincide with Chapter 3 testing procedure

☐ Page 5 Scope and Limitation user instead of victim

☐ Page 6 remove Wikipedia articles and find new one for BLE, GPS,

☐ Pages 9-14 edit spacing on reference sites below the pictures

☐ Whole Chapter 2 RRS written before RRL; just interchange

☐ Page 21 Conceptual Model arrows in between boxes

☐ Page 23 Elaborate the evaluation; include the tables and treatment of data that is used in
presentation

☐ Page 29 Review the reference of Seels & Richey, 1994

☐ Page 31 Edit the block diagram with input process output block, power supply either above or below

☐ Page 32-34 Device Testing; do not include setting up, restate procedure for HC-06 Module

☐ Page 32-35 Clear pics of schematic diagrams

☐ Page 36 Wiring Diagram do not use actual pics only drawings (*power consumption indicate)

☐ Page 38 Include GPS in the calibration

☐ Page 42-45 Full System Testing: Reconstruct the tables and finalize the parameters

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