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Big Surprise

“Biggusapuraizu”

Characters

Frelliene as Okiniiri

Jerome as Suzume

Jan as Atsui

Keh as Rida

Aciel as Haha

Scene 1 / Shin 1: At the playground/ asobida de

Atsui: we are losing the game!!!

“Watashitachiha gēmu ni makete imasu!!”

Please push the middle lane!!!

“Chūō no shasen o oshite kudasai! ! !”

Joka: they’ve been well fed, we are losing this game!!!

“Karera wa yoku tabe rarete, kono gēmu ni makete imasu! ! !”

Rida: Keep pushing on the bottom lane, we might give them pressure

“Ichibanshita no shasen o oshi tsudzukete kudasai, karera ni atsuryokuwokakeru

kamo shiremasen”

Suzume:Okiniiri do something!!! Clearly you are out of league!

“Onigiri wa nanika o shimasu! ! ! Akiraka ni anata wa rīgu kara hazurete

imasu!”

Okiniiri: I know please be patience and focus on the game

“Gaman shite gēmu ni shūchū shite kudasai”

Atsui: You focusing on the game? You already been feeding the enemies!!!
“Gēmu ni shūchū shite imasu ka? Anata wa sudeni teki ni esa o yatte imashita! ! “

Okiniiri: I am very sorry my phone is not working properly!!

“Geitaidenwa ga seijō ni kinō shite inai koto ga hijō ni zan'nendesu! !”

Suzumi: They’ve slain the lord!!!, retreat and don’t go to low!!!

“ Karera wa omo o koroshimashita! ! ! Kōtai shi, hikuku naranaide kudasai! ! “

Rida: Fall Back!! We might make it through

“ Kōtai suru! ! Watashitachi wa sore o tassei suru kamo shiremasen”

Joka: Okiniiri what are you doing? The enemies are gaining at you, get back

immediately

“Okiniiri nanishiteruno? Teki wa anata o kakutoku shite imasu, sugu ni modotte

kudasai”

Okiniiri was slain!!!

“Okiniiri ga korosa reta! ! !”

Suzumi: why didn’t you listen? You’re throwing the game already

“Nande kii tenai no? Anata wa sudeni gēmu o nagete imasu”

Okiniiri: My phone keeps on being strange, the controls are not functioning anymore!!

“ Watashi no denwa wa kimyōna mama de, kontorōru wa mō kinō shite

imasen! !”

Rida: You could do better, but please stay behind

“Motto yokude kita kamo shiremasenga, ushironi ite kudasai”

Okiniiri: I know my role, I am a marksman

“Watashi wa jibun no yakuwari o shitte imasu, watashi wa itedesu”

Okiniiri’s hero was revived but it is too late for them defend, the enemies have broken

through and broke their inhibitor


“Okiniiri no hīrō wa fukkatsu shimashitaga, bōgyo suru ni wa oso sugi, teki wa toppa shi,

sogai-zai o hakai shimashita”

Suzumi: What a game, another losing streak in a row

“Nanto iu gēmu, renzoku shite maketa mōhitotsu no”

Atsui: we could have wiin if not one of our own played the role

“Watashitachi jishin ga yakuwari o hatasanakatta baai, watashitachiha wi o motsu

koto ga dekimashita”

Joka: yeah his right

“E e, kare no kenri”

Okiniiri: These past months, my phone keeps on lagging and sometimes it shut down by

itself

“Kako sū-kagetsu, watashi no denwa wa okure o toritsudzuke, tokidoki sore jitai

de shattodaun shimashita”

Atsui: You know what just forget about it

“Anata wa sore ni tsuite nani o wasurete iru no ka shitte imasu”

Suzumi: yeah forget about it, maybe later we can gained more stars

“Tabun wasurete, tabun atode motto hoshi o kakutoku dekiru”

Joka: I think we should get going

“Hajimerubekida to omou”

Okiniiri: Guys I’m so sorry, I will do my best next time

“ Min'na gomen'nasai, jikai wa ganbarimasu”

They leave her

“Karera wa kanojo o saru”


Scene 2/ Shin 2: in the school/ Kōnai de

Okiniiri: Good morning guys

“Ohayō shokun”

Jan: same

“Onaji”

Joka: good morning too

“Ohayōgozaimasu”

Okiniiri: Can I ask about what happened yesterday?

“Kinō nani ga okotta no ka tazuneru koto wa dekimasu ka?”

Rida: that losing streak, we told you forget about it

“Sono renpai o wasurete, watashitachi wa anata ga sore o wasurete iru to itta”

Okiniiri: how about we play today, maybe we can gain a star?

“Kyō wa dōdesu ka, sutā o kakutoku dekimasu ka?”

Suzumi: I think we should get hurry because class is starting

“Jugyō ga hajimatte irunode isogubekida to omou”

Keh: maybe later , we’ll try to rank up

“Tabun atode, watashitachiha ranku appu shiyou to shimasu”

Scene 3/shin 3, in the Playground/ Asobiba no naka de

Her friends has already playing the game without her

“Kanojo no yūjin wa sudeni kanojo nashi de gēmu o purei shite imasu”

Okiniiri: Guys could you invite me the next game?

“Min'na,-ji no gēmu ni shōtai shite moraemasu ka?”

Suzumi: we are five already

“Watashitachi wa sudeni 5-ridesu”

Okiniiri: ahh okay, maybe later?

“Ā, tabun atode?”

Atsui: Push that turret!!!

“Sono taretto o oshite kudasai! ! !”

Joka: I’m on my way

“Tochūdesu”
Okiniiri: You guys are actually winning

“Kimitachi wa jissai ni katte iru”

Rida: it will be another victory

“Mōhitotsu no shōri ni narimasu”

Okiniiri’s friend won the match

“Okiniiri nyū yūjin ga shiai ni kata”

Atsui: How about another one?

“Betsu no mono wa dōdesu ka?”

Suzumi: Yeah I think another will be great

“Un, mōhitotsu wa subarashī to omou”

Okiniiri: How about I join??

“Sanka shite mimasen ka?”

Joka : maybe next time, we let you join

“Jikai wa sanka sa sete kudasai”

Okiniiri: alright I’ll be here if you all wanted me to join

“Yoroshikuonegaishimasu”

Okiniiri’s saw their face having too much fun while playing their favourite game.

“Okiniiri' s wa, okiniiri no gēmu o purei shite iru ma, karera no kao ga amarini mo

tanoshikatta no o mimashita.”

Scene 4/ shin 4, at Okiniiri’s house, Oki Iri no ie

Okiniiri’s goes to her room, she was sulking because she thinks her friends will not play

with her.

“Okiniiri’s wa kanojo no heya ni ikimasu. Kanojo wa tomodachi ga kanojo to issho ni

asobanaidarou to omou node, kanojo wa yamemashita”

Haha: Are you okay Okiniiri?do you have any problem? We can talk this out?

“Ōkini haitte mo daijōbudesuka? Kore o hanasemasu ka?”

Okiniiri: no mom I don’t have any problem, I’m also fine too

“Okāsan, watashi wa nani no mondai mo arimasen, watashi mo genkidesu”

Haha:You don’t look fine to me, come on tell me besides I am your mother I know that

you are not fine.


“Anata wa watashiniha mibae ga yoku arimasen, watashi wa anata no hahaoyadearu

koto ni kuwaete, anata ga genkidenai koto o shitte imasu.”

Okiniiri: I don’t feel well, I am not sick just sad

“Kibungawarui”

Haha: what happened?? Why are you sad??

“Nani ga okotta? ? Dōshite kanashī no? “

Okiniiri: it’s about my friends

“Sore wa watashi no yūjin ni tsuitedesu”

Haha: what about them? Did something happen?

“Karera wa dō? Nanika okorimashita ka?”

Okiniiri: there was this game that we all love to play called mobile legends

“Watashitachi zen'in ga purei suru no ga daisukina mobairu densetsu to yoba

reru kono gēmu ga arimashita”

Haha: did you make them angry?

Okiniiri: mom these past months my phone keeps on being strange due to being use for

three years, I told you in my birthday is a new phone

“Okāsan, kono sūkagetsukan, watashi no denwa wa 3-nenkan shiyō sa rete ita tame ni

kimyō ni nari tsudzukete imasu. Tanjōbi ni atarashī denwada to iimashita.”

Haha: now I know why you insist to me buy you a new phone

“Ima, watashi wa anata ga watashi ni anata ni atarashī denwa o kau to shuchō

suru riyū o shitte imasu”

Okiniiri: yeah mom, but it’s okay mom I can still use my phone and it is just a game

“E e mama, demo daijōbudayo”

Haha: it is just a game, if they’re you’re friends they let it pass

“Karera wa anata ga tomodachinara karera wa sore o tsūka sa semasu, sore

wa tan'naru gēmudesu”

Okiniiri: I know mom, but I think they don’t want to play with me, I might dragged them

down

“Watashi wa mama o shitte imasuga, karera wa watashitoisshoni asobitakunai to omou,

watashi wa karera o hikizuri orosu kamo shirenai”

Haha: Honey its fine, they will let you play with them, and they will be your friend forever
“Hanī, daijōbu, karera wa anata ni karera to asobase, karera wa eien ni anata no

tomodachi ni naru”

Okiniiri: thank you mom, you are a big help

“Okāsan, arigatō”

Haha: I know honey, that’s why you need to talk to me every time you felt sad and

lonely, communication is a must

“Watashi wa hachimitsu o shitte iru,dakara anata ga kanashikute sabishī to kanjiru tabi

ni anata wa watashi to hanasu hitsuyō ga aru, komyunikēshon wa hissudesu”

Okiniiri: Thank you again mom, I love always and unconditionally

“Okāsan, arigatōgozaimasu, watashi wa itsumo mujōken ni aishiteimasu”

Haha: Now get change and be ready for our meal, I cooked your favourite meal

“Ima, watashitachi no shokuji no junbi o shite, henka o te ni iretekudasai”

Okiniiri: right away mom, wow my delicious meal

“Sugu ni mama, watashi no oishī shokuji o sugoi”

Okiniiri was happy because she has a mother to rely on and ready to cheer her up

”O ni iri wa shiawasedeshita”

She was about to sleep, but she remembers to remind her friends that tomorrow is her

birthday through chat

“Kanojo wa nemurou to shite imashitaga, chatto de ashita ga kanojo no tanjōbidearu

koto o tomodachi ni omoidasa seru koto o oboete imasu”

Okiniiri: hey guys tomorrow are my birthday, I am with just greetings, no gifts please,

just greetings will be fine.

“Kon'nichiwa, ashita wa watashi no tanjōbidesu. Watashi wa tada aisatsu o shimasu.

Okurimono wa shinaide kudasai, aisatsu dake de kekkōdesu.”

But none of her best friend replied nor seen, so she went on her sleep

“Shikashi, kanojo no shin'yū wa dare mo kotae mo minakattanode, kanojo wa nemuri ni

tsuita”

Scene 4/ shin 4, on her birthday/ Kanojo no tanjōbi ni

She got up in the morning, immediately rush to the bath room and clean her. She wore

her favorite jacket as sign of having a good day, she never open her phone because it

may slows her down. She ate a breakfast and bid good bye to her mother.
On her way to school, she felt something is missing, and it bothers her. She opened her

phone and sees that her classmate and teacher had greeted her except her best

friends. She was sad because before she sleeps, she reminded them.

“Kanojo wa asa okite, sugu ni basurūmu ni kaketsukete sōji shimashita. Kanojo wa

okiniiri no jaketto o, yoiichinichiwo sugosu tame no sain to shite mi ni tsukemashita.

Kanojo wa chōshoku o tabe, hahaoya ni wakare o tsugeta. Gakkō ni iku tochū de,

kanojo wa nanika ga tarinai to kanji, sore ga kanojo o nayama semashita. Kanojo wa

geitaidenwa o hiraki, kurasumēto to sensei ga shin'yū o nozoite kanojo ni aisatsu shite

ita no o mita. Kanojo wa nerumae ni omoidasa setanode kanashikatta.”

Okiniiri: why they ignoring especially it are my birthday? Why their doing this to me??

It’s not like them

“Tokuni mushi shite iru no wa watashi no tanjōbidesu ka? Naze karera wa

watashi ni kore o shimasu ka? Karera to wa chigau”

She makes her way to her to their classroom, she never smile on that day. She ignored

her best friends, never make contact with them.

“Kanojo wa jibun no kyōshitsu ni kanojo no hōhō ni kanojo no hōhō o tsukuru, kanojo

wa sonohi wa kesshite warawanai. Kanojo wa shin'yū o mushi shi, kesshite karera to

renraku o torimasen.”

Okiniiri: they’re so cold to me, I can be colder too

“Karera wa watashiniha totemo samui, watashi mo samuku suru koto ga

dekimasu”

Some of her best friend noticed she was cold

“Kanojo no shin'yū no nan'ninka wa kanojo ga samui koto ni kidzukimashita”

Rida: you seem so cold today, are you feeling fine?

“ Kyō wa totemo samui yōdesuga, genkidesuka?”

Okiniiri: (keeps on ignoring)

“(Mushi shi tsudzukemasu)”

Rida: you don’t look like your fine to me

“Anata wa watashiniha bakkin no yō ni miemasen”

Okiniiri: I am fine!!!(Replied with anger)

“Watashi wa daijōbu! ! ! (Ikari de kotaeta)”


Rida: if you say so, jeez

“Anata ga sō iunara, jīzu”

Okiniiri: (she leaves the place and ignored them)

“(Kanojo wa sono ba o dete mushi shita)”

Scene 5/ shin 5, Okiniiri’s house/ Oki Iri no ie

Atsui chat Okiniiri

Atsui chatto ōkini iri

Atsui: (he chat Okiniiri to go to their playground) Okiniiri come to our playground

Okiniiri: why I am going to our play ground?

“Naze watashitachi no asobiba ni iku nodesu ka?”

Atsui: just come to our favorite play ground

“Naze watashitachi no asobiba ni iku nodesu ka?”

Okiniiri: I am still invited to that place?

“Watashi wa mada sono basho ni shōtai sa rete imasu ka?”

Atsui: you are still invited to this place, no matter what happened

“Nani ga okotta to shite mo, anata wa mada kono basho ni shōtai sa rete imasu”

Okiniiri: really?

“Hontōni?”

Atsui: yes you are still welcome here

“Hai, anata wa mada koko de kangei sa rete imasu”

Okiniiri: yeah I will come

“E e, kimasu”

Atsui: where are you now?

“Ima doko ni imasu ka?”

Okiniiri: at my house, wait me there

“Ie de matte”

Atsui: alright I will wait you there

“Yoroshikuonegaishimasu”

Okiniiri decided to come even she was angry to them, but still she knows there will be

an explanation of what is going on.


“Okinīri wa okotte ita to shite mo kuru koto o kimemashitaga, soredemo kanojo wa nani

ga okotte iru no ka no setsumei ga aru koto o shitte imasu.”

Haha: honey someone left a teddy bear while you are sleeping

“Anata ga nete iru ma ni darekaga tedibea o oite kureta”

Okiniiri: who left it here?

“Dare ga koko ni oita no?”

Haha: I don’t know honey, maybe some acquaintance of yours

“Watashi wa hachimitsu o shirimasen, anata no shiriai kamo shiremasen”

Okiniiri: who might give this? Is it strange there’s no name in it?

“Dare ga kore o ageru ka? Namae ga haitte inai no wa kimyōdesu ka”

Haha: where are you going?

“Doko ni iku no?”

Okiniiri: to the playground mom

“Asobiba mama e”

Haha: okay honey don’t go pass of your curfew

“Daijōbu, hachimitsu wa mongen o suginaide”

Okiniiri: yes I won’t go pass my curfew

“Hai, mongen o tsūka shimasen”

Haha: be careful okay

“Daijōbu chūi shite kudasai”

Okiniiri: yes mommy

“Hai, mama”

Brought the teddy bear along with her

“Kanojo to issho ni tedibea o motte kita”

Scene 6/ shin 6, at the playground/ Asobiba de

okiniiri arrived at their playground, she received a message to wait outside.

“Okiniiri wa karera no asobiba ni tōchaku shi,-gai de matsu yō ni to iu messēji o

uketorimashita.”

Okiniiri: hey I’m at the front of the playground and brought a teddy bears

“Yā, asobiba no mae ni ite, tedibea o motte kite”

Rida: Just wait outside for a little moment.


“Soto de chottomatte”

Okiniiri: okay fine, I’ll be right here

“Daijōbu, watashi wa koko ni iru yo”

Rida: just wait

“Chottomatte”

She waited a couple minutes before she was invited inside.

“Kanojo wa sū-bu matte kara naka ni shōtai sa remashita.”

She felt a feeling she was about to be surprise. At the moment she about to open the

door

A loud cheer from the inside can be headed

“Uchigawa kara no dai seien ga mukau”

Everyone/ Min'na: Happy Birthday Okiniiri!!!

“Happībāsudē ōkini iri

Okiniiri: you guys shouldn't have

“Anata-tachi wa motte wa ikenai”

Atsui: we were sorry for making you felt worried about us

“Watashitachi o shinpai sa sete mōshiwake arimasendeshita”

Joka: yeah i'm too, sorry for being harsh to you

“E e, watashi mo anata ni kibishīnode gomen'nasai”

Suzumi: we kind make feel that way because we want to surprise you

“Watashitachi wa anata o odoroka setainode, sonoyōni kanji sasemasu”

Okiniiri: guys shouldn't have, I’m happy that you don't forget my birthday

“Watashi no tanjōbi o wasurenaide kurete ureshīdesu”

Rida: why would we forget your birthday, we are best friends at all

“Naze anata no tanjōbi o wasureru no ka, watashitachiha saikō no tomodachidesu”

Okiniiri: thank you guy for doing this to me, i did not expect that you would do this to me.

(She hugged all of her best friends)

“Watashi ni kore o shite kurete arigatō, watashi wa anata ga watashi ni kore o suru koto

o kitai shite inakatta. (Kanojo wa shin'yū zen'in o dakishimemashita)”

Suzumi: well this not only the surprise, we have one more surprise

“Kore wa odoroki dakedenaku, mō 1tsu odoroki ga arimasu”


Okiniiri: what more surprise you have??

“Hoka ni don'na odoroki ga arimasu ka? “

Joka: well you actually holding it

“Yoku anata wa jissai ni sore o hoji shite imasu”

Okiniiri: this Teddy bear?

“Kono tedibea?”

Atsui: yes that teddy bear

“Hai, tedibea”

Rida: have you noticed the zipper on the back?

“Haimen no jippā ni kidzukimashita ka?”

Okiniiri: I haven’t notice it

“Kidzuite imasen”

Atsui: would you kindly take a look at the back

“Ushiro o mitekudasai”

(Okiniiri look at the back, and saw the zipper. she unzip it and it revealed a phone on

the back)

(Okiniiri wa haimen o mite, jippā o mimashita. Kanojo wa sore o kaitō suru to, haimen ni

denwa ga arawaremashita)

Okiniiri: who bought this phone??

“Dare ga kono denwa o katta no? “

Atsui: actually it's your mom who bought the phone; she asks as to give it to you

“Jissai ni denwa o katta no wa anata no okāsandesu, kanojo wa anata ni sore o

ataeru yō ni tanomimasu”

Okiniiri: thank you mom, when i get home i will hugged her very tight

“Okāsan arigatō,-ka ni kaettara, totemo kitsuku dakishimemasu”

Rida: now that have knew, maybe we can play again

“Ima dewa shitte iru, tabun watashitachi wa futatabi asobu koto ga dekimasu”

Okiniiri: yes we can play again

“Hai, mōichido purei dekimasu

Suzumi: but before that least eat

Shikashi, sono zen ni sukunakutomo taberu

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