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↓ Good introduction. In IRQ. 1.

Nothing much to say
the context of introduction is here.

·important 2. keep working on the skills.

2. Demand of a. is well addressed. you have

great potential.
is scope for
But still there

improvement

3. content competence is good.

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4. Structure & How good.

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EVALUATION PARAMETERS
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1. Clarity of Thought w

2. Context v

3. Understanding on the demand of the Q v

4. Introduction and Conclusion

v
Relevance

5. Content/Body relevance v

6. Conceptual Clarity -

7. Dimensionality and Interdisciplinary

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Linkages

8. Examples and Illustrations -

9. Presentation -

10. Flow and the Structure -

11. Language Competence -

12. Objectivity ~

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