Mohammad Nur Newaz Oyon

ID: 20-42788-1
English Writing Skills And Communications [B]

Date: 10 October 2020

Class Task: My Self

My name is Md. Nur Newaz Oyon. I am 21 years old. i am first child of my parents and i have a young
sister. i have a small family. I am interested in computer, music sport and fantasy literature computers
first appeared in my life. I am a BBA student in AIUB. I am from Rajshahi. I completed my SCC from
Natore Govt. Boys High school and my HSC from Dhaka Commerce College. This is my 3rd semester. In
future, I want to do a job in a Private or Govt. Bank. In free time, i like to play chess. I am a professional
chess player. My hobby is playing chess, guitar, Painting & singing. My aim in life is become a ACCA
member. I like very much to tell jokes to my friends while being in the fun time. I aa person who is
positive about every aspect of life. There are many things I like to do. to see , and to experience, I like
read, I like to write.

Life in the Time of Corona

COVIT-19(coronavirus) has affected day to day life is slowing down the global economy. Tish pandemic

has affected thousands of peoples, who are either sick or are being killed due to the spread of this

disease. the infection is fever, cold cough, bone pain and breathing problems. This virus is spreading

exponentially region wise.

What I think about more than is good for my mental health is the millions whose lives are turned upside

down with the lockdown. My gratitude for all I have is a constant reminder of all that has been taken

away, albeit temporarily, from countless people of my city, my country.

Social distancing is the fundamental prevention against the coronavirus. All across the world, in many

countries, some form of a lockdown is in implementation. Human beings on their own do not have the

emotional or physical control to maintain distance from one another, even if it is to keep themselves or

others safe. Social distancing in Pakistan did not happen because it was the best thing to do. It
happened because it was made mandatory through a prime ministerial order. Well i was in Mirpur and

continuing my varsity and suddenly cover-19 spread un our country and government declared general

holidays. So i came back to my home town. After some days covid 19 affected dangerously in our

country and whole county lock downed. In Bangladesh corona situation is very bad. Because in locked

down situation many people couldn't effort food, masks. Because they haven't money. Everyone stay in

home. many people left their jobs, many business was going to loss profit. that's why they shut down

their business. Poor people couldn't effort food. for example, rickshaw wala count get any passenger,

Local shops closed because anyone couldn't get out from home. We don't know how to control the

corona situation. It was easy for some days but after few months it become boring. i had nothing to do

and my education also affected. I had to class in online during lock down and even I have given exam in

online. Its 4 months of lockdown and still continuing. we are staying at home and keeping us safe. soon

everything will be fine I hope and I'm for join my varsity again.

Task 1: Identifying non academic Features:

Features Text A Text B

Verb Contraction It's, that's None

Direct questions Do you know? Did you know? None

Personal Pronoun I, You, They, None

Colloquial Language & phrasal Cool, get, like, None
verbs

Emotive language sadly Possibly, Commonly.

Non-specific language Lots of things, something A huge

Abbreviations etc., NGO, e.g None

Punctuation Kid, Must, eh! None

Sentence fragments Something Else, Not bad None

Task 2: Rewriting sentences in cautius Language

1. Jute cultivation is becoming unpopular among farmers.

- Reports suggest that jute cultivation is becoming unpopular among some farmers.

2. Telemedicine does not work in rural areas.

- It is possible to able telemedicine dose work in some rural areas
3. Urban young women prefer not to wear sarees
- It is commonly proved that every urban young women prefer to do wear sarees.
4. Microcredit has transformed the lives of all women in rural and urban areas.
- There is an assumption that Microcredit has not transformed the lives of all women in
rural and urban areas.

Task 3: Activity 4. Developing An Academic Style

According to me cricket is the most popular game in Bangladesh nowadays. Its popularity is going up
more and more among people of all ages. You’d be surprised to see that a lot of kids love to watch
cricket matches in the stadium. They support the Bangladeshi team waving the national flag. It’s
amazing! Don’t you think so? There’re stadiums in almost all the district towns but not many of them
are of international standard. A few of them like Sheikh Abu Naser Stadium, Zahur Ahmed Chowdhury
Stadium etc. are used as international venues. I think the government’s patronising cricket a lot but it
needs to promote other games as well. If the government supports other games—football and Ha Du-
Du, they will regain their past glory.

Re write the passage:

Task B

Cricket is the most popular game in Bangladesh recently. It is popularity going up an increasing number
among people of all ages. Children love to watch cricket matches in the stadium. They support the
Bangladeshi team waving the national flag. Cricket is an amazing game. There is stadium in almost all
district towns but not many of them are of international standard. A few of them like sheikh Abu Nasser
Stadium, Zahur Ahmed Chowdhury stadium are used as international venues. The government is
patronizing cricket significantly but it needs to promote other games as well. If the government supports
other games football and Ha-Du-Du, they will regain their past glory.

Task 4: Rewrite sentence in Academic Style

Task B

Replacing Informal Words with Academic Vocabulary: Short Answer Exercise.

1. It is well known that, pollution in Hong Kong is a serious problem that needs immediate attention.

2. It is difficult to earn a high score on the public examinations in Hong Kong.

3. Mainland mothers coming to Hong Kong to give birth has been a hot topic in recent years.

4. Finance consultants make a good salary and large yearly bonuses

5. The problem of racism is becoming worse.

6. The researcher received a great deal of data through surveys, interviews and focus groups.

7. Shopping and eating are two major reasons people from around the world flock to Hong Kong.

8. Many people in China are poor and have never had the opportunity to travel in or outside of their
country.

9. Amount of food is wasted in Hong Kong every day.

10. Recent research reveals that an increasing number Hong Kongers are moving back to Hong Kong
from Canada

Task 5: Rewriting sentences making them objective and Impersonal

1. Students all got fantastic grades in the final examination.

2. The man got another job.

3. Government has made considerable progress in the garments sector.

4. It is known about the plan already

Task 6 : Rewriting Text precisely to make it academic

As part of a plan to make the country more technological, in April 2014: Digital bus service launched in

the Farmgate area of Dhaka by Bangladesh Road Transport Corporation (BRTC, 20 buses on Motijheel-

Uttara route equipped with 3G wireless routers, some of the buses on bus routes in the capital have been

fitted with Wi-Fi so that people on the bus can access the internet free of charge on their devices during

their journeys. An experimental initiative that supports the Government’s pledge to build a ‘Digital

Bangladesh’. It will be expanded to other parts of the country if successful.

Class work:

Outline

Introduction:

Thesis statement: child labours refers to the employment of children at regular or sustained labour.

Body paragraph 1:

main idea: Child labour refers to the exploitation of children through any form of work that deprives
children of their childhood.
Examples: Child labour in agriculture, Child labour and armed conflict,

Conclusion

Child Labour

MIND MAP

Slavery

Crime Poor

Child Labour

Dangero
Abuse us

Law
 Child labour

Introduction: The problem child labour has got deep social and economic implication. Although, child is
the father of the man for whom ostensibly all the great modern shrines are put. Industries have millions
of sad faces mainly because child child labour is prevalent. child labours refers to the employment of
children at regular or sustained labour. these child works present a sad picture of our modern
industrialism. Child labour refers to the exploitation of children through any form of work that deprives
children of their childhood. Interferes with their ability to attend regular school, and so mentally,
physically socially or morally harmful.

Child labour refers to the employment of children at regular or sustained labour. In our Bangladesh most
of the people are poor and they give their children for work without sending them school. Sometimes
they work in such places which is dangerous for children. Even though they work there and earn money
for their livings. Sometimes they involve with some illegal work like drag, etc. Child labour also illegal in
our country. Child labour breaks law. The type of child labour. Child labour in agriculture, Child
labour and armed conflict, Commercial sexual exploitation of children, Child labour and
domestic work, Migration and child labour, Resources on migration and child labour. Resources
on migration and child labour, Mining and quarrying, Safe work for youth,Trafficking in children.
After age of 14 they can work but after school. Owners abuse them with heavy work and also girl's
children face some difficulties.

Task 7: Writing Introduction with thesis statement

Impact of global warming on developing countries like Bangladesh

Introduction:
Global warming is defined as the increase in the average temperature of the earth due to the
accumulation of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere. Africa, small islands and Asian mega deltas are
regions that are likely to be especially affected by future climate change & also affected economic
situation. Global warming also change environment pollution. For this reason, people also suffers health
hazards & also damages crops, although there are natural causes, global warming mainly stems from
the excessive amount of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere and ineffective waste disposal systems.
Class Task:
1. Impact of Social Media on the Society and Culture of Bangladesh:

Introduction: Social networking has changed the way people interact with each other forever. Also there
are some positive & negative effects with include identity theft, cyber, bullying, decreased socially
interaction in real life, and social isolation increase in mobile social networking could possible cause
future health problem. Social media has a huge impact on individuals and their lives. While some
impacts can be positive, social media has been shown to negatively affect things like our moods and
stress levels. Addiction is caused by social media

Social media may be being to have a negative impact on other areas of life. one of the negative effects
of social media on social interaction is false same of conductivity. sometimes we witness a group of
friend gather together but barely talking with each other or everyone is busy looking of their
smartphone rather than speaking to their friend which are in front of them in society people can make
news by the social media. because of that in society they have problem. teen age can have effected but
social media. they are using many things on social media because of that. they join different type of
things. in society it very harmful.

The cause beings with focusing on the effects social media on individual and society at the political level
then moved on to discuss it effects on the societal cultural and commercial level. the future of social
media and possible growth in it. impact on both societies. the biggest impact of social media at the
political level. it played vital role in spreading the message outside of the other countries. they transfer
important information to other country. some people connect with other country they transfer sacred
to the other country. the effects of social media on society is very harmful for us.

Conclusion: In conclusion, social media is and will continue to be, harmful, unless something is done
about it. The power it has over people is dangerous and often goes unnoticed. People should care
because if not addressed, or taken care, of social media could cause national and international problem.
Social media stunts interpersonal growth and increases narcissism in many internet users. Even if the
user is not psychologically affected by social media, they are still in danger. Nobody is immune to the
harmful side effects social media including ident theft, stalkers, or hackers, social networking allows
hoaxes and false information to cause widespread chaos. If there are no regulations or limitations on
social media, the repercussions will accumulate. people need to change the destructive patterns of
social media use before it destroys society.
Task 8: Using Cohesive devices

Baul Song

Baul song, a form of folk music, has had a tremendous influence on the music of Bangladesh. Bauls use
very simple words, 1. more importantly they express profound thoughts about life, creation, death and
human emotions. They 2.also use very simple musical instruments. Among the Bauls, Fakir Lalan Shah is
the most prominent figure. He was a mystic poet, saint and a reformer, but 3. although he was the
composer and singer of many famous Baul songs now known as Lalangeeti. Lalan’s song was about the
philosophy of spirituality, love and wisdom which attracted many people. Rabindranath Tagore, 4. also
was directly influenced by Lalan’s ideals. 5.Finally it can be said that 6. however urbanisation and
westernisation have disrupted the easy lifestyle of the Bauls, they still charm us with simple lyrics,
melodious tunes and the deep inner thoughts of their songs.

Activity 1

Bangladeshi scientists decoded the genome of the jute plant opening up a new horizon in the Topic

sentence

development of the variety of the golden fibre of Bangladesh. Hawaii-based Bangladeshi scientist
Professor Maqsudul Alam led a group of Bangladeshi researchers to this landmark discovery. Dr. Alam
said of this research, “This is a great accomplishment not only for Bangladesh but for the whole world”.
The fungus known as Macrophominaphaseolina is responsible for 500 plant diseases across the world.
Not only jute but many other plants such as soybean, cotton, tobacco and maize are affected by this
dangerous fungus. Now, after the successful sequencing of jute fibre by the
Bangladeshi researchers, length, quality as well as colour and strength of jute fibre will be better.

Supporting sentence The successful sequencing of jute genome is a major achievement for Bangladesh

Concluding sentence
Activity 2

Environmental problems in Bangladesh: River pollution (a) Moreover, groups and individuals have found
ways to generate income by illegally constructing houses and factories along the Buriganga. (b) The river
is seriously afflicted by pollution. (c) As a result, the Buriganga River is dying biologically and
hydrologically. (d) There are mainly three types of discharges – industrial discharge, boat fuel discharge
and household garbage. (e) These threats stem from discharging industrial wastes and household
garbage into the river. (f) While all the rivers of Bangladesh are threatened by climate change, the
Buriganga in particular is struggling against more direct human threats

order 1 2 3 4 5 6
sentence d b e f a c

Women’s empowerment in Bangladesh

A

In contrast to their striking gains in economic opportunities, Bangladeshi women in general have not
done very well with respect to participation in national politics. Only 17 women contested and won
general seats in the last parliamentary election in 2008 – and this is the highest figure to date.

As Bangladesh turns 40, improvements in women’s wellbeing and increased participation are some of
the most significant gains. Various economic and social development indicators show that in the past 20
years, Bangladesh has made good progress in increasing women’s access to some important sectors.

Like the civic opportunity sector, Bangladesh does not have much to celebrate in terms of genderrelated
human development compared to many competitor countries. However, the pace of change merits
attention as Bangladesh has come to this point from a very low starting point. There have been rapid
positive changes in Bangladeshi women’s health and education opportunities.

A key area where the situation for women in Bangladesh has improved significantly is economic
participation. One interesting recent development has been the sharp increase in women’s employment
wage which has risen 4.3 percent between 2000 and 2005. Another factor that has promoted women’s
economic development has been microcredit. Bangladeshi women’s collective participation in
microfinance programmes has been unprecedented. Moreover, over two million women are employed
in the garments manufacturing sector
P1 B P2 D P3 a P4 c