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TAKE PHOTO UNDER PROPER LIGHT. DON'T POST DARK OR DULL PAGES.

No need
to write Don't write
about PM intro on any
or any person's
Minister. statement.
Write
standard
introduction.

Map is
incorrect.
China ,
Mongolia
regions are
missing.

Do practice
of Map

Question is
Don't write on India,
statements not on
of any Indian PM.
person Stick to the
question.
TAKE PHOTO UNDER PROPER LIGHT. DON'T POST DARK OR DULL PAGES.

Consolidate
these points.
These points
are not
needed in
such a great
detail.

India pledged
TAKE PHOTO UNDER PROPER LIGHT. DON'T POST DARK OR DULL PAGES.

All these
points are
correctly
explained

Add
scientific
study on
climate
change;
Tourism,
etc. points

Valid
points

Conclusion
is balanced
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SUNYA 1AS (PAPER Il) -
GS II1-
Overall Macro Comments (Feedback)
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- Introduction needs to be on - Read the question twice
India not on India's PM. before attempting.
- Introduction- As per 2019 MOU
agreement India-Russia agreed - Avoid writing any politicians
to prepare a programme for the statement/ views in the
development of the Russian Far answer.
East and Arctic region for
2020–25. - Write points which are
related to the question. Stick
to the question.
- Mention prospects for India in
Russia’s Far East (RFE) Region - Refer notes, standard book
in terms of - explore and internet for more
hydrocarbon; Northern Sea information.
Route (NSR), which runs along
the Russian coast; sparsely - Mention challenges and Way
populated Russian Arctic can forward points as well.
become destination for
Immigration and employment; - Take photo under white light.
scientific study on climate Do not post dark or dull
change; Tourism, etc. pages.

- Add Challenges in cooperation - Keep the size of answer file


such as -Limited resources , less than 5 MB.
Western nations sanctions on
Russia; Technical and financial All The Best
viability; Increased Chinese
investment.
- Write Way forward as well.
- Conclusion is balanced.

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SUNYAs (PAPER-I) GS -
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EVALUATION PARAMETERS
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1. Carty of Thought

2. Context

3. Understanding on the demand of the Q

Introduction and Concdusion


Relevance
5. Content/Body relevance

6. Conceptual Clarity

7. Dimensionality and Interdisciplinary


Linkages
8. Examples and Ilustrations

9. Presentation

10. Flow and the Structure

11.Language Competence
12.0bjectivity

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