Writing 1:

Dear Snooky,
I hope you are well. I think you should change your appearance .for example : You had
better change your cutting style moreover You ought to change your style besides You
should wear jeans,but they shouldn´t be ripped or baggy because in my opinion they are
ugly .You could wear blue shirt or the black one moreover You had betteer change
your shoes because they are very frightening besides
you shouldn't have black glasses because it doesn't give confidence my last advice is
you should have more confident in yourself.
Eduardo Ramirez Infantes