BICOL STATE COLLEGE OF APPLIED SCIENCES AND TECHNOLOGY

Peñafrancia Avenue, Naga City

College of Education
Graduate Studies
S/Y 2020-2021

Table for Comments and Suggestions

Comments and Suggestions Compliance

1. Remove “Camera” and change to Title change to “Mobile CCTV System Installation
“system” in the title. Workstation”
2. In Chapter 1, discuss more in the area of
the strand before going to the k-12
3. Add separate paragraph to discuss
significance of the study before going to
the objectives of the study
4. Make no. 1 objective the general
objective of the study. First objective will now
be: a. develop design specification of analog
mobile CCTV system; b. determine the steps
in the construction and assembly of the
workstation; c. evaluate acceptability of the
workstation as to its : a) functionality b)
durability c) safety d) ease of operation

And in every indicator, there should be three

statements.
5. The word “analog” should be used in the
study
6. Add 3 more number of respondents for
the experts, students, professional electrical
teachers, and CCTV Installer
7. Include indicators for acceptability,
functionality, durability, and safety in the
definition of terms and remove “portable”.
Add also “mobile CCTV system”
8. Add the following topics in review of
related literature and study: a)
Instructional devices in TLE; b) CCTV
System
9. Focus on what is available now and in a
separate paragraph, what is different
from your study in the synthesis of the
art
10. Write in double space the reference
11. In materials/tools and equipment,
remove IP; Uses should be used in the
study and add coaxial cable
12. Add more methodology and R&D process
steps.