Running Head: ADMISSION ESSAY

Essay for College Admission

[Name of the Writer]

[Name of the Institution]

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Essay for College Admission

Admission Essay

Where other people regard the area of Medical as the inconvenience of experimentation

and presentation of medical treatment, for me this is enthusiasm, excitement and passion. No

matter what challenges I encountered with my family, I chose that I would like to pass my

experiences with the turmoil to emphasise the impact on the world. I did not have a special

arrangement at the time, too busy, focusing on how to achieve good grades and fit in possibly. I

obviously remember the day when my mother and I went to see a specialist for the treatment of

lupus. At the time, my family did not fully understand the impact of this extraordinary

incompetence on our lives.

Despite my childhood, I know through one way or another that this will completely shape

my reality and future goals. My goals to achieve good grades and develop, which reflects the

ideals my parents impressed my sister and my goals. Specifically, having a father with addiction

problems and enduring in prison. On some days, it was difficult for me to read, study for the

tests, my teachers struggled with patience and my medical difficulties, understanding and

empathy, and this was extremely difficult at school. Despite these conditions, I tried to think hard

and get a decent evaluation, and, my family and I believe that we could achieve this through

attaining good quality of education.

That is why I have decide to pursue my dreams, to become medical student to help others

help them in their suffering because I have realised what it feels like to be a patient suffering

from major disease. I want to see my hard work as success in my future life. It was the goal that,

I maintained in my mind, while I was suffering through chemo treatments I was unable to read or
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study but it was the thought of college and having a chance to peruse my dreams that kept me

going. I want to see myself getting an admission as a pre-med student and my interest in studying

abroad and having the chance to discover other countries and provide health care will put me

back on track to fulfil my wishes and dreams.

In high school, when the groups sat there doing calculations, and others felt that they

were watching the cause of being crushed intently, I made myself more enthusiastic and

passionate. Repeatedly, I helped myself to remember the well-known expression “extraordinary

efforts lead to promote extraordinary rewards” and, without a doubt, my goals soon began to be

met. I cherish the pursuit of science; I am deeply in love with the thought and my passion of

becoming a doctor or a nurse and idea that motivates me is many people suffer through the

disease as I did. Consequently, I want to provide health care to those who are suffering much as I

suffered. It was a challenge for me to suffer medically and still stay on top of my studies and

schoolwork. However, I was determined to push through because I want to be able to go to a

medical college of my choice.

Finally, despite the long and difficult days, my hard work and my struggle has filled me

with pride and I feel satisfied. This pride has affirmed and revived my admiration for science and

care. I feel more passionate, alive and more connected, now than I have been before than

anywhere else, I focus on returning to my top-notch form. I have been eager to be a medical

professional or specialist, but since I have been suffering from the disease and medication, I have

imagined that I would help others like me in order to satisfy my character and the patient too. I

am much better today. I am very blesses to have the ability to apply for a college this year. For

me, medical science is the future, through which I look for another lasting opportunity to pursue

my passion. After all, the pursuit of your passion is really a blessing from heaven.