Assessment 1

by Jyasmin Ferro

Submission date: 01-Sep-2018 06:35PM (UT C+1000)

Submission ID: 995701884
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The rubric did not upload so you will need to look at the rubric in terms of what I am saying here. Criteria 1Knowledge
and Understanding Might give the range of disengaged behaviours more deeply. but started to tease out some
possibilities. Sits at CR level Criteria 2 Evaluation and Creative Process and Research So good thinking through – take
the step further and tease out what overriding principles are operating for you to be able to use, at the same time,
strategies informed by such different ideas Sits at CR level Criteria 3 Communication and Research You tie some
interesting policy research together here – might read paper more closely before. submitting and APA needs a bit of
work.. Sits at CR Overall sits at CR level
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ORIGINALITY REPORT

8 %
SIMILARIT Y INDEX
7%
INT ERNET SOURCES
3%
PUBLICAT IONS
6%
ST UDENT PAPERS

PRIMARY SOURCES

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Submitted to Curtin University of Technology
St udent Paper 2%
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teach.newport.ac.uk
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Submitted to University of South Australia
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docs.education.gov.au
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Submitted to Griffth University
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www.theaustralian.com.au
Int ernet Source <1%
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Submitted to Walden University
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eprints.utas.edu.au
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Submitted to Australian Catholic University
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unesdoc.unesco.org
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researchbank.acu.edu.au
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eprints.qut.edu.au
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Submitted to University of Newcastle
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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

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yet they theoretically come f rom dif f erent places - what ideas might be operating to take the
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Text Comment. T he rubric did not upload so you will need to look at the rubric in terms of
what I am saying here. Criteria 1Knowledge and Understanding Might give the range of
disengaged behaviours more deeply. but started to tease out some possibilities. Sits at CR level
Criteria 2 Evaluation and Creative Process and Research So good thinking through – take the
step f urther and tease out what overriding principles are operating f or you to be able to use, at
the same time, strategies inf ormed by such dif f erent ideas Sits at CR level Criteria 3
Communication and Research You tie some interesting policy research together here – might
read paper more closely bef ore. submitting and APA needs a bit of work.. Sits at CR Overall sits
at CR level