Try to write a more

contexual
introduction
including
keywords like
QUAD(recent
initiatives)

you could have

drawn a map

instead of policy you can

also write about
india-china's current security
status i.e. why India needed
to contain china
good diverse
points

you have not

written about
east asia
(japan)
good
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overall good attempt Try to form subheadings from the
question itself

Cater to the demand of the question

by breaking it into subparts

in the question of IR, try to incorporate

a map/schematic. e.g. a map of india
together with pacific ocean and its
littoral countries can be drawn showing
various interests

keep writing...

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Relevance

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6. Conceptual Clarity

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10. Flow and the Structure

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