Good that

you have
provided a
proper
definition of
SHG in the
introduction
part.

Avoid end-to-end line.It

weakens your
presentation and break
the fluency of your
Good that you content.Instead, you can
provided a of SHGs
present your content
suitable flow after a relevant heading
chart. and box'ing the heading.
You could club
point 3 and 4 as it
is kind of repeating
the same content.

Good and relevant

points.You can
strengthen your points
by giving some
examples/case studies
t

Just listing
points is not
considered as
a good
answer.You
should explain
at least 2-3
points in brief.

Decent conclusion.
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Overall Macro Comments (Feedback)

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1. You have addressed the 1. You can improve

demand of the question. you introduction by
providing relevant
2. Provided relevant content. facts/data etc in it.
2. You should
3. Written a fair and decent
strengthen your
Introduction and Conclusion. arguments/points by
incorporating relevant
examples/case
studies.Examiner will
understand that you
have a sound
understanding of the
topic.

3. You shouldn't just

list the points. You
need to explain some
points (atleast 2-3
points per heading).

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EVALUATION PARAMETERS
Very Good Good Average Substandard

1. Clarity of Thought

2. Context

3. Understanding on the demand of the Q

4. Introduction and Conclusion

Relevance

5. Content/Body relevance

6. Conceptual Clarity

7. Dimensionality and Interdisciplinary

Linkages

8. Examples and Illustrations

9. Presentation

10. Flow and the Structure

11. Language Competence

12. Objectivity

Overall a good attempt.

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