MARNHEL ANN S.

PRE
KIM RYAN P. POMAR
BSCE 5-A

SUMMARY OF COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS

PANELIST COMMENTS/SUGGESTIONS ACTION PAGE IN

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 Avoid redundancy. DONE  4

ENGR.  Addition in significance  5
ALEJANDRO of the study.  6-11
PITALLANO JR.  Add local Related
Literature and Studies.

 Revision of title. DONE  Front page

 Addition in the objectives  1-3
ENGR. and background of the  5
RAYMUNDO study for the revised title.  6-11
ROMERO  Addition in the
significance of the study.
 Addition in related
literature and studies for
the revised title.

 Follow the format. DONE  Applies in

 Reconstruct the grammar. all pages
 Revision of title.  Applies in
MR. REY Revision of contents in all pages
RIMANDO the conceptual framework  Front page
paradigm of the study.  13
 Avoid too many picture  15-17
for documentation.