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THE WNTING UFE ing and whining, and just keep the
bear."
You could be Joel, even if your name
DRAFT NO.4 is Jenny. Or Julie,Jillian,Jim,Jane,Joe.
You are working on a first draft and
Replacing the words in boxes. small wonder you're unhappy. If you
lack confidence in setting one word after
BY JOHN McPHEE another and sense that you are stuck in
a place from which you will never be set
free, if you feel sure that you will never
make it and were not cut out to do this,
if your prose seems stillborn and you
completely lack confidence, you must be
a writer. If you say you see things
differently and describe your efforts pos-
itively, if you tell people that you "just
love to write," you may be delusional.
How could anyone. ever know that
something is good before it exists? And
unless you can identifY what is not suc-
ceeding-unless you can see those dark
clunky spots that are giving you such a
low opinion of your prose as it devel-
ops-how are you going to be able to
tone it up and make it work?
The idea of writing "Dear Mother"
and later snipping off the salutation
popped into my head forty-one years
ago while I was participating in a panel
of writers at the Y in Princeton. Jenny
was the only member of my family
there. She was ten. The bear got a big
laugh, but cheerlessly I also served up
the masochism and the self-inflicted pa-
ralysis, causing Jenny to tell me after-
ward that I was not sketching a com-
plete picture.
"You know it isn't all like that," she
said. "You should tell about the good
lock. It puts some writers down for
B months. It puts some writers down
for life. A not always brief or minor
are forthcoming. For six, seven, ten
hours no words have been forthcoming.
You are blocked, frustrated, in despair.
part."
She had a point. It isn't all like that-
only the first draft. First drafts are slow
form of it mutes all writers from the You are nowhere, and that's where and develop clumsily, because every sen-
outset of every day. "Dear Joel. .." This you've been getting. What do you do? tence affects not only those before it but
is just a random sample from letters You write, 'Dear Mother.' And then also those that follow. The first draft of
written to former students in response you tell your mother about the block, a long piece on California geology took
to their howling cries as they suffer the the frustration, the ineptitude, the de- two gloomy years; the second, third, and
masochistic self-inflicted paralysis or'a spair. You insist that you are not cut out fourth drafts took about six months
writer's normal routine. "Dear Joel .. ." to do this kind of work. You whine. You altogether. That four-to-one ratio in
This Joel will win huge awards and whimper. You outline your problem, writing time-first draft versus the ,_
write countless books and a nationally and you mention that the bear has a other drafts combined-has for me ~
syndicated column, but at the time of fifty-five-inch waist and a neck more been consistent in projects of any length, 8"....
this letter he has just been finding out than thirty inches around but could run even if the first draft takes only a few 3.0:
that to cross the electric fence from the nose-to-nose with Secretariat. You say days or weeks. There are psychological ~
actual world to the writing world re- the bear prefers to lie down and rest. differences from phase to phase, and the l
quires at least as much invention as the The bear rests fourteen hours a day. first is the phase of the pit and the pen- ~.
writing itsel£ "Dear Joel: You are writ- And you go on like that as long as you dulum. After that, it seems as if a ~
ing, say, about a grizzly bear. No words can. And then you go back and delete different person is taking over. Dread c:
Jt be actually writing only two or three the question was proper. Who was I to
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be if you were fifty-four. At twenty- lege students is pretend that fm their trees, there would be an interruption of
three, it is not only natural; it is impor-editor and their copy editor. In prepara- the reflection of sunlight on water.
tant. The developing writer reacts to ex- tion for conferences with them, I draw What word or phrase was I going to use
cellence as it is discovered-wherever boxes around words or phrases in the for that reflection? I looked up "sparkle"
and whenever-and of course does pieces they write. I suggest to them that in my old Webster's Collegiate. It said:
some imitating (unavoidably) in the they might do this for themselves. "See 'flash.'" I looked up "flash." The
process of drawing from the admired You draw a box not only around any definitions were followed by a presenta-
fabric things to make one's own. Rap- word that does not seem quite right but tion of synonyms: "flash, gleam, glance,
idly, the components of imitation fade. also around words that fulfill their as- glint, sparkle, glitter, scintillate, corus-
What remains is a new element in your signment but seem to present an op- cate, glimmer, shimmer mean to shoot
own voice, which is not in portunity. While the word forth light." I liked that last part, so I
any way an imitation. Your inside the box may be per- changed the manuscript to say, "The
manner as a writer takes fectly O.K., there is like]yto reflection of the sun races through the
form in this way, a fragment be an even better word for trees and shoots forth light from the
at a time. A style that lacks this situation, a word right water.''
strain and self-conscious- smack on the button, and In the search for words, thesauruses
ness is what you seem to as- why don't you try to find are useful things, but they don't talk
pire to, or you wouldn't be such a word? Ifnone occurs, about the words they list. They are also
bringing the matter up. don't linger; keep reading dangerous. They can lead you to choose
Therefore, your goal is in and drawing boxes, and a polysyllabic and fuzzy word when a
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the right place. So practice later revisit them one by simple and clear one is better. The value
taking shots at it. A relaxed, unself-con- one. If there's a box around "sensitive," of a thesaurus is not to make a writer
scious style is not something that one because it seems pretentious in the con- seem to have a vast vocabulary of recon-
person is born with and another not. text, try "susceptible." Why "suscepti- dite words. The value of a thesaurus is
Writers do not spring full-blown from ble"? Because you looked up "sensitive" in the assistance it can give you in
the earofZeus." in the dictionary and it said "highly sus- finding the best possible word for the
Jenny said, "I can't seem to finish ceptible." With dictionaries, I spend a mission that the word is supposed to
anything." great deal more time looking up words fulfill. Writing teachers and journalism
I said, "Neither can I." I know than words I have never heard courses have been known to compare
Then I went back to my own writ- of-at least ninety-nine to one. The them to crutches and to imply that no
ing, my own inability to get going until dictionary definitions of words you are writer of any character or competence
five in the afternoon, my animal sense of trying to replace are far more likely to would use them. At best, thesauruses
being hunted, my resemblance to the help you out than a scattershot wad are mere rest stops in the search for the
sand of Gibraltar. from a thesaurus. Ifyou use the diction- mot juste. Your destination is the dic-
ary after the thesaurus, the thesaurus tionary. Suppose you sense an opportu-
t is toward the end of the second will not hurt you. So draw a box around
I draft, if r m lucky, when the feeling "wad." Webster: "The cotton or silk ob-
comes over me that I have something I tained from the Syrian swallowwort,
nity beyond the word "intention." You
read the dictionary's thesauri an list of
synonyms: "intention, intent, purpose,
want to show to other people, some- formerly cultivated in Egypt and im- design, aim, end, object, objective,
thing that seems to be working and is . ported to Europe." Oh. But read on: "A goal." But the dictionary doesn't let it go
not going to go away. The feeling is little mass, tuft, or bundle ... a small, at that. It goes on to tell you the
more than welcome, yes, but it is hardly compact heap." Stet that one. I call this differences all the way down the line-
euphoria. It's just a new lease on life, a "the search for the mot juste," because how each listed word differs from all the
sense that fm going to survive until the when I was in the eighth grade Miss others. Some dictionaries keep them-
middle of next month. After reading the Bartholomew told us that Gustave Flau- selves trim by just listing synonyms and
second draft aloud, and going through bert walked around in his garden for not going on to make distinctions. You
the piece for the third time (removing days on end searching in his head for le want the first kind, in which you are not
the tin horns and radio static that I matjuste. Who could forget that? Flau- just getting a list ofwords; you are being
heard while reading), I enclose things in bert seemed heroic. Certain kids con- told the differences in their hues, as if
boxes for Draft No. 4. If I enjoy any- sidered him weird. you were looking at the stripes in an aw-
thing in this process it is Draft No. 4. I This, for example, came up while I ning, each of a subtly different green.
go searching for replacements for the was writing about the Atchafalaya, the Look up "vertical." It tells you-believe
words in the boxes. The final adjust- huge river swamp in southern Louisi- it or not-that "vertical," "perpendicu-
ments may be small-scale, but they are ana, and how it looked from a small lar," and "plumb" differ each from the
large to me, and I love addressing them. plane in the air. Land is growing there two others. Ditto "plastic, pliable, pli-
You could call this the copy-editing as silt arrives from the north. Parts of ant, ductile, malleable, adaptable." Ditto
phase if real copy editors were not out the swamp are filling in. From the air- "fidelity, allegiance, fealty, loyalty, devo-
there in the future prepared to examine plane, you could discern where these tion, piety."
the piece. The basic thing I do with col- places were, because, seen through the I grew up in canoes on northern lakes
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oil and antlers, the height and the headwa-
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I was left, in time that followed, with
one huge regret. In three years of Alaska
:s travel, research, and writing, it never oc- "People notfrom here don't understand. It's
curred to me to wonder why the Arctic not a weapon-it's a way oflife."
densely wooded island ... the fairest which
we had met with, with a handsome grove of
elms at its head."
BEACH WEDDING
Nothing irregular there, H.D.T. It
was the fairest island that you met with. Being just a stone's throw from the pretty church
Leviticus: they often tumble out onto the beach,
And the Lord spake unto Moses and to
unworldly creatures, the bride herself
Aaron, saying unro them, Speak unto the an apparition of satins or silks
children of Israel, saying, These are the beasts among stripy towels and inflatable sharks,
which ye shall eat among all the beasts that the groom in a morning suit, walking the sand
are on the earth.
in bare feet, wearing his shoes on his hands.
Actually, Mr. Shawn was just an-
other spear-carrier in the hall of usage She'll hitch her dress as far as her garter,
and grammar. The dais was occupied for he'll carry her some way into the water.
more than half a century by Eleanor Setting out for Atlantis they pause here
Gould, "Miss Gould," who was Mrs. on the point of departure; her long train
Packard, and whose wide reputation floats on the surface and drifts and darkens.
seeped down even into the awareness of
apprentice writers everywhere. I was Each empty evening a figure arrives
scarcely eighteen, and already collecting in a shooting jacket and combat trousers,
rejection slips, when I heard or read combing the shore with a metal detector,
about a twenty-two-year-old Vassar grubbing for coins or keys, sweeping for mines.
graduate named Eleanor Gould, who, in The shovel hooked to the back of his belt
1925, bought a copy of the brand-new drags behind him like a devil' s tail,
New Yorker, read it, and then reread it plowing a furrow, marking a lone trail.
with a blue pencil in her hand. When
she finished, the magazine was a mot- Before first light a spring tide does its work,
tled blue on every page-a circled em- panning for gold, resetting the sand,
barrassment of dangling modifiers, while under a thin sheet husband and wife
conflicting pronouns, absent commas, lie badly wounded after the first fight.
and over-all grammatical hash. She
mailed the marked-up copy to Harold -Simon Armitage
Ross, the founding editor, and Ross was
said to have bellowed. What he bel-
lowed was "Fmd this bitch and hire her!" margins with remarks about usage, dic- short, if you are introducing something,
In reality, Eleanor Gould was nine tion, indirection, word choice, punctua- introduce it. Don't get artistic with the
years old when Ross invented The New tion, ambiguities, and so forth. Her definite article. Ifyou say "a house," you
Yorker. She grew up in Ohio, went to completed product was sent on to the are introducing it. Ifyou say "the house,"
Oberlin College, and graduated in 1938. writer's editor, who read the marginalia the reader knows about it because you
Seven years later, she sought a job at The and later brought up selected items with mentioned it earlier. Mr. Shawn was
New Yorker, and in her application she the writer, or just handed the writer the influenced by Miss Gould far more than
mentioned one or two examples of the Gould proof, as it was known, and let the vice versa. He was a bear on indirection.
sort of help she felt she could provide. writer soak it up. Robert Bingham, who Her suggested fixes did not always rise
For example, something is not different was my principal editor for sixteen years into comparison with invisible mending.
than something else; it is different from (until brain cancer ended his relatively Some writers developed reactions in the
something else. It was Shawn, the man- young life and with it his exceptional ca- tantrum range. Nothing, though, was
aging editor, who hired her. There is no pability), always passed the Gould proof being forced upon the prose. If the writer
compact or simple title for what she did along to me, almost always saying, wished to ignore a salient comment from
across the following fifty-four years. She "\\Then she says 'Grammar,' sit up!" Miss Gould instead of slapping the fore-
was not an editor-not, at any rate, on On a highly competitive list, her head and feeling grateful, that was up to
the higher levels of holding writers' foremost peeve in factual writing was the writer. It was the writer's signed piece.
hands. She was not a fact checker, al- indirection-sliding facts in sideways, If the writer preferred warts, warts pre-
though she would surely mention any expecting a reader to gather rather vailed. A Gould proof rarely endeavored
fact she looked upon as suspect. What than receive information. You don't start to influence in any manner the structure
she did was read the magazine in galley off like an atmospheric fictionist: "The or thesis of a piece, and was not meant to.
proofs and mark up the proofs. Each gal- house on Lovers' Lane was where the Its purpose, according to Miss Gould,
ley had a New Yorker column running lovers loved loving." A Gould proof was to help a writer achieve an intent in
down the middle and enough margin on would have asked, "\\That house?" "What the clearest possible way. She sat you up,
either side to park a car. She filled the lovers?" "Where is Lovers' Lane?" In let me tell you. And not only did you not
36 THE NEW YOI\KER . APRIL 29, 2013
have to accept her suggested fixes but they live in her shadow, they lengthen it.
alscr-of course-you were free to fix the They can be rarefied. Reading a sen-
fixes according to the sound of things in tence like "She didn't know what hap-
your own head. pened to the other five people travelling
The general term for all this-from with her," they will see that what the
"house style" to a Gould-like proof-is writer could mean is that the traveller
copy editing. Miss Gould accepted the was one of eleven people on the trip.
title "grammarian" for several decades, This is high-alloy nitpicking, yes. But
but grammar was only the base of things why not? There is elegance in the less
she reacted to as she monitored the ambiguous way. She didn't know what
magazine. House style was actually happened to the five other people trav-
dealt with by others before she saw any- elling with her.
thing. House style is not a reference to To linger in the same thin air, what
the canard that an entire magazine can is the difference between "further" and
be made to sound as if it were written by "farther"? In the dictionary, look up
one writer. House style is a mechanical "further." It says "farther." Look up "far-
application of things like spelling and ther." It says "further." So you're safe
italics. In The New Yorker, "travelling" and can roll over and sleep. But the dis-
is spelled with two "l"s. Book titles tinction has a difference and O.K.'ers
are framed in quotation marks. The know what's O.K. "Farther" refers to
names of magazines are italicized, and measurable distance. "Further" is a mat-
if the names are in the possessive- TV ter of degree. Will you stop pelting me
Guide's, National Geographies-the "s" is with derision? That's enough out of you.
italicized, too. The names of ships are You'll go no further.
not italicized. It is house style to put Getting into an authentic standoff
the two dots over a second consecutive with this multitalented, multifaceted,
identical vowel, because the house does proofreading, query-proofing, copy-edit-
not cooperate in deemphasizing diaere- ing, grammar-wielding corps is difficult
ses. In articles in the New York Times to do, and in fifty years I have done so
the name of everybody mentioned is twice. One standoff, which shall not be
preceded by Mr., Ms., or Mrs. (if not by elaborated here, had to do with my
a lofty title like President, General, Sen- flippant use of scholarly parenthetical in-
ator, or Cardinal), and, traditionally, if text citations (Mourt, 1622) in a piece in
a Times reporter got into a skin boat which the works cited did not appear on
g, with an Eskimo in the Chukchi Sea no what scholars call the Works Cited List.
1e personal pronoun was ever going to get There was no Works Cited List. The
JU into that boat. "A visitor" got into that other standoff-related to the issue of
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·" boat. The Chicago Manual of Style is a February 23, 1987-had to do with the
JU quixotic attempt at one-style-fits-all for possessive of the word Corps, It was the
as every house in America-newspapers, piece about southern Louisiana, the
m magazines, book publishers, blogishers. Atchafalaya River, the vast swamp, and
n. Copy editors attend the flow of the the levees, spillways, and navigation locks
se prose and watch for leaks. Whatever else of the U.S. Army Corps of Engineers. It
g. she was called, Eleanor Gould was a approached twenty thousand words in
1e copy editor. She was one of several in a length, and, as you can imagine, the word
as developing tradition that became a leg- Corps was all over the text like an erup-
er acy. For a single closing issue, today's tion of measles. Often, the word occurred
m copy editors read New Yorker proofs so in the possessive. When I was in the
e- many times and in so many ways that eighth grade, Miss Bartholomew told us
ta they variously subtitle their own efforts. that a noun ending in "s" could be ren-
:e. The five incumbents call themselves dered possessive by an apostrophe alone
e- copy editors, page 0 .K.'ers, query proof- or by an apostrophe followed by an addi-
~d readers, and second readers. They all do tional "s," tie goes to the writer. Now, in
PRESEtHED BY
re all of it, and that's four job descriptions the Louisiana piece, I had written Corps'
0. each for five people-twenty function- for each and every possessive Corps, and ffi I THE LINCOLN MOTOR COMPANY
d, aries at five desks. They also do what El- the copy editors said that the possessive
in eanor Gould did, and to this day when of Corps should be printed as Corps's. I
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p, they finish working on a galley proof thought I was in a morgue. I said so. The
ot they say that it has been "Goulded." If copy editors phalanxed-me versus the
THE NEW YOI\KEI\. APRIL 29. 2013 37
whole department. They said that The It was as if she had handed me a rare Both Web. II and Random House
New Yorker did not use the naked "s" gold coin. Five years later, when I hap- say flatly that the plural of "attorney
apostrophe except with classical names pened to be writing about lacrosse in general" is both "attorneys general" and
like Jesus, Aeschylus, and Socrates; and Manchester, England, I worked in the "attorney generals." That being so, I put
even French names ending in a silent "s" word "Mancunian" three times in one on my robe, rapped the gavel, and said
were given the apostrophe "s," as in short paragraph. It was the second-best from the bench, "If you accept that the
"Fran~ois's," "lesjeunesses's," "Epesses's"- demonym r d ever heard, almost match- two forms are equal, I think you would
also as in"Amiens's hidden cache" and "le ing Vallisoletano (a citizen ofVallado- write attorney generals' cars and not at-
franrais's frank mustache." With regard lid). The planet, of course, is covered torneys general's cars-for obvious rea-
to Corps's, the copy editors were unchar- with demonyms, and after scouring the sons (a sense of the sight and sound of
acteristically unbending. I said that if world in conversations on this topic words has to kick in somewhere or the
Corps's had to be the form printed, I with Mary Norris I began a severely writer is missing one or two marbles)."
would have to stop all forward motion selective, highly subjective A-list, ex- What would I personally do? None of
and rewrite every sentence in which that tending Mancunian and V allisoletano the above. I would refer to "the cars of
possessive occurred-in ways that would through thirty-five others at this writ- the attorneys general." But that's just a
avoid using it, in ways that would get rid ing, including Wulfrunian (Wolver- matter of choice.
of"all those corpses." fm sure I spluttered hampton), Novocastrian (Newcasde), I work in a fake medieval turret on
about "slabsful ofrecumbents" and said it Trifluvian (Trois-Rivieres), Leodensian the roof of a campus building. When I
would be "as if every one of those (Leeds), Minneapolitan (Minneapolis), come out and walk around, bumping
Corps's was wired to a cold toe." This Hartlepudlian (Hartlepool), Liver- into friends, they tend to ask me, "What
threat was not considered persuasive, but pudlian (you knew it), Haligonian (Hal- are you working on?" Which is one rea-
eventually it led to someone's remarkable ifax), Varsovian (Warsaw), Providen- son I don't often come out and walk
suggestion. Why not call the U.S. Army tian (Providence), and Tridentine around. I always feel like a parrot an-
Corps of Engineers and ask what they do (Trent). swering that question, and a nervous ill-
when they need to express themselves in humored parrot if I am writing a first
ne can do worse than pretend to be
the possessive? I hadn't known that the
Army Corps ofEngineers was steeped in
Fowler's Modem English Usage or Mer-
O a copy editor. In my role as my
students' editor, I go through their pa-
draft. A few years ago, I had the luxury
of a one-word reply.
"What are you working on?"
riam-Webster's unparalleled English pers with them privately a comma at a "Chalk."
Usage or the flexibilities of grammar. time. Much of what I tell them I have "Chalk?"
How would the Corps write it? Corps', learned by osmosis from those O.K. "Chalk."
said the Corps. Never Corps's. Never the O.K'ers at The New Yorker, not to men- That did it. That seemed to be one
geminal "s"s. tion a range of others, from Miss Bar- more syllable than anyone wished to
Copy editors seldom stray into the tholomew, of Princeton Junior High pursue.
realms ofothers, but when they do, their SchooL to Carmen Gomezplata, ofFar- But when the question comes in a
suggestions and comments are not un- rar, Straus & Giroux. The students, note from one of your own daughters it
welcome. Mary Norris, who joined The picking up the parlance, sometimes go is wise not to wax monosyllabic. Jenny,
New Yorker in 1978 and has worked on offand copy-edit their roommates. This for example, was an assistant editor at
untold numbers of my pieces, is a verbal has led to disputes, and I have been Alfred A. Knopf when she innocently
diagnostician I would tum to for a first, asked what I was working on, and got
second, or third opinion on just about • this reply:
anything. She doesn't mind when "Dear Jenny: What am I working
friends call her the Pencil Lady. In on? How is it going? Since you asked, at
2003, we were closing the piece that re- • this point I have no confidence in this
traced the journey made in 1839 by piece of writing. It tries a number of
Henry David Thoreau and his brother, things I probably shouldn't be trying. It
John, down the Concord River to the tries to use the present tense for the im-
Merrimack and up the Merrimack asked to setde the disputes. My name mediacy that the present tense develops,
through and beyond Manchester, New isn't Strunk. I'm just another editee. but without allowing any verb tense to
Hampshire. In manuscript and in the But I do what I can, as, for example, become befouled in a double orientation
initial galley proofS, there was a sentence after two such people recently got into a of time. It tells its story inside out. Like
(odd out of context) that said: squabble over-imagine this-the pos- the ship fm writing about, it may have
sessive plural of" attorney general." The a crack in its hull. And I've barely
In bed at night for three or four months
I'd been listening to Manchester laughing-a question came to me in an e-mail: "If started. Mter four months and nine
chorus of Manchesterians sitting on those more than one attorney general possess days of staring into this monitor for
steps convulsed by us on the way uphill with a number of cars, how would you fill in what has probably amounted in aggre-
our canoe.
the blanks (if at all) in the following sen- gate to something closely approaching
Mary Norris wrote on the proof, tence: 'the attorney[ ] general[ ] car[ ] a thousand hours, that's enough. I'm
"Would you like 'Mancunians'?" were all parked next to one another'?" going fishing."+
38 THE NEW 'YDI\Kflt, API\IL 29, 200
THE NEW YORKER
APNL 29, 2013
THE CI\ITICS
George Packer 70 A CRITIC AT LAR.GE
Depression literature, old and new.
76 BOOKS
Briefly Noted
Alex Ross 78 MUSICAL EVENTS
Women composers.
Hilton Als 80 THE THEATRE
"The Nance," "Matilda. "
Anthony Lane 82 THE CUI\1\ENT CINEMA
"Oblivion," '1n the House. "
POEMS
Simon Armitage 36 "Beach Wedding"
Lia Purpura 60 "Beginning"