Second Draft 

Initiating my own business will be my highest accomplishment. I want to be 

successful by myself. Though I can take over my family business, it is not my 
preference. I will be more proud if I earn income from my own business. After I 
know what I want to do in the future, I make a research about faculty that can help 
me achieve my goal. Finally, I get the answer for my career: BBA Faculty at 
Chulalongkorn University.  
To enroll in this faculty, I have to be very hard working. I know that this will 
be a tough decision for me but I am a determined person. Once I set a goal I will do 
my best to achieve that goal. In Grade 10, I participated in a school student market. 
For the first time, my goal was not about getting a lot of profits. My goal was to 
learn something new, get new experience, and adapt to my life. Personally, I really 
achieved this goal because I realized that all the theories that I have learned are 
just a small piece of real life situations. I think practical experience is the most 
important thing for me to be successful. 
However, there is still a big obstacle in my way to this faculty. I have to 
improve one of my skills, time management. My time management skill was quite 
bad. Now, I have come up with a solution, setting a schedule that tells me when 
and what to do things. After I tried this solution, my time is used more productively 
, and, moreover, I still have some time to rest. 
I also have some work experiences. I once worked in my family company as 
a full-time worker for four months. At that time, I was like a real worker in the 
company. I had to be on time, did hard and tough work as other workers, and also 
got paid too. Honestly, that was boring and tiring four months for me but there 
were still good things inside of it. I learned that real life work is not easy as I always 
think. Even how boring and tiring the work is, I can do nothing, just accepting and 
dealing with it. Now, I realize that those months are priceless experiences.  
During four years in this university, I plan to start my own business whether 
it will be successful or not. I just want to gain some real life experiences before I 
graduate and I will apply those experiences to be my guidance in the future. In 
other words, I don’t want to graduate without having any experiences.