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THE USE OF SOCIAL MEDIA AND ITS EFFECTS ON FOOD STALL

OPERATIONS AT PASEO DE TAYABAS AMIDST

COVID-19 PANDEMIC
Matrix for Revision
Consolidated Suggestions and Recommendations
Comments/Suggestions/ Page Number/
Action Taken
Recommendations Part
1. Panel suggested to change The revised title: The Use of Social
the word “ Among” into Media and Its Effects On Food Stall
“on” in the research title. Title page Operations at Paseo De Tayabas
Amidst Covid-19 Pandemic

2. Panel suggested to edit the Researchers, reconstruct the format


Biographical
biographical sketch of biographical sketch in the new
Sketch
format.
3. Panel recommend to add Researchers add the names of
more person to acknowledge campus director, panels, statistician,
as part of the study Filipino teacher who translate the
Acknowledgement instrument, people who guided
them, owners/managers, workers in
the area of study, family, and
English critic.
4. Panel ask the Table of The table of content is now
contents should not have Table of contents constructed based on the format.
“dot” in the new format.
5. Abstract should not have Abstract Abstract is now created based on the
indentation. format.
6. Panel suggested to add more Introduction Researchers reconstruct the
information as part of introduction based to the panel
introduction. suggested, by adding information
discussing the main topic of this
research
7. Panel suggested to Background of the Researchers construct the
reorganize the background Study background of the study to make
of the study. Page: 2 more readable.
8. Remove the 1st objective and Research Researchers removed the objective
change some unnecessary Objectives number 1 and rephrase the
words in objective 2,3,4, Page: 3 objectives 2,3,4 based to the panel
panel also suggested to add suggestion and lastly, researchers
to the objective 5 for the
final output of the study.
9. Panel recommended to Significance of the As panel suggested we remove the
remove the researchers in Study researchers in the significance of the
the in the part of the Page: 5 study.
significance of the study.
10. Panel suggested to add Definition of terms Researchers reconstruct the
operation in the Definition Page: 5-6 definition of terms in alphabetical
of terms in this study. arrangement and added “operation”
as key term in this study.
11. Related literature are well Related literature Researchers added some related
presented but panel Page: 7-8 literature about food stalls
suggested to add food stall
as the additional variable in
this study.
12. Panel suggested to Research Locale Researchers recreated the
reconstruct the locale of the Page: 17 researchers local determining why
study to answer why Paseo Paseo De Tayabas in Tayabas City
De Tayabas in Tayabas City was chosen laction of this research
is chosen location. study.
13. Panel suggested to add the Procedure/Data Researchers added results of the
result of pilot testing to be Collection pilot testing of the questionnaire and
more informative. Page: 18 edit some unnecessary words
included.
14. Panel suggested to remove Chapter IV Researchers decided to remove the
the demographic profile of Result and result and discussion about
the respondents, as the study Discussions Demographic profile of the
showed that no cited Pages: 22-27 respondents.
correlations.
15. Panel suggested to add Action Plan Researchers added objectives and
action plan for the lowest Page: 34- 35 action strategies to improve the
positive effects. positive effects using social media
on food stall operation.
16. As the demographic was Summary Researchers revised the summary to
removed, panel also Page: 36 remove the unnecessary data.
suggested to remove the
statement about this.
17. Findings should answer the Findings Researchers added finding to answer
objectives of the study. Page 36- 37 the listed objectives in this study.
18. State in the Conclusions that Conclusions Researchers added statement
researchers created action Page: 39 discussing that there are created
plan as the output in this action plan as the output in this
research study research study.
19. Recommendation should be Recommendation Researcher removed the some
stated for the further Page: 39 recommendation and created new
improvements of the study recommendations as the panel
suggested.
20. References Cited are need References Cited Researchers arranged the references
to rearrange. Page: 40 cited alphabetically and added some
references from the added
information as to revision of this
research study.

Reviewed and Approved by: __ _


CRISTINA S. VILLEGA

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ANGELICA G. LONTOC

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IRISH T. VALDEAVILLA

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