Pagsusuri ng isang salin
Salin ni Rosaline C. Tendenilla
HEAVEN’S GROCERY STORE
Ron DeMarco and friend 1990
Orihinal
1 I was walking down life’s high way a long
time ago;
2 One dat, I saw a sign that read: “Heaven’s
Grocery Store.”
3 As I got a little closer, the door came open
wide;
4 But when I came to myself, I was standing
inside.
5 I saw hosts of angel; they were standing
everywhere.
6 One handed me a basket and said, “My
child, shop with care.”
7 Everything a Christian needed was in the
grocery store.
8 And all you couldn’t carry, you could come
back the next day.
9 First, I got PATIENCE. LOVE was on the
same row.
1 Further down was UNDERSTANDINGyou
0 need that everywhere you go.
1 I got a box or two of WISDOM; a bag or two
1 of FAITH.
1 I couldn’t miss the HOLY GHOST for it was
2 all over the place
1 I stopped to get some STRENGTH and
3 COURAGE to hel me run the race.
1 But when my basket was getting full, I
4 remembered I needed some GRACE.
1 I didn’t forget SALVATION, for salvation
5 was free.
1 So I tried to get enough of that to save both
6 you and me.
1 Then I started up the counter to pay the
7 grocery bill.
1 For I thought I had everything to do my
8 MASTER’S will.
1 As I went up the aisle, I saw PRAYER and
9 had to put it in.
2 For I knew when I stepped outside, I would
0 right into sin.
2 PEACE and JOY were plentiful, they were
1 on the last shelf
Salin
Landas ng buhay tinatahak-tahak sa
matagal na ring panahon;
Isang araw, tumambad sa paningin ang
karatulang “Heaven’s Grocery Store.”
Habang papalapit ako roo’y bumakas ang
pinto at nag-aaya;
Nang maalimpungatan na’y, aba, sa loob
nakapasok na pala.
Mga angel sumalubong; sa paligid
nakatayo’t nakatingin.
Lalagyan ng basket inabutan ako’t
nagwikang: “Anak, sa pagpili, ingat lang.”
Lahat ng kailangan ng isang Kristyano, sa
tindahang ito matatagpuan.
At kung marami nang dala-dala’y
makababalik pa kinabukasan.
Unang pili ko’y PASENSYA. PAG_IBIG doon
din nakahilera.
Sa dakong ibaba’y PAG-UNAWA, kailangan
ito saanman magpunta.
Umabot ako ng TALINO’T
PANANAMPALATAYA – tigalawa pa nga.
ESPIRITU SANTO di puwedeng kalimutan;
naroon ito kahit saan.
TAPANG at LAKAS ang kailangan sa bawat
pagsubok na daraanan.
Lalagyan ko’y napupuno na; naalala ko ang
GRASYA, kailangan ko pala.
Ang KALIGTASAN di ko kinalimutan,
siyempre pa libre lang naman.
Anupa’t humakot nang sapat upang ikaw at
ako’y tiyak na maligtas.
At sa wakas, pamimili’y natapos din, kahera
ngayon ay haharapin.
Wari ko ba’y handing-handa nang isagawa;
utos ng Diyos na Maylikha.
DASALING nakita isinama na rin, habang
pumipila at patingin-tingin.
Sapagkat alam kong paglabas sa groseri,
kasalanang masalubong yayakaping muli.
KAPAYAPAAN at TUWA, ang dami-dami, sa
dulong lalagyanan doon ako pumili.
2 SONG and PRAISES were hanging near,
2 so I just helped myself.
2 Then I said to the Angel, “How much do I
3 owe”?
2 The angel smiled and said, “Just take them
4 everywhere you go.”
2 Again, I politely asked, “How much do I
5 really owe?”
2 The Angel smiled again and said, “My
6 Child, Jesus Paid Your Bill A Long Time
Ago.”
Naglambitin sa malapit, mga PAPURI at
AWIT na aking sinungkit.
Kaherang angel napagtanungan, “Magkano
na kaya ang aking babayaran?”
Napangiti ito, sabay sabing: “Sige lang,
basta ba dala-dala mo saan ka man
patungo”.
Muli, magalang kong tinanong, “Magkano
nap o bang talaga ang sagutin ko riyan?”
“Anak, ang lahat ng iyong utang ay matagal
nang bayad ng Poong Hesukristo Tanging
Tagapagligtas.”

 Tingnan kung ang diwa ng salin ay tulad ng diwa ng orihinal

Ang ibig sabihin nito, baka –
 May nadagdag na diwa
 May nabawas na diwa
 May maling diwa
 Kung may malabong diwa – Malabo ang diwa kung nagkakaroon ng higit sa isang
kahulugan.
 Kalabuang leksikal – isa pa ring katotohanan na sa alinmang wika ay napakaraming
salita ang nakakargahan ng higit sa isang kahulugan
 Kalabuang istruktural
 Kung may salitang malalim – kailangan pag-aralan ng tagapagsalin ang antas ng
kakayahan ng mga mambabasa ng isinaling teksto
 Kung may masalimuot na balangkas ng pangungusao – ang uri ng mga pangungusap
ay kailangan iangkop sa antas ng kakayahan ng gagamit ng salin
 Kung may salitang lipas o sinauna (archaic)
 Kung natural o idyomatiko ang kanyang salin at hindi halatang salin

Tanungin:
 May nadagdag bang diwa?
 May nabawas bang diwa?
 May Malabo bang diwa? Walang diwa?