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    The document provides feedback on a written work. It notes that the structure and introduction were good but could be improved. The main area needing work is the explanation and repetition. The explanation could be more impressive with better content. Repetition of lines should be improved. Arguments could be explained with more points and clear examples should be added. The conclusion was average and could be improved. Overall, adding more facts and concepts along with better paragraph interlinking would make the answer more attractive. The remarks were that the work was average and the writer should keep practicing and learning.

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    The document provides feedback on a written work. It notes that the structure and introduction were good but could be improved. The main area needing work is the explanation and repetition. The explanation could be more impressive with better content. Repetition of lines should be improved. Arguments could be explained with more points and clear examples should be added. The conclusion was average and could be improved. Overall, adding more facts and concepts along with better paragraph interlinking would make the answer more attractive. The remarks were that the work was average and the writer should keep practicing and learning.

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    24 views3 pages

    Tum Sale Gandu Ho

    Uploaded by

    Sabyasachi Ghosh
    The document provides feedback on a written work. It notes that the structure and introduction were good but could be improved. The main area needing work is the explanation and repetition. The explanation could be more impressive with better content. Repetition of lines should be improved. Arguments could be explained with more points and clear examples should be added. The conclusion was average and could be improved. Overall, adding more facts and concepts along with better paragraph interlinking would make the answer more attractive. The remarks were that the work was average and the writer should keep practicing and learning.

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    of 3

    Structure- Good

    Introduction- good,but not up to the mark.


    - main part u need to work on is explanation and
    repetition.

    Explanation could be more impressive and u can


    make a better content.

    Repetition of lines should be improved.

    Arguments can be explained with few more points.

    You should add more clear example LIKE-APJ


    KALAM,B.R . AMBEDKAR ETC.

    Conclusion- so so you should improvised this.

    Overall answer is not that much attractive and the


    combination of facts + concept is required to make
    ur answer attractive.

    Work on interlinking of paragraphs.

    Remarks -average

    Keep writing & keep learning

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