Summary of Proposal Defense

Comments and Revisions

Date: December 07, 2023

Title: “Paglikha ng Editoryal Kartun Bilang Pantulong sa Pagturo sa Pag-unawa
ng Kaisipan sa Binasa”
Researchers:
Ano-os, Ma. Rhea Ann
Cañas, Joven B.
Encajonado, Stephen Q.

Panel Members Comments/ Suggestions Action Taken Page No.

Chapter 1

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Prof. Eden Gomez
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aaral” 4-5

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Chapter 2

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Chapter 3

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Prof. Ma. Alina C.
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Pescadera
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Chapter 2

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Chapter 3

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“Kahalagahan ng Pag-aaral”
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Prof. Liza Do-oma

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Chapter 3

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