"THE UNTRUSTED"

Directed by: Jan Ella Almerol & Earl Ganiron

Script Writer: Jan Ella Almerol

Group 2
BE-HUMMS 11Y2-1
Main Characters:
Marjorie Calawigan as "Lucy"
Desiree Elbanbuena as "Magdalena/Mother"
Jerome Suarez as "Father"
Rose Jean Pabon as "Stella"
Earl Ganiron as "Albert"
Princess Rolda as "Voice"

Extra Characters: Nikka Magdadaro

Raymark Malinog as "Priest" Jhona Villafania as "The Slaves"
Michaela Aquino as "Crazy Kimberly Bacea
Woman/Waitress" Jade Abulencia
Earlyn Desales as "Crazy Woman" Jackilyn Ventura
Jai De Vera as "Crazy Woman" Denice Busigen
Divine Chua as "Sampaguita Girl" Beheybi Jeheyn Frias as "The Kids"
Marcelino Cruz as "Policeman" Rozen Briones as "Beggar"
Germaine Ramos

Propsmen:
Rozen Briones
Nikka Magdadaro
Manuel Llorente
John Paul Feir
Jai De Vera
Divine Chua
Jhona Villafania
Germaine Ramos
Denice Busigen
SCENE 1

Set up: Dark Room

*Spotlight on the main character, doing creepy things & making herself looks emo*

*SFX fade in... creepy baby laugh, rushing water, heavy footsteps*

*BGM fade in... creepy music*

Lucy: What I’m feeling is not a joke, nor a lie. It’s serious and I’m sick of this. It feels like
everyday is another way of dying. It feels like I am tortured, massacred, killed for too many
times. It’s not a lie, nor a joke. But they're happy, they're making fun of it so they have to pay
for it.

*BGM fade in... Bad Guy by Billie Eilish, sung by the main character*

*Blinking lightfx*

*Creepy/crazy like choreography with 5 back up dancers wearing hospital gowns*

*4 big frames with 4 people each*

*00:56 of the song, the character will do creepy stuffs with the 5 people*

*01:14 of the song, stop blinking of lights but dark. Spotlight on the dancing main character
with her 5 back up dancers*

*01:22 the back ups will act as staffs in a mental hospital trying to make her calm by
injecting med, then the main char will fall down then the 4 people in the frame suddenly
appeared bloody on the spotlight*

*01:28 song stop, lights off*

Father: I told you Lucy's creating a story, she wants all of us to believe about the
hallucination things and all those creepo stuffs!
Mother: She won’t do that! We never taught her how to lie!
Father: Oh come on!
Mother: What? You really believe with those gossipers? They just making up stories to hurt
our child!

*Parents' spotlight dimmed, main character focus spotlight*

*Main character listening to the argument, crying*

*BGM fade in... sad music*

Father: Our child! Is the ones making up stories!

Mother: What father are you? You listen more to other people than your own daughter?
Father: Don’t accuse me of being such a jerk father! I just don’t want to tolerate her lies!

*Mother go out of the door*

*From sad to intense music*

*Shadow suddenly surrounds the main character*

*Creepy voice appeared while the main character acts like hallucinating*

Voice: They don’t want you! You can’t trust them. Nobody wants to listen, nobody wants
you, only me. Just listen to me. Your father? He hates you, your thoughts, your whole.

*From intense to sad music*

Voice: Don’t listen to them, ignore everybody. They want you killed!

*Parents' spotlight out, focus spotlight on the main character*

*BGM fade in... Anything but ordinary by Avril Lavigne sung by the main character*

*Main character roaming on the stage, emotional, spotlight follows*

*Music stopped*

SCENE 2

*Best friend will come in*

*Main character will roam around while her best friend is sitting on the chair*

Stella: Hey sis, you alright?

Lucy: I don't know I-i'm scared.
Stella: Scared of what? Tell me, it's fine.
Lucy: I’m hearing it again.
Stella: Hearing what? You mean the scary voice?
Lucy: Yeah

*BGM fade in... Tomorrow by Avril Lavigne*

*Main character sings in the tune of tomorrow*

*Two characters roam around the stage*

Lucy: I've been hearing that voice and I don't know why it’s bothering me.
Stella: Are you sure of what you're hearing?
Lucy: I tried to ignore it, but I can’t.
Stella: Just keep going.
Lucy: Each day it becomes louder, each day it becomes scarier.
Stella: It'll be alright, I’m here.
Lucy: I tried not to listen.
Stella: Please don’t listen!

*BGM stop*

Stella: Look, everything you're into is just a trial, you can overcome it. Just ignore the voice,
and keep going. We're here for you Lucy, or at least I’m here. If they don’t believe, then let
them be. After all it’s your life, regardless how many people are here for you, you still have
freedom to live your life.

*Characters will hug then the main character will walk back and forth*

*BGM fade in...Tomorrow by Avril Lavigne sung by the main character*

*The two will act and dance to the music*

And I want to believe you

When you tell me that it'll be okay
I tried to believe you
But I won’t
When you say that it’s gonna be
It always turns up to be a different way
I tried to believe you
Not today, today, today, today, today
Oh I don’t know how i feel
Tomorrow, tomorrow
Tomorrow, tomorrow
I don’t know what to feel
Tomorrow, tomorrow
Tomorrow is another day

*Music stops*

*Lights off*

*Lights on, stage divided into two, house set up, spotlight on*

SCENE 3

*Telephone rings*

Albert: Hello?
Lucy: Hey?
Albert: Oh hey babe! Uhm.. Georgino opened up his new pizza parlor downtown, I’m
craving, are you up?
Lucy: Ah yeah sure.
Albert: Babe? Are you okay? Is there any problem?
Lucy: I’m fine, see you there.
Albert: Yes! Okay, okay. 99th Maynard Street at the downtown, 5 pm! Okay? I'll see you
there! Love you! Bye!
Lucy: Got it, love you too.

*Two characters go out of door*

*Meet at the center of the stage*

Albert: Hey babe, what’s up? I miss you. Waiter please?

Lucy: Uhm. I want this, also this, i love this one! As well as here, I want this! also this! I
want all of these!
Waiter: Uhm. How about you sir?
Albert: Only a glass of water please. Thank you!
Waiter: Okay sir, wait for awhile.
Albert: Babe, you know what when I heard about this new pizza parlor of Georgino I told
myself that I’m gonna go there and taste the world's most famous pizza, of course with the
person i loved, and it’s you babe! Stella?!? What are you doing here? I-it doesn't matter.
Lucy: Babe?
Albert: Hey babe! I-im sorry, are you okay? Are you listening?
Lucy: I-im sorry?
Albert: I knew it there’s something wrong.
Lucy: with you?
Albert: No with you, tell me!
Lucy: Yeah I’m, I-i don’t know what to do! I’m hearing a voice again, you know it sucks
acting like crazy and liar in the eyes of everyone, while I’m suffering, for real.

*The main character cried, her boyfriend will hold her hand*

Albert: Hey you know what, you just have to be true. Don’t care what other people say,
‘cause it’s you. They can never change that. They aren't helping, you know?
Lucy: I can’t help but to get affected, even my dad, he doesn’t believe in me, and it’s painful,
I’m hurt.

*BGM fade in... True Colors by Justin Timblerlake*

Albert: You with those sad eyes

Don’t be discouraged
Oh I realized

: Hey look at me.

It’s hard to take courage

In this world full of people

: I'm telling you.

You can lose sight of it all

The darkness inside you
Will make you feel so small

Lucy: But how? I can’t stop hurting and listening to them.

Albert: First, show me a smile then
Don’t be unhappy
I remember when
I last saw you laughing
In this world full of crazy
And you’ve taken all you can bear
Just call me up
And I will always be there
I see your true colors
Shining through

*The main character and her boyfriend will dance*

*Lucy sings in true colors tune*

Lucy: They can’t see it

Albert: I see your true colors that’s why I love you.
Lucy: Nobody wants me
Albert: So don't be afraid
Lucy: No I can't
Albert: To let them show
Lucy: Show what?
Albert: Your true colors
Lucy: My true colors
Both: Are beautiful like a rainbow
Albert: Oh woah like a rainbow.

*BGM stops*

*Characters will almost kiss each other*

*Waiter will come in*

Waiter: Here’s your order!

Albert: Tsk, okay okay, thank you!

*Waiter will go out*

Albert: Hey babe, here try this!

*He will give the pizza to Lucy & Lucy will eat it*

Albert: Hmm? How is it?

Lucy: Good! Great!
Albert: I told you. Waiter please?

*Albert will call the waitress, signing for the bill, waitress will go in*

Albert: Here!
Waiter: Thank you sir, come again.
Lucy: Uhm. I have to go.
Albert: Wait what? Are you sure?
Lucy: I’m not feeling well. I need to rest, sorry.
Albert: Okay. Bye, I love you!

*Acts like standing and going home, they'll back off*

SCENE 4

*Albert continue eating the pizza*

*Stella walks in*

Albert: Stella?!? Psst! Psst! Hey, Stella! I’m here, over here babe!
Stella: Albert!

*Stella hugs Albert tightly*

Albert: I missed you!

Stella: I missed you too.
Albert: I love you babe!

*Almost kissing when Stella suddenly push Albert away*

Albert: What?
Stella: This is wrong!
Albert: Hey are we going to argue about this again?
Stella: But I can’t stand with this affair anymore!
Albert: Why? Because she's your best friend?
Stella: And you're her boyfriend!
Albert: Oh come on, Stella! Here we go again? I said you're the one I love, for real!
Stella: But you have a girlfriend
Albert: Soon I will break up with her, but not now, I just need... I just need timing!
Stella: But how about her? I don’t want to cause her pain, she's my best friend!
Albert: I know, I know we'll be both guilty here but what will i do? I don't love her anymore,
I’m just... I’m just staying because of you.
Stella: Wh-what? Why me?
Albert: Remember? Remember when you pleaded me not to leave her because you don’t
want her to see in pain. And you also said that she loves me too much that she will kill herself
if I leave her!
Stella: But Albert?
Albert: No buts, or what ifs! No more doubts please? I promise once she'll be sent to the
mental institution, we're both leaving, we'll go somewhere far from here, we'll be together
okay?
Stella: how can you so sure about that, she's not crazy Albert!
Albert: Yes she is! Look those hallucinations! She’s even talking with nobody, she’s crazy
Stella! And soon she'll be cured, aren't you happy about that? We will be together if that
happened.
Stella: The thought of us being together is what I want, but...
Albert: I said no more buts, just be happy okay? I promise this love won’t be a secret
anymore.

*BGM fade in... Secret Love Song by Little Mix*

*Albert & Stella will dance to the song*

Albert: When you hold me in the street and you kiss me on the dance floor
I wish that it would be like that
Why can't it be like that
Cause I’m yours
We keep behind close doors
Everytime I see you I die a little more
Stolen moments that we steal as the curtain falls
It will never be enough
Stella: But we know this
We got a love that is hopeless
Albert: Why can't you hold me in the street
Why can’t I kiss you on the dance floor
Stella: I wish that it could be like that
Why can’t it be like that
Both: Cause I’m yours

*BGM stops*

Albert: I promise we'll love each other freely.

SCENE 5

Lucy: What's happening to me? I can't do anything but to be sad. Even Albert tried
everything just to cheer me up, but what I'm doing? None. I love him, I love them, but why
I'm feeling lonely? Is it because of that voice? Yes! It is.

*SFX fades in... Intense music played... the voice will speak. Lucy will act like hallucinating
again. Lights are blinking*

Voice: Forget them, they don't want you. You don't deserve them only me. Your father, he
hates you. Albert, he doesn’t love you. Stella, she's a fake friend.
Lucy: S-ssss-Stop!!! You are not true. C'mon Lucy it's nothing. Just tired and you need to
sleep. Yes right, after this it will be fine.
Voice: No Lucy, with them you'll not. But with me, yes. I'm doing this for your sake.

*Lucy will lay into bed slowly closing her eyes and starting to empty her mind*

*SFX fades in... Creepy Sound effects... Mother will appeared at the spotlight and coming in
front of Lucy, revealing that she's the voice*

Mother: Listen to me, I'm here for you. You don't need them. I'm the only one who loves you,
my sweet heart. Your mother only, me only.

*Mother will seat beside the sleeping Lucy while rubbing Lucy's hair*
Mother: If only you know. If you only know...

*She will fall asleep beside Lucy and got a nightmare*

*Curtains up*

*Slowly lights off*

*Creepy voice appeared, scream*

*Curtains down*

SCENE 6

*Magdalena (mother) will enter the stage, having those sad eyes*

Magdalena: I've seen dark before, but not like this. This is cold, this is empty, this is numb.
The life I knew is over, the lights are out. Hello, darkness, I'm ready to succumb

*SFX fades in... Creepy sounds*

*3 crazy women enters the scene*

Crazy women #1: Have you seen my daughter, Sally? Sally? Where are you now sally? HA
HA HA HA do you know my daughter?!!? HA HA HA!!! sally!!! HU HU HU!!! sally!!!
Crazy wowen #2: *creepy laughs* HA HA HA!!! Oh Magdalena, what happend?! Oh
darling, please take care HE HE HE HE *whisper* keep yourself away from any person HE
HE HE HE HE!!! No! no! no! *walks away*
Crazy women #3: No please!!! Help me!!! Please help me!! No!! No!! HA HA HA help me
please!!!

*Kids enter the scene while playing & running*

*1 girl who sells sampaguita will come in*

*1 policeman will enter the scene with his 3 slaves asking for help*

*Beggar come in*

*Noise will get loud*

Magdalena: What is happening here? Stop! No! This can't be happening! No! Stop! Stop
please! STOPPPP!!!

*Curtains up*

*Extra characters will go out, only Magdalena will stay*

*Curtains down*

*SFX fades in... Church bell rings*

*Priest will come in*

Priest: Hey miss, any problem? Come here inside I'll pray for you.

*Curtains up*

*Magdalena bow down holding her rosary while praying Our father in heaven*

*The priest enter the scene with those scary eyes rising up his both hands & praise God*

*The priest will come closer to Magdalena, touches Magdalena's hair down to its shoulder*

*Magdalena get scared but it doesn't stop her from praying*

*When the priest started touching Magdalena's arm, Magdalena run fast to escape from the
priest*

*Curtains up but only half*

*Magdalena rise up her hand above the curtain while the hand of the priest slowly touches
up Magdalena's hand*

Magdalena: No please father!! No!! help!! Please!! huhuhu!

*When the priest already holds the hand of Magdalena, both hands go down*

*Curtains fully up*

Magdalena: HELPPPPPP!!!! NOOOO!!!!!!!

*SFX fades out... Creepy sounds*

*End of Magdalena's nightmare*

Magdalena: NOOO!!!
Lucy: Mother? What happened? Are you okay?

*Magdalena started to cry*

Lucy: Mother tell me! What is the problem?

Magdalena: Im fine, its just a bad dream. Now leave me alone.
Lucy: Mom? No! I will not leave you!
Magdalena: Lucy, please just leave me alone.

*Lucy walks out*

*Curtains up*

SCENE 7

*BG intense music*

*Lights are blinking slowly*

*Vehicle's horns are on the air*

*Lucy appears on the spotlight*

Lucy: What's happening here? What are you two doing?

*Albert breaks his hug to Stella*

Albert: Nothing. I just saw Stella crying and I'm just trying to comfort her.
Stella: Yes! He's right.
Lucy: Liars!!! Hugging and kissing her forehead at the middle of the night, how comfortable
is that? Are you cheating on me?
Stella: No Lucy, you don't understa-

*Lucy slaps Stella's face*

*Albert stops Lucy and shouted*

Albert: What are you doing? Are you out of your mind? Are you crazy?
Lucy: Albert, you think I'm crazy?
Albert: Yes. Look at what you've done. It’s craziness. You're not in good condition Lucy,
you're crazy. That's why my love for you is slowly fading.
Stella: Albert, are you out of your mind? (Whispered in a low voice)
Albert: No Stella, it's over. She needs to know the truth.
Stella: No Albert, it's not the right time.
Lucy: What truth?
Albert: The truth that I don't love you anymore or should I say, I didn't love you. I'm just
doing this because of Stella, after she pleaded me to choose you. Look Lucy, I know that you
are a good person, I know that you love me but can't you see, I'm not happy anymore. You
are crazy and I don't like to witness how other people stare to us when we are together. I'm
done with you. It's over.

*Lucy punch Albert's face and started to cry*

Lucy: How dare you to say that you don't love me? No, you're not, you cannot do this to me.
Without you, my world will stop on turning. You can't leave me. You can't break me. We
stay together and forever.
Albert: No I'm not, ‘cause I don’t really love you. It's just a lie, I just forced to do so. Forgive
me but I want to end this whole thing. I want to free, myself from you with Stella here beside
me.

*in the tune of On My Own*

Lucy: Stella? You are my best friend. You know everything about me and all you can do in
return is to betray me? Albert? I trust you for a long time. I treat you as my world but now
what? You are hurting me. You'll regret this. I swear!!!

*Lights off*

*Music off*

*Clear stage*
SCENE 8

*Curtains down*

*Spotlight on the mother*

*She's looking on Lucy's photograph*

Mother: I love you my daughter that's why I'm doing this. I'm sorry. I don't want you to act
like crazy but it's for your sake that's why I need to do it.
Lucy: You're doing what? Mom, you are that voice? But why? You are my mother.
Mother: (crying) I'm just doing this for you, sweetheart. I want you to feel that they don't love
you and you can't trust them. That's why I'm doing this.
Lucy: (crying and angry) You are a liar!!! You love me? You care for me? No your not. You
are a fucking liar, mother. All of you. You are all liars. Liarssssss!!!

*Spotlight's off. Creepy sound effects on*

(Lucy's voice is present)

Lucy's voice: I love them that's why I'm going to do this. I forgive you all but I will never
forget about this. Mother, Father, Albert and Stella I do love you...

*Spotlight will focus to the 4 frames where the 4 characters located. They are holding a
black card with a note of: DEATH IS COMING! I LOVE YOU*

*Lucy will enter the room looking strangely to them, smirking and smiling. She's holding a
knife*

*BGM creepy sound effects, shouting voices and creepy foot steps*

Lucy: SURPRISE!!! What an amazing meet up? How's your day? Hi, Daddy. It's me, your
baby girl. Wait!! You are not my father. That's why after all this time I never felt that you
love me.
Father: What are you doing? Please forgive me. Put it do... (Father was stabbed by Lucy)

*The 3 are shouting for help*

Stella: Lucy please calm down, S-sss...

Albert: No, no , no Lucy... No!!!!
Lucy: And now, hi to my dearest mother. You told me that you love me but look what you've
done. It's all your fault. IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT!!

*Lucy killed her parents, Albert and Stella. Now she's acting like hallucinating and
completely crazy*

FINAL SCENE

Set up: Dark Room

*Spotlight on the main character, doing creepy things & making herself looks emo*

*SFX fade in... creepy baby laugh, rushing water, heavy footsteps*

*BGM fade in... creepy music*

*BGM Bad Guy played*

Lucy: What I’m feeling is not a joke, nor a lie. It’s serious and I’m sick of this. It feels like
everyday is another way of dying. It feels like I am tortured, massacred, killed for too many
times. It’s not a lie, nor a joke. But they're happy, they're making fun of it so they have to pay
for it. SO THEY ALL DESERVE TO DIE!!

Lucy: HAHAHAHAHAHA. My life is now a mess because of them.

*Starting to cry and sudden change of moods*

Lucy: Huhuhuhu, I'm now nothing.

*BGM: Bad Guy decreased in volume. Creepy sound effects appeared. Spotlight on the main
character*

Lucy: Life taught me one thing, you can't trust anyone. Because after what happen to me I
can say that they are "The Untrusted". I love them but they've just hurt me.

*CREEPY VOICE ARISE, CREEPY SCREAMS AND CRIES*

*Lucy will stab herself*

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