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    This document provides feedback on improving the structure and content of an essay. The reviewer notes that the introduction could be more focused and specific. They suggest using real-world examples and anecdotes to support points and make the writing more engaging for readers. Proper formatting like underlining key terms is also recommended. While the essay showed effort with quotes and examples, greater clarity, diversity of ideas, and concise writing could strengthen the overall work. The reviewer encourages the student to keep practicing.

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    This document provides feedback on improving the structure and content of an essay. The reviewer notes that the introduction could be more focused and specific. They suggest using real-world examples and anecdotes to support points and make the writing more engaging for readers. Proper formatting like underlining key terms is also recommended. While the essay showed effort with quotes and examples, greater clarity, diversity of ideas, and concise writing could strengthen the overall work. The reviewer encourages the student to keep practicing.

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    Wjefkaria: Tried

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    Sabyasachi Ghosh
    This document provides feedback on improving the structure and content of an essay. The reviewer notes that the introduction could be more focused and specific. They suggest using real-world examples and anecdotes to support points and make the writing more engaging for readers. Proper formatting like underlining key terms is also recommended. While the essay showed effort with quotes and examples, greater clarity, diversity of ideas, and concise writing could strengthen the overall work. The reviewer encourages the student to keep practicing.

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