The authors have revised their article based on feedback from a reviewer. They address 20 comments from the reviewer, explaining how they have amended different sections of the article such as the title, abstract, introduction, objectives, research questions, literature review, methods, findings, discussion, conclusions and references. The authors also had the paper professionally proofread and resolved issues such as ineffective paragraphs.
The authors have revised their article based on feedback from a reviewer. They address 20 comments from the reviewer, explaining how they have amended different sections of the article such as the title, abstract, introduction, objectives, research questions, literature review, methods, findings, discussion, conclusions and references. The authors also had the paper professionally proofread and resolved issues such as ineffective paragraphs.
The authors have revised their article based on feedback from a reviewer. They address 20 comments from the reviewer, explaining how they have amended different sections of the article such as the title, abstract, introduction, objectives, research questions, literature review, methods, findings, discussion, conclusions and references. The authors also had the paper professionally proofread and resolved issues such as ineffective paragraphs.
1. Reviewer’s comments/suggestions Correction made
2. The reviewer ticked “partially” for the title in the review form. We have revised our title. 3. The reviewer ticked “partially” for the abstract in the review We have revised our abstract. form. 4. The reviewer ticked “partially” for the introduction We have revised the introduction section. 5. The reviewer ticked “partially” for the objective of the We argue that we have research provided the objectives of the study; please see page 2, par. 2. 6. Additional comments: “What is the gap of this study?’ We have revised the introduction section, especially in providing the gap of the study; see page 2, par. 2, line 2- 4. 7. The reviewer ticked “partially” for the research questions We have reformulated the research questions; see page 2, par. 2. 8. Additional comments: “Discuss previously published We have revised the literature research that have succeeded and or not in using this review, especially in discussing application. Do not only discuss the advantages, but the previously published research disadvantages as well and how they are resolved by (see page 6, par. 3) and both advantages and experts.” disadvantages of using quizlet application. (see page 6, par.2) 9. The reviewer ticked “partially” for the participant, We have revised the method instrument, data collection, and data analysis in the reviewer section, especially in providing form. additional information; see page 6, par.5, line 3-4) 10. Additional comments: “There is no explanation of research We have revised the method method on motivation through observation framework.” section, especially in providing the observation guidelines and the observation checklist sheets. (see page 7, par. 1) 11. Additional comments: “Where there problems while We have revised the discussion implementing this research?” section by providing the problems occurred when conducting the study. (see page 11, par. 6) 12 Additional comments: “I suggest the researcher to rewrite We have revised the discussion this part by stating the statements that answer the RQ and section, especially in matching match with the title” the results of study with the hypotheses and the title. (see page 11, par. 1) 13. Additional comments: “it seems the findings and discussion We have provided the other are not in depth.” interpretation of data in the finding section (see page 10, par. 1) and other previous studies that support or contradict to our findings to make our research are more in depth (see page 11, par. 1, 4 & 5) 14. Additional comments: “Moreover, the statement students felt We have revised the finding fun and enjoy (p.8 on discussion) have no supporting data” and discussion section especially in providing the data (see page 10) that support our statements (see page 11, par. 3) 15. Additional comment: “Then the researcher can strengthen We have revised the result of the result obtained by elaborating the result of comparison finding section especially in between teaching using quizlet and the one which did not.” elaborating the results of comparison between students’ motivations in learning vocabulary. (see page 9, par. 1 & 2) 16. Additional comment: “Add one more paragraph of the We have revised the conclusion limitations of this study and what recommendations can be section by adding a paragraph given for researchers who would like to research on similar explaining the limitation of topics in the future.” study and the recommendation for the further research. (see page 12, par. 3) 17. The reviewer ticked “partially” for the references. We have revised the references by following APA styles guidelines. 18. The reviewer ticked “partially” for grammar and cohesion We have revised the contents of article by correcting the grammatical errors and make the cohesive paragraph. 19. Additional comments: “Needs professional proofreading” We have asked a proofreader to professionally proofread our paper, his version of proofreading (with Track Changes) is sent in a different file for your review. 20. Additional comment: “There are some are ineffective We have resolved these paragraphs such as experts’ opinions without giving any problems by adding the conclusions or explanations from the author, main ideas of conclusion to the experts’ the paragraphs without any supporting details, etc” opinion and giving supporting details for the main idea contained in the paragraph.