Course Code & Title

ENG 1207- Intensive English II

Section: C

Submitted to
Saima Akter
Lecturer
Dept. of English Literature
United International University

Submitted by
Hasibul Hasan Nirob
ID: 011201031
Computer Science and Engineering
United International University
Date:20.09.2020
 First Draft
Title: Frustration
Type of Paragraph: Descriptive
Paragraph Outline:
1. What is frustration?
2. Is frustration a disease?
3. When a person got frustrated?
4. Which types of people are affected with it?
5. What is the result of frustrated people?
Frustration means hopelessness. It is also called a mental disease. A person
frustrated when he/she does not get what he/she wants. It is mostly seen in young
boys and girls. There are different types of frustrated people. Frustration may be of
political, domestic, judicial and social. When a political leader fails to win the
election, he may be frustrated. In our country, there are many men and women who
are qualified but they can’t get a job. So, they are going to be frustrated. Judicial
frustration is also found in our legal world. Some young boys and girls are getting
frustrated when they fail to make love affairs. The effect of frustration is really
horrible and shocking. Frustrated people are found committing suicide.
 Second Draft (Peer Reviewed)
Title: Frustration
Type of Paragraph: Descriptive
Paragraph Outline:
1. What is frustration?
2. Is frustration a disease?
3. When a person gets frustrated?
4. Who are affected by it?
5. What is the result of frustrated people?
Frustration means hopelessness. It is also called a mental disease. A person gets
frustrated when they do not get what they want. It is mostly seen in young boys
and girls. There are different types of frustrated people. Frustration may be of
political, domestic, judicial and social. When a political leader fails to win the
election, he might get frustrated. In our country, there are many men and women
who are qualified but they can’t get a job. So, become frustrated. Judicial
frustration is also found in our legal world. Young people are getting frustrated
when they fail to make love affairs. The effects of frustration are really horrible
and shocking. Frustrated people often end up committing suicide.
 Final Edited Version
Frustration refers to the state of being hopeless. A person gets frustrated when
they do not get what they want. It is mostly seen in young boys and girls.
Frustration effects people in different ways” because it complements the
following sentence in a better way. Frustration may be of political, domestic,
judicial and social. When a political leader fails to win the election, he might
frustrate. In our country, there are many people who are qualified but they can’t
get a job. So, they become frustrated. Judicial frustration is also found in our legal
world. Some young boys and girls are getting frustrated when they fail to make
love affairs. The effects of frustration are really horrible and shocking. Frustrated
people often end up committing suicide.
 Self-Evaluation
I learn a lot of things after I complete my editing. It reflects many things. So, the
process of editing is reflective for me. My peer suggested many things in my
paragraph. It is really useful for me. I improved some skills. It will help me in the
future to be a great writer. Now I can edit some one’s writing. I also try it. So, I
can feel the changes in mine. Basically, I have no such plan. But I will try to edit
the writing of those people who write everyday different types of blogs. Yes, I
think that this skill will help me in the future for my writing. I already saw some of
my improvements. Furthermore, I will practice editing more and more for my
betterment.