SJPHS YEAR 10 ASSESSMENT TASK – STUDENT SELF-ASSESSMENT

Name:
Class:
Teacher:

1. Complete the following self-assessment table using the 1-3 rating scale to assist your self-assessment of your narrative.

Criteria for Self-Assessment 1 2 3

Structure
The narrative has a clear orientation that introduces the main character(s), establishes setting and time.
The narrative contains an easily identified complication that the main character must overcome.
The narrative has a clear sequence of events that follow from the character’s attempts to overcome the complication.
The narrative contains a clear resolution.
The narrative has a clear conclusion.
Language & Characterisation
The language in the story engages the reader through using well-chosen adjectives, verbs and adverbs.
The writer uses figurative devices such as to communicate their ideas in interesting ways.
The characters in the narrative use dialogue that communicates their personality characteristics and emotions.
Grammar, Spelling & Punctuation
The narrative contains correct spelling – except where colloquial or slang language have been used for stylistic
purposes.
Dialogue is correctly punctuated and formatted.
Punctuation has been used correctly to create sentences and paragraphs.

1 = Requiring Improvement
2 = Satisfactory
3 = Confident

2. Select THREE criteria points from the Criteria for Self-Assessment that you have identified as ‘Requiring Improvement’.
Using the tables below, explain:
a. What is the selected Criteria Point?
b. Provide a 1-2 sentence example from your DRAFT that you will edit and revise to improve its quality.
c. Suggest ONE way the sentence you have selected could be revised and edited so that it is improved.

What is the selected Criteria Point?

Example from DRAFT narrative:

How can it be improved?

 SJPHS YEAR 10 ASSESSMENT TASK – STUDENT SELF-ASSESSMENT

Name:
Class:
Teacher:

What is the selected Criteria Point?

Example from DRAFT narrative:

How can it be improved?

What is the selected Criteria Point?

Example from DRAFT narrative:

How can it be improved?

ATTACH THIS SELF-ASSESSMENT TO THE FINAL COPY OF YOUR ASSESSMENT FOR MARKING