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Arquivo Writing PDF
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ft Of irfeg U Ve f bS (=+ unit 24)
ínjnitíue past simple / past partidple ínjnitive past simple / past partîcíple
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COMPOUND NOUNS
LOOK AT THESE EXAMPLES:
FOOD PRODUCTION = the production of food
WORLD HEALTH ORGANIZATION = the organization concerned with the health of the
world.
DISEASE CONTROL = the control of diseases
X.RAY DIFFRACTION CRYSTAL STRUCTURE ANALYSIS = the analysis of the
structure of crystals by means of the diffraction of X-rays.
A 24-HOUR ESSAY = an essay that lasts/takes24 hours
EXERcISES
I. FOLLOWING THE SAME PRINCLIPLES, FORM COMPOUND NOUNS FROM EACH OF THE
FOLLOWING PHRASES:
1. A theory about the waves of earthquakes.
3. Wind power has been utilized by some of the latest plants for the supplv of electric
power.
4. Gas is one of the byproducts of the industrv concerned with the refininq of oil.
5. Several countries are carrying out plans in the field of economics which are to be
accomplished in five vears,
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TO BE KEPT IN MIND
No book (method), regardless of how good it is, can turn you into an excellent
writer. You have to write, and keep writing.
The most important step is to realize that writing is hard not only for you but for
everyone, that it takes much more time than you want to devote to it, and that the
results are never pefect. With these assumptions understood, you can stop feeling
frustrated and disappointed in yourself and instead put your energies into creating
a document that gets the job done.
In prose, the good style is the lean style. Like a good distance runner, it has not
an ounce of fat anywhere on it. And like the good distance runner, it moves without
excess motion. Its arms do not flail out in all directions; they swing easily at the
sides in a beautiful economy of effoft. A good style has the same grace and beauty
in its motion as a good athlete because there is nothing wasted. Everything is there
for a purpose.
POSSIBLE STEPS
. brainstorming
. talking
. free writing
. sketching information
. clustering
. branching
.organizing information
1. chronologically/ spatially
2. from more general to more specific information
3. from the most important to the less important
4. problem - method - solution
5. cause - effect
. draft - revision
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WRITING
USEFUL TIPS
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Join eoch of the groups of three senlences into q single, long one, using the
given conjunction; you con olso use and, but or which, but only once in eoch long
senÌence. You ore expected to form one porogroph consisting of five long
sentences. Remember to eliminote everything thot is redundqnt ond to moke
the necessory olterqtions.
ft wos roining. olthough
I d¡d not hove o rqincoot.
f had to go out
f ron to the nea?esÌ bus stop. while
f wqs running ocross the rood.
A large cor sploshed me from head to foot.
T reached my friend's house. until
f wos wet through.
f could not chonge my clothes.
Fortunotely, my friend wos qble to lend me some dry lest/otherwise
clothes.
They fitted me very well.
f should cotch o cold.
ft wqs time to leave. when
My own clothes were dry.
f chonged into them.
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7.88 Connecting adverbs [> LEG 7 sB, App 1B]
Study: we can connect ideas in speech or writing using adverbs like these:
*Ít - (= I'm adding somelhing): in addition, again, apart from this, besides, moreover.
- (= l'm comparíng/contrasting): as compared to, equally, however, ín reality.
- (= l'm summarizing): a// in all, and so on, essentially, in brief, in conclusion, in effect.
Write: Mark the 'connecting ideas' (a-h) that are expressed in this text.
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Accordingto ('..&..) a lot of people I know, there are few things more
terrifying than having to speak in public. The only way to succeed is a lam introducing a list
to follow strict rules. First of all, (2......) you should be well-prepared. b lam making an addition
Second, (t......) you should have a few jokes ready. As wett as that, c lam pointing to a contrast
(t......) you should have rehearsed your speech, preferably in front of d I am stating an alternative
a mirror. ln comparison with (u......) being hit by a bus, public e I am summarizíng
speaking isn't too bad, but it's bad enough. However, (u......) you t lam making a second Point
can make things easier for yourself by being ready. Alternatively, g lam making a comParison
(t......) you can do nothing and make a fool of yoursell. To sum up, h As stated bY
(t-.....) success depends entirely on you.
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A TMPORTÂilCIA DA PONTUAçÃO
Escreveu assim:
"Deixo meus bens à minha irmã não a meu sobrinho jamais será paga a
conta do padeiro nada dou aos pobres."
Assim é a vida.
Nós é que colocarRos os pontos.
E isso îaza dÍferença.
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PUNCTUATION PRACTICE
LASERS
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LINKERS
1. ADDITION
The fur coat was soft and warm.
The car was both new and in good condition.
Not onlv lS sh-epretty; sfre ¡s ãlso clever.
She is not onlv pretty but clever, too/ as well.
The car was almost new;
additionallv/ also. it was in excellent condition.
2. CONTRAST
The coat was thin but warm./ The coat was thin; vet, it was warm.
The car was quite old; yeU still/ however/ nevertheless, it was in excellent condition
ln soite of/ Desoite/ Notwithstandino its age, the car was in excellent condition. (ln spite
of/ Despite/ Notwithstanding + noun lthey cannof be used with subject + verbl)
The car was quite old; despite/in spite of/notwithstandinq that, it ran smoothly/glespþþ
spite oflnotwithstandinq the fact that it ran smoothly. (You have to use thaî/ the focf
thaf if you want to use subject and verb after these linkers).
Albeit thin, the coat was quite warm. (Albeit + adjective)
Even thouqh/ Althouqh the coat was thin, it was quite warm/ The coat was thin; it was
warm, thouqh. (Even though/Although require a verb and a subject after them).
He is clever; onlv he cannot be trusted.
He was going to buy a car, but bought a bicycle, instead.
Bryson decided to quit rather than accept the new rules/ instead of accepting the rules.
On the one hand, sugar gives you energy. On the other hand/ Conversely, it can be
harmful.
A Ferrari is very expensive, whereas a bicycle is quite accessible. A Ferrari is very
expensive; in turn, a bicycle is quite accessible.
3. ALTERNATIVE
You must either work harder, or go into another class.
You should stick to the rules or else leave.
You must eat fibers, otherwise you will have intestine problems
4. CONSEQUENCE
The rain began to fall; [sol/ therefore/ accordinqly/ thus/ hence/ consequently/ as a
consequence. we had to go home.
5. COMPARISON
He is older than I am.
She speaks as fast as she thinks.
6. . EXCLUSION
All of them but / except for me had been there before
Neither your answer nor mine is correct.
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7. CONDITTON
I will tell you if you promise to keep it a secret.
We do not know whether they are coming (or not).
Unless you take an umbrella, you will be wet.
He can come with us, provided (that)/ as lono as he pays for his own meals
ln case you cannot find the book, ask the librarian to help you.
8. TIME
He carne before we could tell him not to.
He has lived here since last month.
She has studied English for a long time.
They left after the prizes were announced.
lwill be here till/ untilyou come back.
They will tell you when they get news from her.
Tim slept while he was reading.
They met durinq a conference in ltaly.
We saw Jane as she was sitting at a café.
9. PURPOSE
She saved so that she could travel.
We read the news to / so as to / in order to be well informed
10. CAUSE
She went to bed because/ since/ as/ seei e was tired
She was fined due to/ because of/ owing to overs peeding
11. MANNER
Henry did the work as it had to be done.
He ran as ifl as thouqh his life depended on it.
12. PLACE
Stay where you are.
The dog goes wherever he goes.
13. CONCESSTON
He did very well even if he did not get a prize.
However hard he tries, he cannot learn. (however+ adverb = näo importa quanto)
14. DEGREE
He was so tired that he could not speak. (so + adjective)
It was such a hot day that everybody wore shorts. (such requires a noun and an article
[a/an] if it countable and singular).
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SELECT THE BEST LINKER
14. I will not give you any sweets . ... you eat your lunch.
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Finally, notice that öe + said * tohas a second meaning:
I.F.A.O. meertng.
in the number of
because of the great the body ored
mcnease ,*ar;.rfT'"ü"d onre of it
¡ Exercise 15 Rewrite this paragraph, compreting for instan run
underneath.
it by using the verbs a clock.
Each verb shouìd ofuV UË used once.
Thatis only used in defining clauses. lt is regularly used to refer to both things and people. lt cannot
be omitted when it is a subject pronoun (when it comes immediately before a verb):
I want to speak to the girl fhaf wrote this letter.
The book fhat is lying on the table is mine.
Thatis regularly preferred as an object pronoun to which and who(m), if it is expressed at all
The man (thaV who) I met yesterday is your neighbor.
The book (thaV which) I am reading is a science fiction one.
Ifiaf cannot be used after a preposition. But if the preposition is placed at the end of the clause, its
use is normal.
That is the book about which I was speaking.
That is the girl about whom I was speaking.
That is the book/ girl (ffaf) I was talking about.
Use fáaf after: only, f ew,little, none, oll, some, ony (and their compounds) ond superlotives.
I will lend you the few (thatl I still have.
You may keep any (fhaf) you find.
ls that the öesf (fhaf) you can do?
ff. Removø therelative pronouns from the exercise obove whenever possible.
The relative pronoun cannot be omitted when it comes after a preposition, after a comma, or when
it is the subject of the verb coming immediately after it (there is nothing between it and the verb).
'ln case you are referring to a place, use where; in case you are not, use in/at which. Whose is preferred for
people; therefore, "....work, the results of which....."/ "...a method, the description of which..."
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word order (1) - verb + object; place and time
Verb + obiect
ilhe uerb and the obiect of the verb normally go together. ve do not usuallv put.other words
between them:
ùerb + obiect
I like children very much. (not 'I like very much children')
Did you see your friends yesterday?
Ann often plays tennis.
Study these exåmples. Notice how the verb and the object go
together each time:
o Do you clean the house every weekend? (not'Do you clean every weekend the
house?r)
o Everybody *fYetrlhe party very much. (not 'Everybody enjoyed very much
the party,)
our guide spoke English fluently. (not'...spoke fluently Englishr)
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o I not only lost all my money - I port. (not'I lost also my passport,)
:r:.. "rq1qd;;r
f_____:_:________ì
o At the end of the street you'll see a supermarket on your left. (not '...see on your left a
supermarketl),, ' ,
Time (when? / how often? / how long?) normally goes after place:
place + time
Tom walks .to work every morning. (not'Tom walks every morning to work')
She has been 'in Canáda since April,
'SØe
arrived dt the airport early.
study thesb examples. Notice how tirnegoes after pracez
o I'm going to Paris on Monday. (not,I'ingoing on Monday to paris'
o They have lived in the same house for a long time.
o Don't be late. Make sure you're here by I o'clock.
o Sarah gave me a lift home after the party.
o You really shouldn,t go ro fi *j"r".
It is often possible ro put time at the beginning of rhe sentence:
o On Monday I,m going to paris.
:-
.o Every morning Tom walks to work.
some time words (f9r example, always lnever/olten)
usually go with the verb in the middle of the
sentence. See Unit L09.
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word order in questions - [MMIîEff¡ Adjective order -* ¡ñilfl word or(ter t2ì --+ lîiftrirt
EXERCISES
Is the utord order right or.wrong? Correct the ones that are wrong.
1 Everybody enjoyed the parry very much. ...,ß!.9.Hf..
2 Tom walks'every morninþ to work ...!fYßgNg¡. þp.:ttp.¡k.w.ç.t'y..mp..rn.l.ng
3 Jim doesn't like very much foot'ball.
4 I drink tb¡ee or four cups of c.gffee every morrung.
5 I ate quickly my dinner and went out.
6 Are you going to invite t'o rhe PaÉt' a lot of people? ......
7 I phoned Tom immediately after hearing the news......
I Did you go late to bed last night ?
9 Sue was here five minutes ago.'Where is she now?
10 Did you learn a lot of things at school today?
L1 I met on my way home a friend of mine..........
L2 I fell yesterday off my bicycle......
They...h.au.ç.l,.up.d.in.,the.ea.me.he.we.f er,.e.!e.nø..tlt:ne,...
2 (to the bank / every FÅday I go) I...
3 (home / did you come / so late) Why r....r........a..............r..................
4 (her car / diives / every da'¡ lto work) Ann
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Tables and graPhs
Unit 11 Tables and graphs of differcnt groups. In the case of Table I the written work should be
uæd to poini oui the differences between the amounts of the
various
g*Ã-Vär will hnd several useful ways of doing this in the following
exercise.
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( Tabtes and graphs without a t¡me reference
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FJ. [-ook at this table: Now studY this table:
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Table I Table 2
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The composition of air (% volume)
Compæition (by weight) of the earth's crust
The written explanation strould never merely list the items contained
in the table. A long series of items strould be divided into a small number
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Tables with a single time reference
Tables with a single time reference describe information given for a
o Exercise 2 Th,e following sentences are in the wrong order. write out certain moment of time. The point of time is usually in the past. This
an explanation of rable 2 by putting the sentences
¡nto ttre right order. means that the Past tense is usually the na¡rative tense.
I Next come four elements which are found in percentages varying
ftom2'2 to 3.5 per cent. Table 8
2 Two erements-oxygen and silicon-provide
nearþ 75 per cent of the Major copper producers (1960)
weight of the earth's crust.
3 The¡emaining g5 erements only add up just
total.
to over l per cent of the USA approx. 1,050,0ü) tons
4 Just over half of the rcmaining 25 per
Zambia ,, 600,000 ,,
cent is provided by the two Chile ,, 550,000 ,,
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metallic elements.
In fact, only eight erements have a distribution ussR ,, 500,000 ,,
cent ofthe total.
which exceeds l per Canada ,, 350,000 ,,
6 Moreover, the differences between these eigþt
Congo ,, 300,000 ,,
considerable.
elements afe very Peru ,, 120,000 ,,
7 The hundred or so elements Australia ,, 100,000 ,,
proportions in the earth's crust.
so far identified exist in widely varying Japan ,, 90,000 ,,
Mexico ,, 70,0(Xl ,,
(Total world production ('60) estimated at 4,200,(X)0 tons)
^ Exercise 3 DescrÍbe. the melting points of re.metals risted in Table 3.
(Notice how unhelpful the alphaËiicafããer
is.)
Table 3
Melting points (cenhigrade) of certain
metals
Aluminium 660 o Exercise 6 Complete lllis explanation of Table 8. Each gaP rePresents
Copper t083 one word (or one number).
Iron I 535 In 1960 the ten leading copper- .... countries produced nearly ....%
l¡ad 327 of the world total. The .... producer was the USA, one- .... of world
Platinum t773 production coming from this sourse. In fact, the USA was the ..'.
Tin 232 country to produce more than . .... other countries each
Tungsten 33?0 produced half a million tons or more; in decreasing order they werc '...
Chile and .... . This group was followed by ..-. countries, Canada and the
You may be able to make use of these kinds Congo, producing .... and .... tons respectively. Finally, therc .... a gfouP
of statement:
of smaller producen, led by .... and ..... . It is worth noting that ..'.
The melting points of metatr rorv
t greatly. I deposits are distributed relatively evenly .... the world because they
occur in .... quantities in all continents excePt .... .
x tu s ø
{r"ii"^ r) t rul
::,:,:;';" The narrative tense is the Past tense. ll'hy then is the last sentence in
the Present simple?
" {'i!.i:;'"'
x metts,,
I much
\t* I t,;:::l tumpem*re thøn y.
World production of certain Linking øs-clauses which do not contain modals can be reduced. Here
netals (1961) is the formula:
lron 190 million tons
Aluminium 30 million tons øs + be * verb-ed as + verb-ed
Copper 4.4 million tons As lus been stated As stated
Zinc 3 million tons As høsbeen prcved As prarcd
l¿ad 2.5 million tons
Tin 0.3 million tons
As ¡b shown ínFïg.l As shown in Fig I
Mercury 0'09 million tons
a Exercie 9 complete ten of these sentences. The fint one has been
done.
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Word order (2) - adverbs with the verb
Some adverbs (for example, always, also, probably) go with the verb in the middle of a senrence:
o Tom always goes to work by car.
o We were feeling very tired and we \¡¡ere also hungry,
o Your car has probably been stolen.
Study these rules for the position of adverbs in the middle of a senrence. (They are only general
rules, so there are exceptions.)
i) If the verb is one word (goes/felUcooked etc.), the adverb usually goes befor¿ rhe verb:
aduerb uerb
Tom always; goes to work by car.
I almost fell as I was going down the stairs.
o
I cleaned the house and also cooked the dinner. (not 'cooked also')
o
Lucy hardly ever watches television and rarely reads newspapers.
Note that these adverbs (always/often/also erc.) go before have to:
o We always have to wait a long time forihe bus. (not 'we have always to wait')
ii) But adverbs go øfter amlislarelwas/were:
o 'We were feeling very tired and we \Mere also hungry.
. ¡Øhy are you always late? You're never on time.
o The traÍfic isn't usually as bad as ir was this morning.
iii) If the verb is fwo or more words (can remember / doesn't smoke / has been stolen etc.), the
adverb goes after the first uerb (canldoesn'lhas erc.):
uerb L aduerb uerb 2
I can never remember his narne.
Ann doesn't usually smoke.
Are you definitely going to the party tomorrow?
Your car has probably been stolen.
c My parents have always lived in London.
o Jack can't cook. He can't even boil an egg.
c The house was only built a year ago and it's already falling down.
Note that probably goes before the negative. So we say:
o I probably won't see you. or I will probably not see you. (but not'I\Mon't probably:..')
$Øe also use all and both in these positions:
o \Øe all felt ill after the meal. (not'we felt all ill,)
. My parents are both teachers. (not'my parents both are teachers')
. Sarah and Jane have both applied for the job.
o 'We are all going out this evening.
ìometimes we use is/wilUdid etc. instead of repeating part of a sentence (see Unit 504). Note the
losition of always/never etc. in these sentences:
. He always says he won't be late but he always is. (= he is always late)
o I've never done it and I never will. (= I will never do it)
Ve normally put always/never etc. before the verb in sentences like these. 21
IxEncr$Fs
Are the undeilined uords in the ight positioa or not? Correct the sentences..that øre wrong.
1 Tom goes always to work by car. ...!VßQN.Ø.Íen.a!w.ayç.gee.e.,.
2 I cleaned the house and also cooked the dinner. ...ßlglJf,...
3 I have usuall)¡ a shower when I get up.
4 \Vq soon found the solution ro the problem.............:,..
5 Steve getb hardl)¡ eyer angry. ...,......:................
6 I did some shopping and I wenr also to the bank. ......
7 Jane has always to hurry in the morning because she
8 We all were. tired so we all fell asleep.
9 She always says she-ll phone me but she never does. .........:..,............
8 Martin
is learning French. He is lèarning ltaliah. (
Ma¡tin is learning French. He ...
9 That hotel is very expensive. (probably).......... .. ..
10 It costs a lot to stay rhere. (probably) .........:.....
11 I can help you. (probably) ...
12 I can't help you. (probably)
Complete the sentences. (Jse the,uords in bracþ.ets in the correct order.
7 I ...çan.neu.et.remg.mÞer... her name. (remember./ never I canl
2' I sugar in coffee. (take / usually)
3 I hungry when I get home from work. (am /.usually) ,.
4 .Where's Jim?' 'He .......,... .....home earl)r.' (gone / has,/ probably) '
3. The governments has spent a lot of money improving roads around the country'
There has been a deterioration in the national road system'
4. The number of exam passes achieved by the school's pupils has risen by almost 50%
There has been a decline in the number of exam passes.
5. American travellers abroad have discovered that they can buy more foreign currency with their dollar.
There has been a weakening of the dollar.
6. lt is now much easier to import goods into the country than it was a few years ago
There has been a tightening up of border controls-
9. The pass rate for the exam was 3% lower this year than it was last year'
There has been a sharp fall in the pass rate.
10. The alliance are going to reduce the number of conventional weapons in their armed forces.
The alliance are going to build up the number of weapons they have.
'12. The rules are much stricter now than they were before'
There has been a relaxation of the rules.
13. Last year,12o/o of the population worked in industry and 10% worked in agriculture' This year,14o/o
of the population work in industry and 8% work in agriculture.
There has been a narrowing of the gap between those working in different sectors of the economy'
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14.,Some management roles in the company will not exist this time next year.
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Some management roles are going to be phased out.
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There has been an upward trend in the number of people shopping in small village shops.
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16. Her English is clearly better now than it was when she first arrived. -
There has been marked progrcss in her English.
17. People live in better houses, drive nicer cars and'eat higher-quality food than they did twenty
years ago.
18. Our company has opened factories in France, Germany and ltaly ín the last five years.
Our company has witnessed considerable expansíon in the last five years.
B. Check your answers, then use some of the words and expressions in bold above and in the
answer key to write some sentences about your country.
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Improving the Coherence of your Writing 49
Wrlte lnformatlve Tltles and Headlngs k.it sufficinttlyþrecisè?youwant to herp your reader understand
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where you are going in the text that follows.
Study: f Some adverbs like never and little have a 'negative etfect' and we sometimes refer to them as
m¡r¡ 'negative adverbs'. We can use them in the ordinary way 1r7.41:
I have nevet seen so much prolest against a government.
Michaelllttle ¡ealìzes how importantthis meeting is.
2 llwe begin a sentence with â 'negative adverb'we must follow with the word order we use in a
Yes/No question [> 13.1]. Beginning with a negative is very formal:
Never have I seen so much protest against a government.
Little does Mlchael realize how important this meeting is.
3 We use this kind of inversion, in forrnal style, after:
-'negative adverbs': e.g. hardly, hardly ever. never, rarely, seldom.
- phrases wilh onl¡n e.g. only after, only then, only when (Only then dld I learn ...).
- so + adjective: So ditflcult was this problem, Einstein couldn't solve it.
Write: Rewrite these sentences so that they begin with the words in italics.
I h by the workers.
..a.f.atr*ttçthr.,ty.,tht-,awtLøt.
2 I realized what had happened only latër.
7.8D Context
Wrlte: Put in the right verb form and these adverbsz acærding to, agreeably, however, in brief, moreoverol
ultimately.
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say ob8ero sugest
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cleirrr contend Go against something report
assert arlue
acconlingtoX
in the opinion ofX
as X eays
as reportedbyX
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IJ an essay, a verbal presentation or sometimes in everyday speech (also see page i - Condition
- and page 9 - Contrast & comparison).
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on
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o to briefly . along with . it can be concluded that
sum up o also
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= similarly o likewise . besides r to conclude .
cn too
in addition . in brief a in the same way . th us
what'smore.furthermore a moreover a
Along with
Also Along with To sum up/ In sum
Besides Similarly It can be concluded that
Too Likewise To conclude
In addition As well as In brief
Furthermore In the same way
Thus
Moreover Correspondingly
To summarize
As well as
Therefore
Again,
As a consequence
As a result
Consequently
I' The ozone layer is becoming depleted, the air in the cities is becoming too dirty
to breathe and our
seas and rivers are no longer safe to swim in. As a consequence
pollution is slowly
destroying the planet.
10. Your grades have been very poor Consequently
all years. you need to work really hard
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Reporting what others say
Reporting verbs
Reporting what others say is a key aspect of academic English and you need a range of verbs
to do this in an appropriate and varied way. Note the structures used with each verb.
In her latest article Morton explains how information technology is changing society.
Schmidt describes the process of language change.
Kon suggests that all poets are strongly influenced by their childhood. fsays indirectly or
tentatively]
Lee states that problems arose earlier than was previously thought. [says directly]
Uvarov claims/asserts/contends/maintains/declares that the causes of the revolution can be
traced back to the 18'h century. [says something is true directly and firml¡ often used when
others disagree]
Van Ek implies that other historians have misinterpreted the period. fsuggests indirectly]
Patel argues that governments should continue to fund spâce research. [use of this verb
suggests he gives reasons for his view]
Greenberg emphasises/highlights/stresses the importance of taking a libe¡al approach. [gives
particular importance to]
Levack observes/notes/comments/points out that there are contradictions in Day's
interpretation of the poem. [states but does not develop at length]
Kim demonstrates/shows how Bach's music draws considerably on earlier composers'work.
Gray proves there is a link between obesity and genes. [shows that something must be true]
In the book Dean mentions some new research in the field. ,[refers to briefly]
Mclntosh pinpoints the key features of the period in question. [focuses in on]
Yaz advances/puts forward/proposes a new theory. fused with idea, theor¡ hypothesis]
Davidson casts doubt on previous research in the field. [suggests it is inaccurate]
Gerhard questions previous interpretations of the play. [expresses doubts about]
Reporting nouns
Academic writing also frequently uses nouns rather than verbs to report others' ideas (see Unit
L). Notice the corresponding nouns for some verbs in A. Note how these nouns often head
long phrases (underlined below) which can be either the subject or the object of the verb.
Morton provides
Schmidt gives a description of the process of language change.
Kon's suggestion that poets are influenced by their childhood is uncontroversial.
Lee's statement that problems arose earlier than previously thought has been challenged.
IJvarov's
the l,8th century is worth considering in some depth.
Van Ek's has caused some
controversy. [suggests indirectly]
Patel's 1S Convlnclng.
\l According to is used when repórting othersl viewpoints rather than one's own. For
example, øccording to Greene ondWtllis... but ìn my opinion ... NOT eeea*nfte-me.
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Exercises
32.4 Thereisonemistakeineachofthesesentences.Findandcorrectit.
ng should be compulsory for all new students'
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Cogrnitive UWB-OFDI¡I: tushing Uhru-Widebond Beyond Its Limit vio
Opporfunist¡c Spectrt¡m Usoge
In a continuously expanding wireless worfd, the number of radio systems increases every
day and efücientspectrurn usage becomes a more signiftcant requirement Ultra-wideband
(UWB) and cognitive nadio are two exciting tectrnologies that offer new approeches to the
spectrum usage. The main objective of this paper is to shed the first light on the maniage
of these tvr¡g impor1ant approaches. The strength of orthogonal'frequency division
multiplexing (OFDM) based UWB in co-existing with licensed systerns is investþated. The
opportr.rnity concept is defined, and the requirements of the opportunistb spectrum usage
are o<plained. !t is proposed to take the UWB-OFDM from the cr¡nent underlay
implementation, ând evolve it to a combined underlay and opportunistic spectrum usage
tectrnology, leading to cognitive UWB-OFDM. This way, we aim at making UWB more
competitive in the wireþss market with extended range, higher capacity, better
performance, and a wide variety of applications-
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5 Quantity
write: suppry another, other, the next, the other, the others
and others.
It was last Friday, I think.
them greeted me and didn,t.
the time; ............. don't.
5 we spent the nisht in a smar virase and continu; ;;;il;;;rlii..
.................. day.
6 Bill and ' boy are ptaying in the yard. Jane ãnd ....-........ ..... girls are in the front room
7 There must be road that leads to the cit/ centre.
I There must be roads that lead to the city centre.
9 I can't let you have any of these plants, but you can have all ...............
Study Either and neither refer to two people, things, etc. only. .t
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5.7'Another', '(the) othe(s)', 'either', 'neither', 'each (one of)'
Study: 1 We can use of the/my, etc. atter any, some, another, each, either, neither, nonel> 5.2A1
E lnstead of:
Nelther líft is working.
We can say: Nelther of the lifts is working.
2 After either, neither and none, when the reference is plural, we can use a plural verb ln
everyday speech or a singular verb when we wish to sound 'correst' or formal:
Nelther of us is/are happy about this. None of my frlends has/have been invited.
Study We can say: Each oî these answers is riQht. Or:. Each one of these answers is right.
We can use of or one of aller any, another, each, either, and neither.
We must use a noun after every @very room) or we must use one of (every one of):
Every room is booked. Every (single) one oî the rooms is booked. (Nol'Every of)
5.7E Context
Write: Pulin one, eíther, others, other, the otherör some.
HALT!
The 1.....fu.... day the Prime Minister appointed a new Minister of Transport.
. ministers like to travel everywhere by car; . prefer to use
public transport. . of these means of transport is fine, but the new
minister is s................... of lhose who goes everywhere by bicycle. When he arrived
at the House of Commons yesterday, he was stopped by trrvo security guards.
6............,...... of thern was sure he had
seen him before. 'l know you, don't l?' asked
one of the guards. 'You're . of:these messengers, aren't you?' 'Well, no,
actually,' the minister replied. 'l'm 8................... of the ministers.' 'l knew you were
. or 10........,.......... I' the guard replied.
He goes
everywhere by bicycle
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Contrast & comparison o
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,l Complete these sentences with the most appropriate.word or expression'from A, B or C. -
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1. The two machines Differ considerably.'One has an electric motoç the other runs
on oil. o
aì
A. differ B. differentiate C. differential
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2 Contrast in weather between the north and the south of the country is very
d
The
noticeable.
tr
A. comparison B. çontrast
-,
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C. compare -
3. Many people cannot differentiate between lemon juice and lime juice
A. differ B. differentiate C. contrast
7. The management must not distriminate between mple and female applicants.
A. differ B, contrast C. distriminate
12. My friends and I enjoy doing many of the same things. ln that respect, we have a lot
In common
A. in similar B, in partícular C. in common
14. British and Australian people share the same language, but in other respects they are as different
as Chalk and cheese
A. cats and dogs B; dtalk and cheese C. salt and pepper
15. Britain's economy is largely based on its industry whereas a few hundred years
ago it was an agrarian country.
A. wherefore B. whereas C. whereby
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Key quantifying expressions
s are important in academic English as it is often necessary to
trends. You will find more useful language for talking about numbers
in Reference 2, which focuses on measurement.
The size of our surveg was relativelg small-scale. We sent out 2,S00 questionna¡res
in totalr. Although a couple2 of people did not respond, the bulk3 of those sent
questionnaires have completed them. The surveg shows that, as a wholea, the
population is becoming more aware of the importance of recAcling. 0nlg one ofs our
respondents said that he recgcled less than he used to.
I 2
in all two or three, a few 3 the majority a considered as a group rather than individually
s notice
how respondents is in the plutal; it is a common erïor io
of .. . (r esp ondents/ suru ey s/ conclusions,
-iit.
a singular noun aÍter one
etc.)
V Note the significant difference between few and a few and between little and a fittle.
Few [Not many] peopte enjoy X\ music.A few [Some] peopte enjoy it. We hod little [not
lr much] response to our suvey.We hod o little [some] response to our survey.ln other words,
few/little has a more negative tone than a few / a little.
22 AcodemicVocobulory in lJse
Exercises
7.1 Complete the sentences using the correct forms of the words in italics
l Ina number of cases, there was no reaction at all to the drug. surþrise
2 The analysis demanded an amount of computer time. exceed
1
J numbers of birds inhabit the lake during the winter. consider
4 The course requires a amount of prior knowledge of computeÍs. reason
5 The survey took a amount of research time and costs were high. substance
6 The two dams can hold in of two cubic kilometres of water. exceed
7 In , L2 areas of the Southern Indian Ocean are now closed to deep-sea
fishing. totdlity
8 Groups four people were considered too large for the experiment. exceed
9No than 2,000 new computer viruses are created every year. few
10 In a number of cases, surface damage was noticed. signify
7.2 The sentences below are typical of spoken English. Replace the underlined words to make
them sound more appropriate for a written assignment.
1 The bulk of our work is concerned with carbon emissions.
2 We have noticed that fewer and fewer students are joining the course.
3 Our team spent a fair amount of time getting funding for the research.
4 In a couple of cases, we could not find âny reason for the outbreak.
5 'We spent a great deal of time on the pro,ect.
6 As you repeat the experiment, use less and less water each time.
7.3 Read the text and answer the questions.
For some years have been using a powerFul new machine to recreate the
noq scientists
conditions that existed at the birth of the universe, The machine generates a massive number
of hot, dense, bursts of matter and energy, simulating what happened in the first few
microseconds of the beginning of the universe, After no more than ten microseconds, the
particles of matter joined together, like water freezing into ice, forming the origin of more or
less everything we see in the universe today.
1 SØhich expression explains how long scientists have been using this machine?
2 fØhich expression tells us how many bursts of matter and energy the machine generates?
'VØhich
3 time period does the machine simulate?
4 \Øhich expression states how long it was before the particles of matter joined together?
5 \7hich expression in the last sentence means aþþroxirnately?
7.4 Rewrite the paragraph using the opposites of the underlined words or expressions.
There have been a small numberof studies investigating the impactof email on interpersonal
communications. None of the studies has been large-scale but they suggest some interesting
trends in patterns of email use. From one of the older studies it seems that more and more
people send in excess of 50 emails daily. Moreover, it appears that a substantial number of senior
citizens use email a lot more frequently than younger people do.
Find five quantifying expressions from one of your textbooks and write your own sentences
fl using them.
AcodemicVocobulary in lJse 23
Fixed expressions
If we look at a corpus of academic texts, we see that certain chunks of language occur .very
frequently in spoken and written contexts. This unit looks at some of the most useful ones.
40 AcodemicVocobulory in Use
Ió.r Choose one of the expressions in A to fill in the missing words in this feedback to a student
from oue of her teachers.
16.2 Use the words in the box to form eight different phrases that arc useful for academic
I ó.3 From the point of view of meaning, which expression in each set doesn't belong and why?
f. in general, by means of which, as a rule, on the whole
2 as rcgards X, as far as X is concerned, with the exception of X, with respect to X
3 as a whole, in addition to, for the most part, in geneial
16.4 Choose the best expression to complete each sentence.