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Some people say music promotes children learning.

However, there are


mixed results on impact of music generated from researches. To what
extent do you agree or disagree that: music has impacts on humans' life?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in


THE NUMBER OF academicS believing that music enhanceS children learning.
There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to A myriad of concerns in
one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this
essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most
preponderant one is that (music enhanced children learning ) WRITE A WORD
NOT A SENTENCE can not only contribute to calming their mind and
improving the thinking ability, but also lead to numerous other benefits in
various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can
one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance
the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and
convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far
as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another, pivotal aspect of the aforementioned preposition is that it is only
likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one
follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such
essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is
apparent why many are in favour of INTRODUCING MUSIC INTO SCHOOL CUR.
// music improve children learning.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefit
of // INCORPORATING MUSIC INTO SCHOOL CUR is indeed too great to ignore.
Ana Katrina Lim
Agree/ Disagree
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in
(the number of people/ academics believing that/ Doing 5th/ Noun phrase).
There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of concerns in
one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this
essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most
preponderant one is that Topic can not only contribute to 5th/ Doing sth, but
also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide
range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to
being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their
lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these
merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of
prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another, pivotal aspect of the aforementioned preposition is that it is only
likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one
follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such
essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is
apparent why many are in favour of topic.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefit of
topic are indeed too great to ignore.

Some people think students should attend all classes they enrolled in, but
other people believe that students can choose to attend the classes or not.
Give your own opinion.

One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in


the number of people believe that attend to classes is an ongoing debate.
There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in
one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this
essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most
preponderant one is that attend to classes can not only contribute to improve
their academic practice, but also lead to numerous other benefits in various
fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one
benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the
productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease efficacy and
convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand in one good stead, as far
as augmenting their chance of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
There are, however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential
benefits of attend to classes The primary one stems from the fact that by
observing the aforementioned trend, people have not only realised its gravity,
but also gauged the magnitude of its repercussions when it comes to today’s
ever-changing life style. Besides, its impact on Sth is far – reaching indeed.
Hence, it is apparent why many are against Topic (Noun phrase – early
marriage/ ING- getting married at an early age).
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some
drawbacks the benefits of Topic (Noun phrase – early marriage/ ING- getting
married at an early age) are indeed too great to ignore.

Both sided
One of the most conspicuous trends of todays world is a colossal upsurge in
(the no of people/ academic believing that/ doing Sth/ noun phrase). There is
a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life.
However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most
preponderant one is that Topic (Noun phrase – early marriage/ ING- getting
married at an early age) can not only contribute to Sth/ doing sth, but also
lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of
advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being
effective, but they can also enhanced the productivity and quality of their lives,
with much ease efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits
stand in one good stead, as far as augmenting their chance of prosperity and
excellence is concerned.
There are, however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential
benefits of Topic (Noun phrase – early marriage/ ING- getting married at an
early age). The primary one stems from the fact that by observing the
aforementioned trend, people have not only realised its gravity, but also
gauged the magnitude of its repercussions when it comes to today’s ever-
changing life style. Besides, its impact on Sth is far – reaching indeed. Hence, it
is apparent why many are against Topic (Noun phrase – early marriage/ ING-
getting married at an early age).
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some
drawbacks the benefits of Topic (Noun phrase – early marriage/ ING- getting
married at an early age) are indeed too great to ignore.

Problems/ Solution
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in
Topic(A) all over the world. There are a wide range of factors that account for
why this is happening. In my opinion, this problem can be remedied provided
that some effective measures are taken.
There are a myriad of (reasons accountable for)/ (consequences associated
with) this soaring concern. Unlike everyday problems, which can be dealt with
easily, Topic (B), which is extremely perilous can lead to an array of such issues
as (C) and (D). Thanks to the aforementioned predicaments, it is not only
people but also society which can suffer immensely.
Steps to deal with this problem are many, but the most effective ones are in
fact not remote or complicated but accessible and practicable. The primary
one stems from the fact that by ensuring the implementation of set rules and
policies, government authorities can help a nation thrive. Besides,
international organisations and local authorities should take the necessary
initiatives cumulatively. Only when convergent efforts from all sectors, can we
expect to see some considerable progress in curbing the issue.
To conclude, dealing with TOPIC (E) is one of the most prevalent problems that
faces almost all parts of the world today. Nevertheless, the concreate steps as
discussed above can effectively strengthen the fight against and alleviate this
growing concern. Its potential impact is indeed too dire to ignore.

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